"apne chehre pe pada hai jabse"

by aaina on July 04, 2009, 02:33:40 AM
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«Reply #15 on: July 05, 2009, 10:30:04 AM »
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Uski baqa ke bandhano mai bandhne lage
To Hum hawaao.n se baat karne lage

Apne chehre pe pada hai jabse naam mera
Wo aaine se ghabrane lage jhijhakne lage

Jo lafz tehzeebo.n ki giraft mai thay
Wo aap janaab ki hado.n se guzarne lage

Ye aansu jo ter rukhsaar pe dhale aate hain
Wo mere dil ki zameen.n ko tur karne lage

Jo tune laashoor mai sochen ho.nge
Wo mere labo.n pe khud ba khud machlne lage


aaina ji
bahut khub ghazal likhi hai
dhair sari daad kabool karain
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«Reply #16 on: July 05, 2009, 10:32:38 AM »
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aaina ji
bahut khub ghazal likhi hai
dhair sari daad kabool karain

bhut bhut shukriya nira ji
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«Reply #17 on: July 05, 2009, 11:07:22 AM »
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Bahot bahot khoob likha hai Aslam ji,Mashallah khumaar se bhare hain ashaar, hamesha aapki ghazalon me nayapan aur sher saare naye hote hain,tahe dil se daad kubool karen

zarra nawaazi hai bro thnxx so much is hosla afzaaii ke liyn
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«Reply #18 on: July 05, 2009, 11:11:12 AM »
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Bahoot Khoob Aslam ji.. Bahoot Khoob!
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«Reply #19 on: July 05, 2009, 11:16:31 AM »
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Bahoot Khoob Aslam ji.. Bahoot Khoob!

thnxxx so much sophi ji
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«Reply #20 on: July 05, 2009, 11:32:52 AM »
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Bahut khoob Aslam Ji...

Ek koshish hamari taraf se...


Kehte the jo baatein wo aayine ko saamne rakhke,
Wo baatien aakhon ke samundar mein bahane lage hai,
iqraar-e-mohabbat karein na karein ye aur baat hai,
unki khamoshiyo ko khud hum zubaan banake gungunane lage...
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«Reply #21 on: July 05, 2009, 03:39:45 PM »
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Bahut khoob Aslam Ji...

Ek koshish hamari taraf se...


Kehte the jo baatein wo aayine ko saamne rakhke,
Wo baatien aakhon ke samundar mein bahane lage hai,
iqraar-e-mohabbat karein na karein ye aur baat hai,
unki khamoshiyo ko khud hum zubaan banake gungunane lage...


Bohot Khoob Angel
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«Reply #22 on: July 05, 2009, 03:41:21 PM »
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Uski baqa ke bandhano mai bandhne lage
To Hum hawaao.n se baat karne lage

Apne chehre pe pada hai jabse naam mera
Wo aaine se ghabrane lage jhijhakne lage

Jo lafz tehzeebo.n ki giraft mai thay
Wo aap janaab ki hado.n se guzarne lage

Ye aansu jo ter rukhsaar pe dhale aate hain
Wo mere dil ki zameen.n ko tur karne lage

Jo tune laashoor mai sochen ho.nge
Wo mere labo.n pe khud ba khud machlne lage


Aslam Ji,

Mashallah.......Bohot umdah ghazal hai.....Bohot bohot khoob  Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #23 on: July 05, 2009, 03:42:39 PM »
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Beautiful lines Angel ji,bahu khoob. Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #24 on: July 06, 2009, 02:39:56 AM »
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Bahut khoob Aslam Ji...

Ek koshish hamari taraf se...


Kehte the jo baatein wo aayine ko saamne rakhke,
Wo baatien aakhon ke samundar mein bahane lage hai,
iqraar-e-mohabbat karein na karein ye aur baat hai,
unki khamoshiyo ko khud hum zubaan banake gungunane lage...

thnxxx angel bhut acha likha hai kya kehne very nice]/b]
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«Reply #25 on: July 06, 2009, 02:41:43 AM »
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Aslam Ji,

Mashallah.......Bohot umdah ghazal hai.....Bohot bohot khoob  Applause Applause Applause


bhut bhut shukriya talat
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«Reply #26 on: July 08, 2009, 02:38:42 AM »
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wah bahot khoob aaina ji and Nice lines Angel!!!
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