~**~~**JALAN**~~**~

by _Vicky_ on September 18, 2006, 06:42:48 PM
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«Reply #30 on: October 11, 2006, 04:22:06 AM »
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nice every1!
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_Vicky_
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«Reply #31 on: October 11, 2006, 05:27:22 AM »
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Quote from: "ranjana"


wah wah vicky bahut khoob .......wonderful ....


chanke jab mere kangana payal
dil mein unke ajab si halchal si hui
samet liya piya ne bahaon mein
aaj yah kya nazaro mein baat hui

kabhi sata ke kabhi mana ke
sajana  ki cherkhaani se behaal hui  
udi neendiya in aankho ki
hai gajab mere jeeya ki halat aaj hui

preet mein rang gaya mera tan mann
unke pyaar ki aise lagan lagi
bhayi piya ki main diwaani
meri preet  aaj  suhaagan hui  !!


shukriya aur bahut bahut khoob RANJANA.................!!!!!!
shukriya MINU.....


Na ruthna bura hai, na ruthe sanam ko manna bura hai,
par payal-kangan chanka ke, kisi ko JALAANA bura hai..........

zulfen bikhra seene pe mere, macha ke ISHQ-E-HALCHAL,
kareeb itne aa tadpa ke mere dil ko, door jana bura hai...........

naaz hai tere husn pe, naaz hai mujhko teri jawaani pe,
kasam khuda jawan giri husn ki dikha ke sataana bura hai............

somvaar se shanivaar, karwa ke is kadar intzaar mujhse,
ravivaar ko milne na aana, pyaase labon ko tarsana bura hai..... :lol:
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«Reply #32 on: October 19, 2006, 02:59:19 PM »
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Quote from: "vicky AKELA"
MAIN HAR US CHEEZ SE JALTA HOON,
JO CHHOOTI HAI MERI MOHABBAT KO..................................!!!!!!!!!!

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Jalta hoon main us PANI se,
jo sar se kadmo tak unko bhigota hai,
aur bina kisi archan ke unko, kamsini se chhoota hai.............................

Jalta hoon main us KAAJAL se,
jo unki khubsoorat aankhon ko sajaata hai,
sajaate hue unki aankhon ko, aankhon me hi bas jata hai......................

Jalta hoon main us JHUMKE se,
jo kaano me unke jhoolte hain,
saari baaten kahata unse, aur gaalon ko choomta hai............................

Jalta hoon main us LAALI se,
jo apne labon par wo lagaati hai,
jin pankhuriyon ko hum chhoo bhi na sake, unhen wo aur laal kar jati hai......

Jalta hoon main us DUPATTE se,
jo unke gale par saja rahata hai,
sajne ke bahane unke, seene se lipta wo rahata  hai............................

HAAN!  jalta hoon main har us cheez se,
bas unko jo chhoo leti hai,
meri kismat to DHOOL jaise bhi nahi, jis par kadam rakh wo chalti hai.........!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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MAIN HAR US CHEEZ SE JALTA HOON,
JO CHHOOTI HAI MERI MOHABBAT KO.................!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


wah akela sahab jalan aise bhi hoti hai,
aj hi pata chala,
shandar likha hai apne, jiska koi jawab nahi hai

is topic par sabhi doston ne bahut acha likha hai,
mai yoindia par bahut kam ata hoon aur sabhi ko padhta par yeh
shayari dil ko cho gaye
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_Vicky_
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«Reply #33 on: October 21, 2006, 01:40:49 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya pervez bhai.........
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_Vicky_
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«Reply #34 on: November 08, 2006, 03:53:23 PM »
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JALAN aur CHAHAT me, bas itna sa hi farak hota hai,
chahat me badan hain jalte, aur JALAN se dil jalta hai........

dono hi insaan ko hain bas din-raat rulaate aur tadpate,
par dono ka hi rishta, MOHABBAT se shuru hota hai.......!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #35 on: November 11, 2006, 03:23:19 PM »
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kya baat hai dear sab ke sab bahut hi khoob likh rahe ho kuch bhi kaho jis mahfil main pervez bhai aa jaye us mahfil main char chand lag jate hai.

kher khuda aap sab ko aur bhi umda likhne ki tafiq de...............

keep it up
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«Reply #36 on: November 11, 2006, 03:32:10 PM »
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keh raha hoon main is jahan main phir se aa raha hoon...............
main khud chu ker uske badan ko pani ko bhi jala raha hoon................
main khud chu ker uske lab ko lali ko hata raha hoon................
kese kahu main tumhe e dost ki aaj jalan ko bhi jala raha hoon......................
tadap rahi hai uski bahein mujhe apni agosh main barne ko ..................
magar main bhi use mohabbat ki had tak tadpa raha hoon...............
wo chahti hai mujhe apni nigaho main bharna.............
magar main khud unki ankho se kajal hi chura raha hoon..............
ho sakta hai ye waqt badal jaye main unse door ho jau...............
magar yakeen mano mere dosto main use apni sanso main basa ker le ja raha hoon...............
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«Reply #37 on: November 16, 2006, 11:32:20 AM »
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shukriya aur bahut khoob MOHASIN BHAI..

bahut khubsoorat likha hai aapne..
kahan ho dost aajkal.. yun hi likhte raha karo...Usual Smile
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«Reply #38 on: June 08, 2007, 01:45:00 AM »
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wah kay abaat hai... ek se bad kar ek likha hai sabhi ne... Good job all!!
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Pooja
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«Reply #39 on: June 08, 2007, 03:10:12 AM »
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MAIN HAR US CHEEZ SE JALTA HOON,
JO CHHOOTI HAI MERI MOHABBAT KO..................................!!!!!!!!!!

**************************************************

Jalta hoon main us PANI se,
jo sar se kadmo tak unko bhigota hai,
aur bina kisi archan ke unko, kamsini se chhoota hai.............................

Jalta hoon main us KAAJAL se,
jo unki khubsoorat aankhon ko sajaata hai,
sajaate hue unki aankhon ko, aankhon me hi bas jata hai......................

Jalta hoon main us JHUMKE se,
jo kaano me unke jhoolte hain,
saari baaten kahata unse, aur gaalon ko choomta hai............................

Jalta hoon main us LAALI se,
jo apne labon par wo lagaati hai,
jin pankhuriyon ko hum chhoo bhi na sake, unhen wo aur laal kar jati hai......

Jalta hoon main us DUPATTE se,
jo unke gale par saja rahata hai,
sajne ke bahane unke, seene se lipta wo rahata  hai............................

HAAN!  jalta hoon main har us cheez se,
bas unko jo chhoo leti hai,
meri kismat to DHOOL jaise bhi nahi, jis par kadam rakh wo chalti hai.........!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

*************************************************
MAIN HAR US CHEEZ SE JALTA HOON,
JO CHHOOTI HAI MERI MOHABBAT KO.................!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



wah wah wah!! kaya baat hai!! bahoot hi acha likha hai Vicky ji!!

Ranju di, anjani, badnaam ji, Mohsin ji app sabhi ne kamal ka likha hai...

ek koshish meri bhi.... waise is topic per ladko ke pass bahoot options hai... samjh nahi aa raha hai main ladki ke najriye se kaya options use karu is kavita ke liye.... phir bhi koshish ki hai....

Jalati hu mai mobile se
Hatho mai her pal jo teri rahta hai
Ek hi awaz se uski,
Hontho aor apke gaalo se lagta hai

Jalati hu us bister se main
Jis se lipat kar app so jaate hai
Samet leta hai jo tumko khud main
App bekhudin mai ussi ke ho jaate hai!!!!

Jalati hu apke shirt se
Apke seene se chipkai rahti hai
Jaise le rakha ho apni bahon main
Apko her pal chumati rahti hai

jalati hu is hawa se main
jo teri sanso mai jaati hai
ghoom jaati hai kahin tum main
kahin ander hi tumhare rah jaati hai

Jalati hu us motorbike se,
jis ke sath her pal ghumate rahte ho
wo pahunchati hai apko manjil per
her manjil ke liye ussi per bharosa karte ho


Jalati hu jab bhi app kisi ladki se baatein karte ho
Tadap uthata hai yah dil, jab bhi uske sath hanste ho
Jalati hu her us cheese se, jo bhi appko chu jaati hai
App ho sirf mere, yah bhawna aor bhi parbal ho jaati hai!!!!


abhi ke liye itna hi sahi hai..... :oops:  :oops:  :lol:  :lol:
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Rajbir
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«Reply #40 on: June 08, 2007, 03:27:01 AM »
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Ha ha ha ... Pooja kya jalan hai =D> :lol: :lol: :lol:
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«Reply #41 on: June 08, 2007, 10:37:10 AM »
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Bhoot khoob pooja ji

Vicky its really A best creation by u...Good job


Jalan bale hi laakh ho tere seene mea
par isse dur bhi meri mohabbat karti hai

jab haath thamta hai mera ,
zamane ki nazro se bachane k liye
tho yea jalan mujhe gudguda k
yea  meri chaht aur badati hai

jab tu kada hota hai mere samne ,
raah mea pade kanto se mujhe bachane k liye
tho yea jalan hi mujhe tujhpe
aur viswaas karne ki aaga badati hai
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paani
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«Reply #42 on: June 08, 2007, 11:00:38 AM »
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MAIN HAR US CHEEZ SE JALTA HOON,
JO CHHOOTI HAI MERI MOHABBAT KO..................................!!!!!!!!!!

**************************************************

Jalta hoon main us PANI se,
jo sar se kadmo tak unko bhigota hai,
aur bina kisi archan ke unko, kamsini se chhoota hai.............................

Jalta hoon main us KAAJAL se,
jo unki khubsoorat aankhon ko sajaata hai,
sajaate hue unki aankhon ko, aankhon me hi bas jata hai......................

Jalta hoon main us JHUMKE se,
jo kaano me unke jhoolte hain,
saari baaten kahata unse, aur gaalon ko choomta hai............................

Jalta hoon main us LAALI se,
jo apne labon par wo lagaati hai,
jin pankhuriyon ko hum chhoo bhi na sake, unhen wo aur laal kar jati hai......

Jalta hoon main us DUPATTE se,
jo unke gale par saja rahata hai,
sajne ke bahane unke, seene se lipta wo rahata  hai............................

HAAN!  jalta hoon main har us cheez se,
bas unko jo chhoo leti hai,
meri kismat to DHOOL jaise bhi nahi, jis par kadam rakh wo chalti hai.........!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

*************************************************
MAIN HAR US CHEEZ SE JALTA HOON,
JO CHHOOTI HAI MERI MOHABBAT KO.................!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


wah kya jalan bayaan ki hai aapne.. bahut hi umda
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«Reply #43 on: June 08, 2007, 12:28:14 PM »
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Quote from: "_Vicky_"
MAIN HAR US CHEEZ SE JALTA HOON,
JO CHHOOTI HAI MERI MOHABBAT KO..................................!!!!!!!!!!

**************************************************

Jalta hoon main us PANI se,
jo sar se kadmo tak unko bhigota hai,
aur bina kisi archan ke unko, kamsini se chhoota hai.............................

Jalta hoon main us KAAJAL se,
jo unki khubsoorat aankhon ko sajaata hai,
sajaate hue unki aankhon ko, aankhon me hi bas jata hai......................

Jalta hoon main us JHUMKE se,
jo kaano me unke jhoolte hain,
saari baaten kahata unse, aur gaalon ko choomta hai............................

Jalta hoon main us LAALI se,
jo apne labon par wo lagaati hai,
jin pankhuriyon ko hum chhoo bhi na sake, unhen wo aur laal kar jati hai......

Jalta hoon main us DUPATTE se,
jo unke gale par saja rahata hai,
sajne ke bahane unke, seene se lipta wo rahata  hai............................

HAAN!  jalta hoon main har us cheez se,
bas unko jo chhoo leti hai,
meri kismat to DHOOL jaise bhi nahi, jis par kadam rakh wo chalti hai.........!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

*************************************************
MAIN HAR US CHEEZ SE JALTA HOON,
JO CHHOOTI HAI MERI MOHABBAT KO.................!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



wah wah wah!! kaya baat hai!! bahoot hi acha likha hai Vicky ji!!

Ranju di, anjani, badnaam ji, Mohsin ji app sabhi ne kamal ka likha hai...

ek koshish meri bhi.... waise is topic per ladko ke pass bahoot options hai... samjh nahi aa raha hai main ladki ke najriye se kaya options use karu is kavita ke liye.... phir bhi koshish ki hai....

Jalati hu mai mobile se
Hatho mai her pal jo teri rahta hai
Ek hi awaz se uski,
Hontho aor apke gaalo se lagta hai

Jalati hu us bister se main
Jis se lipat kar app so jaate hai
Samet leta hai jo tumko khud main
App bekhudin mai ussi ke ho jaate hai!!!!

Jalati hu apke shirt se
Apke seene se chipkai rahti hai
Jaise le rakha ho apni bahon main
Apko her pal chumati rahti hai

jalati hu is hawa se main
jo teri sanso mai jaati hai
ghoom jaati hai kahin tum main
kahin ander hi tumhare rah jaati hai

Jalati hu us motorbike se,
jis ke sath her pal ghumate rahte ho
wo pahunchati hai apko manjil per
her manjil ke liye ussi per bharosa karte ho


Jalati hu jab bhi app kisi ladki se baatein karte ho
Tadap uthata hai yah dil, jab bhi uske sath hanste ho
Jalati hu her us cheese se, jo bhi appko chu jaati hai
App ho sirf mere, yah bhawna aor bhi parbal ho jaati hai!!!!


abhi ke liye itna hi sahi hai..... :oops:  :oops:  :lol:  :lol:


Hahahahahahaha.. Wah Wah Wah.. Kya Jalan hai POOJA JI.. !!! :lol: :lol:
Kamaal Kar Diya aapne.. Bahut Gahari Soch ke Sath Likha hai... Usual Smile Usual Smile

Is Jalan Ke baare Me to Maine kabhi Socha hi nahi tha.. Accha hua aapne ehasaas karwa Diya.. Usual Smile Usual Smile

Umda Aur Behad Masoom Ehasaason se Saja hai aapka Yeh kalaam..!!

Great... !!!  =D>  =D>  =D>  =D>
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«Reply #44 on: June 08, 2007, 07:54:13 PM »
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shukaria Divya ji, Veer ji and Vicky ji!!!

Nice one Divya!!!!

Vicky such mai bahoot sochna pada..... Apko jawab dena asaan kaam thora hi hai... Once again... bahoot hi acha likha hai apne... issi liye jawab apne app acha ho jaata hai!!!
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