~**~~**JALAN**~~**~

by _Vicky_ on September 18, 2006, 06:42:48 PM
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MAIN HAR US CHEEZ SE JALTA HOON,
JO CHHOOTI HAI MERI MOHABBAT KO..................................!!!!!!!!!!

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Jalta hoon main us PANI se,
jo sar se kadmo tak unko bhigota hai,
aur bina kisi archan ke unko, kamsini se chhoota hai.............................

Jalta hoon main us KAAJAL se,
jo unki khubsoorat aankhon ko sajaata hai,
sajaate hue unki aankhon ko, aankhon me hi bas jata hai......................

Jalta hoon main us JHUMKE se,
jo kaano me unke jhoolta hai,
saari baaten kahata unse, aur gaalon ko choomta hai............................

Jalta hoon main us LAALI se,
jo apne labon par wo lagaati hai,
jin pankhuriyon ko hum chhoo bhi na sake, unhen wo aur laal kar jati hai......

Jalta hoon main us DUPATTE se,
jo unke gale par saja rahata hai,
sajne ke bahane unke, seene se lipta wo rahata  hai............................

HAAN!  jalta hoon main har us cheez se,
bas unko jo chhoo leti hai,
meri kismat to DHOOL jaise bhi nahi, jis par kadam rakh wo chalti hai.........!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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MAIN HAR US CHEEZ SE JALTA HOON,
JO CHHOOTI HAI MERI MOHABBAT KO.................!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


**~** Mann **~**
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badnaam_shayar
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«Reply #1 on: September 18, 2006, 08:18:35 PM »
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Waaah Vicky bhai......ISHQ ka ek aur Roop......Impressive Job...!!!


Jalan nahi Tapish nahi......
Yeh toh meri Mahobbat ka Saroor hai.....

Jinke AShiQ dekh ke Jalta hai Dil mera.....
Wahi toh meri Hasti ka Guroor hai......

Khumar ki baat yeh......
Warna bhala humara kiss Cheez se wasta hai......

Door khade rahe hum aur Choo jaye tumhe koi aur......
Tab harr AShiQ hamari MAhobbat par hasta hai......

Jalan nahi Tapish nahi.......
Yeh toh meri Mahobbat ka Suroor hai....!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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anjani_si
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«Reply #2 on: September 19, 2006, 02:37:45 AM »
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Waaah Vicky bhai......ISHQ ka ek aur Roop......Impressive Job...!!!


Jalan nahi Tapish nahi......
Yeh toh meri Mahobbat ka Saroor hai.....

Jinke AShiQ dekh ke Jalta hai Dil mera.....
Wahi toh meri Hasti ka Guroor hai......

Khumar ki baat yeh......
Warna bhala humara kiss Cheez se wasta hai......

Door khade rahe hum aur Choo jaye tumhe koi aur......
Tab harr AShiQ hamari MAhobbat par hasta hai......

Jalan nahi Tapish nahi.......
Yeh toh meri Mahobbat ka Suroor hai....!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


too good...vickyji aur gauravji :D:D:D too good!!!!! :D:D:D:D

jalan aikh bahana hai dil ko tu tadapana hai
ansu tu aikh bahana hai ankhoin ko rona hai
zindagi bhi aikh bahana hai humare liye
ishq tu aikh bahana hai isse rooh ne isse tadap mein jalna hai :D
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Aryaan
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«Reply #3 on: September 19, 2006, 04:08:27 AM »
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Bohat khoob Vicky, BS & Anjani....
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ranjana
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«Reply #4 on: September 19, 2006, 09:44:07 AM »
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MAIN HAR US CHEEZ SE JALTA HOON,
JO CHHOOTI HAI MERI MOHABBAT KO..................................!!!!!!!!!!

**************************************************

Jalta hoon main us PANI se,
jo sar se kadmo tak unko bhigota hai,
aur bina kisi archan ke unko, kamsini se chhoota hai.............................

Jalta hoon main us KAAJAL se,
jo unki khubsoorat aankhon ko sajaata hai,
sajaate hue unki aankhon ko, aankhon me hi bas jata hai......................

Jalta hoon main us JHUMKE se,
jo kaano me unke jhoolte hain,
saari baaten kahata unse, aur gaalon ko choomta hai............................

Jalta hoon main us LAALI se,
jo apne labon par wo lagaati hai,
jin pankhuriyon ko hum chhoo bhi na sake, unhen wo aur laal kar jati hai......

Jalta hoon main us DUPATTE se,
jo unke gale par saja rahata hai,
sajne ke bahane unke, seene se lipta wo rahata  hai............................

HAAN!  jalta hoon main har us cheez se,
bas unko jo chhoo leti hai,
meri kismat to DHOOL jaise bhi nahi, jis par kadam rakh wo chalti hai.........!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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MAIN HAR US CHEEZ SE JALTA HOON,
JO CHHOOTI HAI MERI MOHABBAT KO.................!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



WAH WAH!! kya baat hai vicky ....aapki likhi lines toh dil ko chhoo gayi....bahut hi accha likha hai aapne sach mein.. Usual Smile

gauarv anjani ...tum dono ne bhi kamaal kar diya ...good job.. Usual Smile
kuch koshish main bhi karti hun... Usual Smile


sajate hain hum tere liye hi sajana
tera dil kis baat per fir sulagata hai

chhoota hai jo paani mujhe pyaar se
toh tera tan maan kyu jalata hai

basa hai jo nayano mein kajal piya
yeh meri aabkho mein tujhse hi sajata hai

batata hai hai tujhko yeh fail kar
ki in aankho mein tu hi basata hai

yeh jo kaano ke mere jhumake hain
yeh mere gaalo ko tera naam le ke hi chumate hain

basi ho tum apne sajan ke dil ki dharakan mein
mere gaal laal ho ke yahi toh bhasaha bolte hain

mere dil ko chhoo lete hain yeh tere pyaare bol piya
jo teri jalan se majboor ho kar bhi mere singaar ko dekh tere nayan kuch bolte hain!!
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badnaam_shayar
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«Reply #5 on: September 19, 2006, 09:53:58 AM »
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Waaaah....Kya Jawab dia hai..Ranju...!!!

JO teri Aankhein Yeh Kajal na Sambhal Saki.....
Toh Khawab mere Dil me hee Rakhna......

JO tere Jhumke kare Shor mere Naam se.....
Toh mujhe BeNam hee rakhna......

YEh Payal toh khanakhti hai tere paon me......
Jaise Saawan me Nachta mor Gaanv me......

Ehsaan nahi par ek Adaa jaroor bikherna.....
Hum baithe aapke Deedar me...hamare Naam pe Jaroor Nazrein aap bhi phairna........!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Tosha
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«Reply #6 on: September 19, 2006, 01:53:51 PM »
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bahut khoob [:d]
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_Vicky_
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«Reply #7 on: September 19, 2006, 04:09:40 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya GAURAV BHAI, RANJANA,
 ANJANI JI, ARYAAN BHAI.. aur TOSHA JI.......

GAURAV BHAI, RANJANA aur ANJANI JI aap sab ne..
behad khubsoorat likha hai..... is tehreed ko aap sab ne
aur khubsoorat bana diya hai............!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

GAURAV BHAI, RANJANA aur ANJAANI aap sab itna..
behtreen likhte hain ki mujhe aap sab se " JALAN "  ho rahi hai...!!!!!! Usual Smile
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«Reply #8 on: September 19, 2006, 04:20:24 PM »
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Yeh Dard-e-IShQ.....
Aur Fakat Dil ka rishta hai.....

Jalan hai woh Nayaab Cheez......
JO harr AshiQ Seene me rakhta hai......

Aaj bhi tadap uthte hai hum......
Woh Manzar yaad karke......

Pyar karte hai jisse.....
Jalan me usi ke liye Dil bhi rota hai........!!!!!!!!!!

THNX a lot Vicky bhai.......Jalna hai toh Jalo hum toh likhenge :wink:
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mohsin akhter
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«Reply #9 on: September 19, 2006, 09:19:22 PM »
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subhaan allah bahut hi khoob
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mohsin akhter
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«Reply #10 on: September 19, 2006, 09:32:37 PM »
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mat jal us pani se jo unka bhiga deta hai.......
wo to kamsin banata hai unko tere liye........

mat jal us kajal se jo unki ankho ko saja deta hai.....
wo sajata hai un ankho ko teri soorat ko niharne ke liye.........

mat jal us jhumke se jo unke galo ko jhoo jata hai....
wo jhoota to usko tere hone ka ehsas ho jata hai....

mat jal us lali se jo unke honto ko ek andaz deta hai.....
honto ki wo lali tere galo galo ko tadapti hai......

kya hua jo unhone tujhe apna na banaya........
kya hua jo unhone tujhe sitamgar banaya........
kam se kam bewafa kehker to unhone tujhe apni yaad me basaya......
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«Reply #11 on: September 20, 2006, 04:24:37 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya MOHSIN BHAI......

behad khubsoorat likha hai aapne.... LAJAWAB...
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mohsin akhter
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«Reply #12 on: September 20, 2006, 04:47:43 PM »
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sukriya vicky sahab jo aapko hamara kalam pasand aaya.

magar hamara kalam to aapke kalam se bahut hi niche hai.

u r super writer great.
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«Reply #13 on: September 26, 2006, 09:45:17 AM »
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bahut khoob RANJANA, GAURAV BHAI, ANJANI aur MOHSIN BHAI...


Chand ki chandni jab padti hai, rukhsaar par unke,
dekh NOOR unke chehre ka, chand bhi JAL jata hai.....

Chand ne yeh kaha mujhse, yeh JALAN bhi kitni haseen hai,
kyunki chandni se meri hi, uske chehre par nikhaar aata hai...........

maine kaha tab Chand se, tu itna gumaan na kar,
aur apni Chandni par itna tu kyun itraata hai........

chehre par unke Chandni tere Chand ki nahi,
tujhme to NOOR hi mere pyaar ke rukhsaar se aata hai.......
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«Reply #14 on: September 26, 2006, 09:52:30 AM »
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bahut khoob vicky ............

chhaata hai jab tere pyaar ka jaadu mujh per
meri aankho se woh chalak jaata hai

hai tere ishq ki nur se roshan mera chehera
yeh dekh ke chaand bhi mujh se jal jaata hai

tere labo ki sargoshiyaan hoti hain jab mere kaano mein hole se
yeh dekh ke behti basanti hawa ka rukh bhi apni raha badal jaata hai

tere ishq ke nashe mein duba hai mera tan mann kuch aise
upar se yeh bheega sa mosaum kuch aur aag laga jaata hai!!
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