"K" NA MALOOM THA

by k.shael on May 07, 2008, 11:51:54 AM
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AAO DOSTO TUMHE APNI DAASTAAN SUNAYE....
NA MALOOM THA HAME....
GAIRO KO CHALE THE APNA BANANE KHUD
SE BHI GAIR HOKAR CHALE AAYENGE,
GAYE THE UNHE SAHARA DENE KYA PATA THA
KHUD BHI SAHARE KO MOHTAAJ HO JAYENGE
DE DI KHUSHIYAAN UNHE SAARI....
NAHI MALOOM THA KHUD AANSOON KE GULAAM HO JAYENGE
SOCHA THA ZINDAGI KI RAAH MEIN UNKA SAATH
NIBHAYENGE....
NA MALOOM THA KHUD KO HI RAAH MEIN BHATKA PAYENGE
BY. K.SHAEL

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«Reply #1 on: May 07, 2008, 01:38:45 PM »
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K na maloom tha Shael ji ...aap itna accha likhoge.....

bahut khoob  Applause
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«Reply #2 on: May 16, 2008, 11:50:42 AM »
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THANX SOOOOOO MUCH,
ROZA JI....
BY. K.SHAEL
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«Reply #3 on: May 16, 2008, 12:19:41 PM »
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k.shael

Excellent ! Superb ! Applause

Ek geet yaad aaya mujhe aap ki is poem par !

JO HUMNE DAASTAN APNI SUNAYI
AAP KYUN ROYE....
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«Reply #4 on: August 02, 2008, 03:42:49 PM »
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AAO DOSTO TUMHE APNI DAASTAAN SUNAYE....
NA MALOOM THA HAME....
GAIRO KO CHALE THE APNA BANANE KHUD
SE BHI GAIR HOKAR CHALE AAYENGE,
GAYE THE UNHE SAHARA DENE KYA PATA THA
KHUD BHI SAHARE KO MOHTAAJ HO JAYENGE
DE DI KHUSHIYAAN UNHE SAARI....
NAHI MALOOM THA KHUD AANSOON KE GULAAM HO JAYENGE
SOCHA THA ZINDAGI KI RAAH MEIN UNKA SAATH
NIBHAYENGE....
NA MALOOM THA KHUD KO HI RAAH MEIN BHATKA PAYENGE
BY. K.SHAEL
aur badhiya..ek purana panna ultaya,,waqaee khoob Likha Hai,,
dard k ahesaas bhi hai Isme..kaafi achchhi lines hai
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«Reply #5 on: August 02, 2008, 03:46:37 PM »
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thanx raza bhai...bahoot khoob dhoondha aapne..
bahoot achchi rachna.. Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: August 02, 2008, 04:26:33 PM »
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thanx raza bhai...bahoot khoob dhoondha aapne..
bahoot achchi rachna.. Applause Applause

(I Think ) Sanjeev bhai..Insha allah Waqt Milte Hi aap ke sub kalaam padhne ka hai..aapka naam Meri Hit LIst Me Hai,,Jinke Puraane Kalaam Ko Muje 100 % Padhne Ka Hai...dost 
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«Reply #7 on: August 02, 2008, 05:39:20 PM »
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THANX ASHRAF
& SANJEEV BROTHER,
BY. K.SHAEL
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«Reply #8 on: August 04, 2008, 11:23:05 AM »
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bohut khoob shally
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«Reply #9 on: August 04, 2008, 11:52:16 AM »
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(I Think ) Sanjeev bhai..Insha allah Waqt Milte Hi aap ke sub kalaam padhne ka hai..aapka naam Meri Hit LIst Me Hai,,Jinke Puraane Kalaam Ko Muje 100 % Padhne Ka Hai...dost 

jaroor raza bhai...jaroor padhiyaga....lekin khuda na kare aapko maayusi ho kyonki main itna achcha nahi likh paata...fir bhi khushi hui aapne is layak to samjha...
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«Reply #10 on: August 04, 2008, 12:51:15 PM »
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THANX,KAUSHIK
& SANJEEV BROTHER YE KYA KEH RAHE
HAI AAP, AAP BAHUT AACHA LIKHTE HO
AUR YE KYUN KAHA KI MAYOOSI HOGI,KHUD
KO PEHCHANIYE BROTHER,
BY. K.SHAEL
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«Reply #11 on: August 04, 2008, 01:08:12 PM »
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bahut hi aacha laikha hai aap ne shael ji
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kuch lines likh raha hu
galtio ko maaf ker dena plz



Paaya tha ek saath sirf tera,
Use bhi hum gawa baithe,

Chale the sirf ek saath tare,
Lakin haalat ko wo gawara na tha,

Sahara bane jab bhi tum mara,
Ek mera hi haath nahi utha tha,

Aanshu ponche jab bhi tum ne mare,
Main hi tera pyar samaj na paaya tha,

Banaya tha tum ne sirf aapna mujhe,
Ek main hi tera na ban paaya tha,

Pyaar to tumne dil se kiya tha bahut,
Main hi uss pyaar ko samaj na paaya tha,

Main hi uss pyaar ko samaj na paaya tha........




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«Reply #12 on: August 04, 2008, 01:21:49 PM »
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THANX BAADAL,
& U ALSO WRITE SO NICE,
BY. K.SHAEL
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«Reply #13 on: August 04, 2008, 02:35:14 PM »
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thanx a lot shael ji






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«Reply #14 on: August 04, 2008, 09:59:35 PM »
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nic elines shally and Good one Baadal ji!!
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