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kya kahun zindagi mujhe kya kya di hai
baar baar marne ko ishq ki jalan di hai...
jisko ek pal ke liye bhulana mushkil
uski yaad me tadapne ko judai di hai...
na raat ko neend na din ko chain di hai
uski chahat me mar mitne ko tanhai di hai...
"punam" ki shayari me aaj dard di hai
aankhon me neend ke badle aansoo di hai...
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«Reply #1 on: January 18, 2008, 08:28:14 PM » |
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wah bahoot khoob Punam!! bahoot hi emotional hokar likha hai!!
Ishaq ki jalan kahe ya kahe is dil ka dard
mout bhi nahi atti aor jine ka milta nahi koi sabab
kis se kahe, kaya kahe jab khud hi kuch samjh nahi ayya
tha yah pyar, ya tera dil tha bas, kuch palo ke liye mujh per aya
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«Reply #2 on: January 18, 2008, 08:31:35 PM » |
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bahoot khoob punam ji & pooja ji
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«Reply #3 on: January 18, 2008, 08:34:18 PM » |
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shukaria baadal ji!! ajj app nahi shayri kar rahe hai?
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«Reply #4 on: January 18, 2008, 08:36:07 PM » |
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thanx pooja di..bahot khoob likhe hain aap ...
thanx baadal ji...
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«Reply #5 on: January 18, 2008, 09:20:23 PM » |
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bahut acha likha hai....
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«Reply #6 on: January 18, 2008, 09:21:20 PM » |
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thanx chotu...
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«Reply #7 on: January 18, 2008, 09:22:46 PM » |
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Dikha ke rangeen sapna chor gaya beech raah pe bewafa koi
dil ka haal aisa jaise toofan ke baad dikhta seher koi
meri zindagi ki keetab me dard ka panna khol gaya hai koi
ishq ki jalan se mujhe aaj parichay kara gaya hai koi...
Dil tod gaya aisa koi ke dil ko bhi na rahi dil ki khabar koi
aansoo ke dariya me mujhe dubo ke khud hasta hua chala gaya koi...
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«Reply #8 on: January 18, 2008, 09:34:10 PM » |
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Bohat acha hai punam acha likha hai aapne..
Ishq mein toh hum jal kar rahe..
dard-de-dil ki koshi karthe rahe..
Deewani seh naa samajh rahe..
Aab teri mohabatt mein nazm likh padhe..
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«Reply #9 on: January 18, 2008, 09:39:57 PM » |
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bahoot khoob Punam and Honeyrose
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«Reply #10 on: January 19, 2008, 01:14:07 AM » |
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kya kahun zindagi mujhe kya kya di hai
baar baar marne ko ishq ki jalan di hai...
jisko ek pal ke liye bhulana mushkil
uski yaad me tadapne ko judai di hai...
na raat ko neend na din ko chain di hai
uski chahat me mar mitne ko tanhai di hai...
"punam" ki shayari me aaj dard di hai
aankhon me neend ke badle aansoo di hai...
Dikha ke rangeen sapna chor gaya beech raah pe bewafa koi
dil ka haal aisa jaise toofan ke baad dikhta seher koi
meri zindagi ki keetab me dard ka panna khol gaya hai koi
ishq ki jalan se mujhe aaj parichay kara gaya hai koi...
Dil tod gaya aisa koi ke dil ko bhi na rahi dil ki khabar koi
aansoo ke dariya me mujhe dubo ke khud hasta hua chala gaya koi...
BAHUT KHOOB PUNAM... DONO HI KAVITAYE BAHUT ACHI LIKHI HAI...  |
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«Reply #11 on: January 19, 2008, 01:17:57 AM » |
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MAANA KE HUM BHI DIL KI BAAZI HAAR BAITHE
PAR KYON SHAUK MANAYE APNI NAKAMYAABI KA
ITNE ZAKHM TO KHAYE HAI "KHWAISH" NE PYAAR MEIN KE
EK GHAM AUR SAHI MERI BARBAADI KA..
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«Reply #12 on: January 19, 2008, 01:22:57 AM » |
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kitna bhi samjh alo khud ko
dil dukh hi jaata hai
atta hai jab wo yaad dil ko
ansoo nikal hi jaata hai
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«Reply #13 on: January 19, 2008, 04:40:57 PM » |
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Thanx khwaish ji... bahot acha likha aap ..
pooja di aap bhi...
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«Reply #14 on: January 19, 2008, 04:51:39 PM » |
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Dil mera nahi samjhta kuch ..ye bada naadan hai
koi manzil nahi jis raaste par usi par chalna chahta hai
Dil mera nahi samjhta kuch..ye bada naadan hai
likha nahi jo naseeb me usse hi sab kuch maanta hai
Dil mera nahi samajhta kuch ..ye bada naadan hai
ishq ki jalan me jalte huye usse hi khuda maanta hai...
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