~**~~**JALAN**~~**~ -Panna 4:Shayri for Khumar -e- Ishq

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«Reply #45 on: June 09, 2007, 09:07:49 PM »

Ek baar Phir se Aapka Behad Shukriya.. Pooja ji.. !! Usual Smile

Aur Divya Ji & Paani Ji aapka Bhi Behad Shukriya Mera likha Pasand Karne Ke Liye.. Usual Smile

Bahut Pyaare Lafz Likhe Hain aapne Divya ji.. Bahut Khoooooooob.. !!


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«Reply #46 on: June 12, 2007, 08:06:41 PM »

Vicky ji kuch aor bhi ho jaaye apse yaha per...waiting


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«Reply #47 on: June 13, 2007, 12:21:12 AM »

Humen Khusbu Na Aati Thi, Aur Gul Khila Rahata Tha,
Bas Baat Itni se Ko Lekar, Mera Dil JALTA Rahata Tha......

Jise Maanga Jise Pooja, Use Ab Mil Gaya Hai Tha Koi,
Use Apna Samajh Ke Ab Bhi Badnaam Hota Rahata tha....

Dua Maangne ke Baad Bhi Yaaron Mere Paas Kuch nahi,
Rab se Use Maang kar, Naadaniyaan Karta Rahata tha..

Mujhe Na Pata tha Ki, Ek Din Bhool Jaayegi wo Mujhko,
Aur Yeh Mera Naadan Dil, Bas Use Yaad Karta Rahata tha....

Humen Khusbu Na Aati Thi, Aur Gul Khila Rahata Tha,
Bas Baat Itni se Ko Lekar, Mera Dil JALTA Rahata Tha.... !! Usual Smile


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«Reply #48 on: June 13, 2007, 01:41:43 AM »

wah kaya baat hai.. Magar Vicky ji yah khumar-e-Ishaq ki jagah dard-e-shayri ho gaya!!

Koshish ki hai app hi poem ke anusaar jawab dene ki...

Dekh kar door se apko, hum her pal jala karte the
Karte the dunia se app baat, dekh dekh jala karte the

Baith kar aoro ke sath, jab app hansi-majak karte the
Door baith kar dekh yah sab, man hi man mai jala karte the

Akar khade hote the apki raho main, apka intzaar karte the
Nikal jaate the bin dekhein hume, kasam se bahoot jala karte the

Tumne to shayad kabhi jaana hi nahi, salo salo saal, tumhin ko dekha karte the
Her ek din, her ek pal, tere pyar ki agan mai sanam, hum jala karte the


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«Reply #49 on: June 17, 2007, 06:41:44 PM »

Bahut Bahut Khooooob Pooja ji.. Lajawab Likha Hai aapne.. Mazaa Aa Gaya padh Kar.. !! Usual Smile

Zindgi Bhar ke Liye Sanam, Apna Deewana Banaye Rakhna,
Mere Armaano Ko Dilbar, Apne Pahaloo Me Chipaye Rakhna....

Teri Mohabbat Me Paagal Hai, yeh Dil tum Hi Ko Chahta hai,
Apne Dil Ki Basti me Sanam, Bas Humko Bhi Basaye Rakhna....

JAL Raha Hai Dil Mera Dilbar, Tere Milan Ki Pyaas me Har Pal,
Is JALAN Ko Aur Dahaka Kar, Labon Ki Aag Lab pe Barsaaye Rakhna.....!!!! Usual Smile


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«Reply #50 on: June 20, 2007, 01:44:53 AM »

Wah Vicky ji,, shabdo mai khumar bharne ki kala mai app mahir hai.. app ki kavitaye pad kar apko khumar-e-King ka khitab dene ko dil karta hai...

bahoot hi acha, khumar-e-ishaq se bhari rachnaye likhte hai app... bahoot khoob!!

Zindagi bhar mujhko uhin khud mai samaye rakhna
Mere payar ko apne dil mai chupaye rakhna

Hatho mai dekar hath, apne sath chalaye rakhna
Ho sirf mere, sirf mere, yah her pal jataye rakhna

Jal rahe hai jis agan mai hum aor tum ajj,
Is payaar ki agan ko Umarbhal Jalaye rakhna!!!


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«Reply #51 on: June 27, 2007, 01:33:01 PM »

Pooja Ji Bahut Bahut Shukriya.. par aap Mujhe Sharminda Kar rahi Hain.. Usual Smile

Main To aapki Kalam ke Aage bahut Chota Hoon.. Likhti to aap kamaal Ka hain..
Chahe wo Ishq Ho Ya Dard..... Aur Bahut Kuch to aapse Hi Seekha Hai Maine .. Usual Smile

Bahut Khubsoorat Aur Haseen Lag Rahi Ho,
Kisi Shayar Ke Lafzon Ki Zubaan Lag Rahi Ho....

JAL ke Mohabbat Me Likhi Ho Kisi Ne Jaise,
Aise Bahakti-Machalti Se, Ek Gazal Lag Rahi Ho......

Haathon me Lekar Haath, Kar Rahi Pyaar Aise,
Jaise Saawan Ki Boond Pyaasi Zameen se Mil Rahi Ho.....

Aaine Me Ja Kar Dekho, Ek Baar To Sanam Khudko,
Pyaar ke Gahano se Saji, Meri Dulhan Lag Rahi Ho......!! Usual Smile


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«Reply #52 on: June 27, 2007, 08:05:06 PM »

Bahoot khoob Vicky ji!! Her ek lafz khumar-e-ishaq se bhara hua...

Dikh rahi hu wo jo, dekhna chaha teri ankhon ne
Najar hai teri aor kalam bhi tere hatho main

Muhobat hai teri yah, her ek andaz bhi tera hai
Behak rahi hu main, tere he jagaye armano main

Baras jaau tujh per, ban kar masat hawa
Simatati ja rahi hu per, khud hi teri bahon main

Teri ankhein hai mera Aaina, muskaan hai shingaar
Saj gai hu dulhan si, akar teri panaho main!!


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«Reply #53 on: June 27, 2007, 08:19:59 PM »

Wah Wah Pooja Ji.. Kya Baat Hai.. Bahut Bahut Khoob... Kya Baat Hai..!!

Kahata to Kaise kahata ki Mujhko Tujhse Mohabbat hai,
Kai Baar kahana Chaha, Haal-e-Dil Kaha na Paya Main......

”JALTA” Raha Bas Moabbat Me Teri Pal-Pal E- Sanam,
Tere Dil Par Apne Ishq Ki Mohar Laga Na Paya Main…….

Kai Baar kahana Chaha Nazron se Nazar Mila ke phir bhi,
Nigaah-e-Jaam se Tere, Khud ke Hosh na Bacha paya Main........

Labon pe Baat kai Baar Aate-Aate Ruk Gai Sanam Lekin,
Dulhan Banegi Tu Ek Din meri, Yeh Baat Bhula Na Paya Main…. Usual Smile


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«Reply #54 on: June 27, 2007, 09:01:04 PM »

wah bahoot khoob Vicky ji!!!! Good one!!

Kaha na kuch tumne, magar dil jaan gaya tha
Kaya hai teri ankhon mai dil parchan gaya tha

Hum to the chup, ki yah ikraar app hi se ayye
Apke izhaar ka her ek shabd, yah dil jaan gaya tha

Lubo per baat tere jo atakti rahi
Dil mera unhi palo mai to atak gaya tha

Kaha jo tumne ajj, yah dil khushi se jhoom utha
Pardte hi tera yah ikraar, dil muchal gaya tha


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«Reply #55 on: May 16, 2008, 02:11:03 PM »

Wah kya Baat hai Pooja ji... Jawab me Deri ke liye Maafi Chahta hooon.. !!
par jaldi Hi Jawab doonga...!! Usual Smile

Behad Khubsoorat jawab diya hai aapne.. Maza aa gaya padh kar..!!

**~** Mann **~**


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«Reply #56 on: May 19, 2008, 01:46:25 AM »

bahut achchhi poen kahi apne
mubarakbad. Applause


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«Reply #57 on: December 27, 2008, 06:06:35 PM »

Bahut Bahut Shukriya DEETRI ji.. Aapki Hausla Afzaai Ke Liye.. Usual Smile

**~** Mann **~**


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«Reply #58 on: June 30, 2009, 02:06:03 PM »

Wah Wah Bahut Khoob Mann Ji, Sach Kahe to taarif bhi kam hi reh jayegi, kyunki khumar to aapki aadat-rooh-dil-jaan mein basta hai..aur aap behtreen likhte hai iss section me..

Shally.


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«Reply #59 on: July 06, 2009, 06:27:52 PM »

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Shally Dear.. Ki aapne Meri "JALAN" Ko Pasand ki Aur Saraaha..

**~** Mann **~**


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