Tere khayal me "Parwaaz" mazar se uske

by ParwaaZ on February 23, 2011, 02:46:25 PM
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Woh tere sabr ki khushboo, kharar ki khushboo
Abhi tak hai paas mere tere pyaar ki khushboo

Ke jab bhi taszkera maazi ka chedta hai koi
To aane lagti hai ek khush-gawarsi khushboo

Dil o nigaah me mere, khayaal me mere
Basi huyi hai tere itebaar ki khushboo

Woh jab bhi khawab me aati hai mudaton gharme
Mahekti rahti hai sondhi sii yaar ki khushboo

Tere khayaal meiN "Parwaaz" mazar se uske
Nikal rahi hai kisi gham-guzar ki khushboo





Edited by Parwaaz for correction... on 20:OCt-2012 00:29:00
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«Reply #1 on: February 23, 2011, 02:56:41 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob parwaaz Ji.

Har Ek As'haar Lajawaab Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #2 on: February 23, 2011, 02:59:24 PM »
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Sameer Ji !

Aadaab !!


Ke jab bhi taszkera mazi ka chedta hai koi
To aane lagti hai ek khushgawarsi khushboo

Woh jab bhi khawab me aati hai mudaton gharme
Mahekti rahti hai sondhisi yaar ki khushboo


Very Impressive ... Good Expression ...... !!

bahut umdaa FikR o Khayaal se labrez ghazal kahi hai aapne ... acche bane hai sabhi ashaar ... dil se daad hazir hai ... yunhi likhte rahen ... khush rahen ...!

duaaoN ke saath ... !
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«Reply #3 on: February 23, 2011, 03:13:16 PM »
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baut khoob parwaz ji...
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«Reply #4 on: February 23, 2011, 04:44:51 PM »
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uffffffffff parwaz ji kya mehakti chahakti gazal kahi hai aapne...... icon_flower icon_flower
na jane kitni khushbuon se mehka diya aapne iss mehfil ko.......love4love4
bht hi pyari aur khubsurat kalaam hai ji ye aapka... icon_thumleft icon_thumleft happy3 happy3

kuch apne andaaz me kaha hai humne..hope aapko pasand aayega..... Feared. Feared. Winking Winking

http://www.yoindia.com/shayariadab/shayri-for-khumar-e-ishq/khushboo-t62096.0.html;new#new
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«Reply #5 on: February 23, 2011, 05:31:20 PM »
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Mast poem parwaazji.................... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause


 icon_salut very good romantic poem........... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


Lo bula layi mujhe tere ess kalaam ki khshboo .........
Meri saason mai bas gayee ye shabdon ki khushboo

Mujhe lubhaa rahi hai aaj tere  khayalon ki khushboo
Mera aangan mejia rahi hai tere kadmon ki khshboo
 
Bhule nahi bhulati tere sparsh ki nashily khushboo
Mere ang ang mai bas gayi hai tere ang ki khushboo

Kisse kahu kaise kahu kya haal ho gayaa hai mera
Mera rom rom kasmasaata hai jab aati hai Teri khushboo
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«Reply #6 on: February 23, 2011, 05:32:39 PM »
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wah wah ye khusboo to bahut umda rahi Parwaaz sahab.
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«Reply #7 on: February 23, 2011, 06:24:00 PM »
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bahut khoob parwaaz sahab...

Intezar !
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«Reply #8 on: February 23, 2011, 08:17:49 PM »
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BAhut Khub Parwaz Bhai Bahut Hi Khubsurat Likha Hai Aapne Applause
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«Reply #9 on: February 24, 2011, 05:42:48 AM »
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parwaj ji........

apki post lajawab he.........wese bhi aap headmaster ji he so aap joi bhi likhenge best hi hoga........dil me utar gaya apki poetry ka ek ek lafj.....aur bahot kuch sikhne ko bhi mila is psot se ...thx for sharing it...sorry "it" nahi kah sakte ise...ye poetry to mahakti hui jivit he nirjiv nahi......ehsaas mahak rahe he isme......wonderful
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«Reply #10 on: February 24, 2011, 01:33:28 PM »
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bht khoob parwaaz ji....
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«Reply #11 on: February 28, 2011, 03:22:52 PM »
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Wah Parwaaz Bhai bahut Bahut Khooooooooooob.. maza aa Gaya Padh kar.. Applause Applause


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«Reply #12 on: April 11, 2011, 12:09:43 PM »
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Aap sab ka tahe dil se shukriyaa.... Jo aapne apna kimti waqt nikal kar humari is adna si kalaam par apni rai dii.....

Aage bhi apna saath banaye rakhiye....
Khush O aabaad rahiye....
Khuda Hafez.... Usual Smile
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«Reply #13 on: April 11, 2011, 12:13:18 PM »
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Woh tere sabra ki khushboo, kharar ki khushboo
Abhi tak hai pas mere tere pyar ki khushboo

Ke jab bhi taszkera mazi ka chedta hai koi
To aane lagti hai ek khushgawarsi khushboo

Dilo nigah me mere, khayal me mere
Basi hui hai tere itebarki khushboo

Woh jab bhi khawab me aati hai mudaton gharme
Mahekti rahti hai sondhisi yaar ki khushboo

Tere khayal me "Parwaaz" mazar se uske
Nikal rahi hai kisi ghamsar ki khushboo





khushboo se bhare alfaaz,
kare aksar zehan mein parwaaz...............!!!
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«Reply #14 on: April 11, 2011, 01:34:18 PM »
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Waah Waah Waah.. Kya baat hai Parwaaz ji,,, bahoot Umda aur itne Khoobsoorati se likha hai.. Lajawaab.. bahoot Umda !! Applause Applause Applause Applause
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