Yakeen Hai Mujhko!!! (Shikha)

by Shikha12 on September 24, 2008, 02:06:42 PM
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मैं दर्दो से लिखती हूँ ज़िंदगी के क़िस्से,
तुम सब दर्द उन में से चुरा लोगे ना.. ?

हवाओं के तेवर से बहुत मायूस हूँ मैं,
ये जलते दिए आँधियों से बचा लोगे ना.. ?

बेख़बर है चाँद सुध लेता नहीं हमारी,
तुम भी सितारों से दिल अपना बहला लोगे ना.. ?

सजा दे अपनी शायरी अगर कदमों पे तुम्हारे,
अपनी पलकों पर तुम इसको उठा लोगे ना.. ?

यकीन है मुझको ना भुला पाओगे तुम भी,
फ़ासले जो दरमियाँ है वो सब मिटा दोगे ना.. ?

चलती हूँ, सफ़र के आख़िरी पड़ाव के पार,
तन्हाई में मुझको फिर सदा तो दोगे ना.. ?
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«Reply #1 on: September 24, 2008, 02:13:42 PM »
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 Applause  Applause
 Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley
WAH WAH WAH BAHUT KHOOB
BAHUT UMDA AUR LAJAWAAB KALAM
SACH MAHIYA JI AGAIN A BEAUTIFUL
CREATION FROM UR SIDE...
BY. K.SHAEL
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«Reply #2 on: September 24, 2008, 02:16:35 PM »
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lajawab umda behtreen.. Applause Applause.shikha Hats off to you!

muddton me loute ho, is bikhre makan me,
saja ke ise ghar, bana doge na
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«Reply #3 on: September 24, 2008, 02:17:50 PM »
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Mahiya

Superb ! Applause Applause Applause

Keep going Thumbs UP
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«Reply #4 on: September 24, 2008, 02:25:29 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Shukriya, Shally, Sanjeev ji and Rajbir ji...

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«Reply #5 on: September 24, 2008, 02:27:17 PM »
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lajawab umda behtreen.. Applause Applause.shikha Hats off to you!

muddton me loute ho, is bikhre makan me,
saja ke ise ghar, bana doge na


Bahut khoob Sanjeev ji..

"Muddton me loute ho, is bikhre makan me,
saja ke ise ghar, bana doge na"

Yeh ghar bhi banega, ek aashiaana pyaar ka,
Rang Muhabbat ke dewaar pe chittka doge naa... ?
Chaukhat pe rahegi yeh nazar intezaar mein,
Thaki hui in nazron ko, tum sulaa toh doge naa... ?
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«Reply #6 on: September 24, 2008, 02:31:08 PM »
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tareef ke liye alfaz nahi hain kitni masumiyat hain aapki is ghazal me main bayaan nahi kar pa raha hu great work mahiya.
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«Reply #7 on: September 24, 2008, 02:47:57 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya Sajid ji.. Aapne padha aur saraaha..  notworthy
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«Reply #8 on: September 24, 2008, 03:38:33 PM »
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Bahut khoob Sanjeev ji..

"Muddton me loute ho, is bikhre makan me,
saja ke ise ghar, bana doge na"

Yeh ghar bhi banega, ek aashiaana pyaar ka,
Rang Muhabbat ke dewaar pe chittka doge naa... ?
Chaukhat pe rahegi yeh nazar intezaar mein,
Thaki hui in nazron ko, tum sulaa toh doge naa... ?


ek baar fir bahoot khoob

ghatyen jo ghere kabhi, chand ko to,
zulfon ko chehre se, hata loge na,
gar jo me roothun bina baat ke to,
mujhe tum fir se, mana loge na
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«Reply #9 on: September 24, 2008, 04:08:35 PM »
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Bahut hi khoobsoorat Mahiya ji.... Applause Applause Applause Applause

Daaman mera bheega sirf mere ansuon se nahi hai,
Daastaan teri wafa ki mera dil bhi sun raha tha.
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«Reply #10 on: September 24, 2008, 05:10:15 PM »
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Very beautiful creation done bye you Mahiya... Applause Thumbs UP
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«Reply #11 on: September 24, 2008, 05:40:37 PM »
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Mahiya/Shikha ji!  Applause Clapping Smiley Applause
 Tah-e-dil sey niklee aawaaz, tah-e-dil tak pahunchtee bhi hai! Mubaarak ho! Ijaazat chaahtey huye, arz hai:

Eik jhonka, khizaan ko chaahiye bahaaroun kaa:
Aakhri dour pai manzil key, bulaa dogey naa!!
Nisf shab mein bhi neend, gar, naheen aayee ham ko;
Thapkiyaan dey key dharhkanoun keen, sulaa dogey naa!!

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«Reply #12 on: September 24, 2008, 07:30:55 PM »
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amazing!
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«Reply #13 on: September 24, 2008, 08:04:24 PM »
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 hello anjaan dharkan ji,
Sunee hai, yoon to, andaleeb ki sadaa ham ney!
Aur, deykhaa hai, shabo-o-roz, maykadaa ham ney!
Yeh sadaa doosaree hai, aayee hai tah-e-jaw sey:
Baad-e-magrib ko kiyaa shukriah adaa ham ney!

                             - abd bundeli
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«Reply #14 on: September 24, 2008, 10:44:03 PM »
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its BEAUTIFUL!
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