"Mujhse Mil"l

by Ehsas on June 04, 2008, 12:29:43 PM
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 Door Hi Sahi,
 Par Sapno Ma Aakar Mil
 Mil Phirse Mujhe,
 Bechain Karne ke liye mil
 kis-Kis ko dekhaye Ham,
 Apne Tute Dil Ko
 Tu mujhse Chupa Reh,
 Par Is Dil Ki Dharkano K Liye Mil
 Yun v Tum jaante ho,
 Na Milne k Bahane
 Ho Sake To is Pal,
 Hamesha-Hamesha k Liye Mil.
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«Reply #1 on: June 04, 2008, 12:45:42 PM »
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Door Hi Sahi,
 Par Sapno Ma Aakar Mil
 Mil Phirse Mujhe,
 Bechain Karne ke liye mil
 kis-Kis ko dekhaye Ham,
 Apne Tute Dil Ko
 Tu mujhse Chupa Reh,
 Par Is Dil Ki Dharkano K Liye Mil
 Yun v Tum jaante ho,
 Na Milne k Bahane
 Ho Sake To is Pal,
 Hamesha-Hamesha k Liye Mil.

Nice One... Applause
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«Reply #2 on: June 04, 2008, 01:33:44 PM »
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Door Hi Sahi,
 Par Sapno Ma Aakar Mil
 Mil Phirse Mujhe,
 Bechain Karne ke liye mil
 kis-Kis ko dekhaye Ham,
 Apne Tute Dil Ko
 Tu mujhse Chupa Reh,
 Par Is Dil Ki Dharkano K Liye Mil
 Yun v Tum jaante ho,
 Na Milne k Bahane
 Ho Sake To is Pal,
 Hamesha-Hamesha k Liye Mil.

Nice, Keep it up ! Your lines remind me of the famous Ghazal sung by Mehndi Hasan:

 Ranjish hi sahi dil hi dukhane ke liye aa
Aa fir se mujhe chhod ke jaane ke liye aa

Pahle se marasim naa sahi fir bhi kabhi to
Rasmo rahe duniya hi nibhane ke liye aa

Kis kis ko batayenge judai ka sabab hum
Tu mujhse khafa hai to zamane ke liye aa

Kuch to mere pindar-e-mohabbat ka bharam rakh
Tu bhi to kabhi mujhko manane ke liye aa

Ik umr se hoon lazate giriya se bhi mehroom
Aye raahate jaan mujhko rulane ke liye aa
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«Reply #3 on: June 04, 2008, 03:36:07 PM »
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Nice sharing Celmira
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