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by _Vicky_ on September 18, 2006, 06:42:48 PM
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«Reply #15 on: September 26, 2006, 05:03:43 PM »
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Great bahut khoob
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mohsin akhter
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«Reply #16 on: September 26, 2006, 05:06:16 PM »
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Mujhko dekhna aur sarmana tera.......
kayamat dhata hai muskurana tera.........
Sitaro ki baat jo aap ker dete ho.........
Khud chand bhi ban jata hai deewana tera........

Is tarah sab ko uljha leti ho apni adao main.....
Le aati ho sabko mohabbat ki raho main........
Tujhe to yaad bhi na hoga sanam..........
Tere sath hi tha bahut pahle afsana mera.........
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«Reply #17 on: September 27, 2006, 11:58:35 AM »
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wonderful mohsin......

yeh dil mera masoom aur us per afsaana tera
is dil ko sab yaad hai aaj bhi meri gali mein aana tera

karna ishaare woh chupke chupke se
aur parde ke picche fir chip jaana mera

kai likhe khat ya kuch ankahi si baate
aaj bhi mujhe yaad hai chand dekhne ke bahaane chat per aana tera

kaise bhulega yeh dil ab pyaar se woh meheke hue din raat apne
mere ungliyuon ko dupate ke saath khelta dekh kar jal jaana tera!!
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«Reply #18 on: September 27, 2006, 12:14:31 PM »
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bahoot khoob Vicky Ranju MA and BS ji....
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mohsin akhter
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«Reply #19 on: September 27, 2006, 04:48:44 PM »
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sukriya ranjana ji magar aap bhi kam nahi
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_Vicky_
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«Reply #20 on: September 27, 2006, 05:00:23 PM »
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shukriya MOHSIN BHAI aur POOJA JI....

RANJANA aur MOHSIN BHAI aapne bahut khubsoorat
likha hai...... bahut khoob........
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«Reply #21 on: September 29, 2006, 04:47:38 PM »
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Tumhen kya batayen...........!!!!!!!

Tumhari mohabbat me har pal, jaise mom se jalte hain,
aur koi chhoo bhi le tumhen to, har us cheez se jalte hain......

par kaise jalun khuda se, jisne haaton se tumhen banaya hai,
taraash ke tumhare jism ko, apni kudrat se ise sajaya hai........

tumhen banaane ke baad wo bhi, tum par fida hua hi hoga,
apni is khubsoorat rachna pe, use thoda gumaan to hua hi hoga.....

sochta hoon gar khuda ki khudaai na hoti, to tu bhi na hota,
na tum hoti yahan, aur na main tumhari zulfon tale soya hota..........!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #22 on: September 30, 2006, 08:04:01 PM »
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Tumhen kya batayen...........!!!!!!!

Tumhari mohabbat me har pal, jaise mom se jalte hain,
aur koi chhoo bhi le tumhen to, har us cheez se jalte hain......

par kaise jalun khuda se, jisne haaton se tumhen banaya hai,
taraash ke tumhare jism ko, apni kudrat se ise sajaya hai........

tumhen banaane ke baad wo bhi, tum par fida hua hi hoga,
apni is khubsoorat rachna pe, use thoda gumaan to hua hi hoga.....

sochta hoon gar khuda ki khudaai na hoti, to tu bhi na hota,
na tum hoti yahan, aur na main tumhari zulfon tale soya hota..........!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


wah vicky ji bahut hi khoobsurat jalan........ superb.......
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«Reply #23 on: October 03, 2006, 09:38:35 AM »
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shukriya GESU JI...... aap bhi likhti to is tahreed ki shobha badh jati............
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«Reply #24 on: October 07, 2006, 02:31:02 PM »
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Kaali chunri, kaali zulfen aur kala rang kadaai ka,
JALATA hai dil ko mere, mehendi ka rang kalaai ka.......

payal-kangan-bindiya teri, chain curaaye raaton ko,
yaa-khuda koi bahaana nikal aaye kareeb aane ka.......

abhi aaye abhi baithe, ek nigaah hi mujh pe dali thi,
matlab unka saaf tha, shayad baahon me meri aane ka.....

khoob samjhaya khud ko, dil ke bahak jane de baad,
majboor kar jata hai mujhko, gulaabi rang rukhsaaro ka......!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #25 on: October 07, 2006, 03:40:05 PM »
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Wah....!!!
vicky jee ..Behad Khubsurat likha hai......!!!!!
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«Reply #26 on: October 07, 2006, 10:39:35 PM »
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Kaali chunri, kaali zulfen aur kala rang kadaai ka,
JALATA hai dil ko mere, mehendi ka rang kalaai ka.......

payal-kangan-bindiya teri, chain curaaye raaton ko,
yaa-khuda koi bahaana nikal aaye kareeb aane ka.......

abhi aaye abhi baithe, ek nigaah hi mujh pe dali thi,
matlab unka saaf tha, shayad baahon me meri aane ka.....

khoob samjhaya khud ko, dil ke bahak jane de baad,
majboor kar jata hai mujhko, gulaabi rang rukhsaaro ka......!!!!!!!!


wah wah vicky bahut khoob .......wonderful ....


chanke jab mere kangana payal
dil mein unke ajab si halchal si hui
samet liya piya ne bahaon mein
aaj yah kya nazaro mein baat hui

kabhi sata ke kabhi mana ke
sajana  ki cherkhaani se behaal hui  
udi neendiya in aankho ki
hai gajab mere jeeya ki halat aaj hui

preet mein rang gaya mera tan mann
unke pyaar ki aise lagan lagi
bhayi piya ki main diwaani
meri preet  aaj  suhaagan hui  !!
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«Reply #27 on: October 07, 2006, 11:42:07 PM »
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Wonderfull Vicky....gesu and ranju

Hai ek Khalish see Seene me.....
Toh Dil Armaan jalata kyu hai......

Bebas hoon me ab agar.......
Toh Sansaar mahobbat se Dil mera Sehlata kyu hai.......

Khoon ke nahi yeh kuch rishte mere.......
phir bhi harr anjaan apna mujhe bulata kyu hai.......

Kar raha hu Koshish kuch apne ko samajhne ki......
Najaane yeh Dil khud ko Badnaam batata kyu hai.....!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #28 on: October 08, 2006, 11:55:12 PM »
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Wonderfull Vicky....gesu and ranju

Hai ek Khalish see Seene me.....
Toh Dil Armaan jalata kyu hai......

Bebas hoon me ab agar.......
Toh Sansaar mahobbat se Dil mera Sehlata kyu hai.......

Khoon ke nahi yeh kuch rishte mere.......
phir bhi harr anjaan apna mujhe bulata kyu hai.......

Kar raha hu Koshish kuch apne ko samajhne ki......
Najaane yeh Dil khud ko Badnaam batata kyu hai.....!!!!!!!!


haar anjan apna banake chor jaate kyun hai
mere paas bhi seena hai phir usse jalata kyun hai
haar gali mujhe badnaam keh kar pukarti hai
ashiq hain hum.....tu humhe badnaam kyun banati hai
hogaya hai ishq humhe isse mein humara dosh kyun hai
nikla woh bewafa hai isse mein mere kya kasoor hai
jo mujhe beech raha parh chor gaya
uski wajah se mera naam badnaam kyun hai :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D
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«Reply #29 on: October 11, 2006, 02:11:36 AM »
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bahut bahut khoob RANJANA, GAURAV BHAI  aur ANJANI JI.................. sab ne bahut pyara likha hai........

aur shukriya RANJANA, GAURAV BHAI aur CHITRA JI.....
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