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" Aansooun "
Humesha muskura kay aansooun ko chupaya
Ghum ko chupanay ka yehi rasta nazar aaya
Kis kis ko batatey bethey ashkon ka sabab
Kay derd-e-dil dil mey kis nay jagaya
Mehfilon mey kahin bhi maza na raha
Rakha dil pay pather to khud ko sajaya
Baat bay baat apni aahain daba kar
Logo kay dermiyan kis qadar muskurayi
Kya muqaddar say shikwa kartey rahain
Jo qismat mey tha wohi kuch to paaya
Yeh kis mor pay aagayi hain umeedain
Kay saaya-e-manzil nazar mey naa aaya
Apno nay palat kay daykha tak nahin
Ghairon nay aaker galay say lagaaya
Acha hua kay raaz khul hi gaya
Dil-e-nadaan pay khanjar kis nay chalaya
Shab-o-roz chahat sila yeh hay
Dil kay tukrey huye aur wo chunney naa aaya..
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«Reply #1 on: September 20, 2008, 07:19:47 AM » |
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itne ansu na gira
ke barh ajaegi
sukhi nadya pir se
bar jaegi
mera mahal he pathar ka
garibo ki joprya ujar jaegi
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Aryaan
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«Reply #2 on: September 20, 2008, 07:30:47 AM » |
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Bohat khoob Khushi & Kanta...
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bekarar
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«Reply #3 on: September 20, 2008, 07:38:21 AM » |
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bahoot khoob khushi...achcha likha hai aapne...nice one..kanta.
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«Reply #4 on: September 20, 2008, 08:07:10 AM » |
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good sharing pari aapne  wah kanta baccha aapne b bahut acha try kiya hai. very good |
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«Reply #5 on: September 20, 2008, 12:26:55 PM » |
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hmmmm acha kaha ju bhi kaha tum ne kaha hum ne suna acha laga bouth acha laga. lafzoo ka chunao bhi bouth dushwar hota ha
Nice One
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«Reply #6 on: September 20, 2008, 02:34:57 PM » |
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bohut khoob khushi ji
n nice reply by kanta ji
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«Reply #7 on: September 20, 2008, 07:59:35 PM » |
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**Waqt Se Waqt Ki Kya Shikayat**
Waqt Se Waqt Ki Kya Shikayat Karein
Waqt Hi Na Raha Waqt Ki Baat Hai
Uss Ney Dekha Muje Ussney Chaha Muje
Ussnay Thukra Diya Waqt Ki Baat Hai
Koi Mushkil Parri Koi Kaam Aa Gaya
Zehan Me Usskay Jo Mera Naam Aa Gaya
Baad Muddat Ke Woh Dosto Ki Tarrah
Hum Se Hans Ke Milla Waqt Ki Baat
Hai Zindagi Hum Say Anjaan To Ho Gayi
Ek Rishtay Ki Pehchaan To Ho Gayi
Koi Chahat Na Thi Bas Murrawatt Thi
Woh Khud Ko Samjha Liya Waqt Ki Baat Hai
Apna Rang-e-Muhabbat Hai Sab Se Juda
Koi Poochhay To Kahu Or Kya
Jiss ko Payaa Nahi Ussko Kho Ker Bhi Main
Kiyon Ussi Ki Rahi Waqt Ki Baat Hai....
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«Reply #8 on: September 20, 2008, 08:06:12 PM » |
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noder bache tum bhi toda try kerte.
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«Reply #9 on: September 20, 2008, 08:08:47 PM » |
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**Waqt Se Waqt Ki Kya Shikayat**
Waqt Se Waqt Ki Kya Shikayat Karein
Waqt Hi Na Raha Waqt Ki Baat Hai
Uss Ney Dekha Muje Ussney Chaha Muje
Ussnay Thukra Diya Waqt Ki Baat Hai
Koi Mushkil Parri Koi Kaam Aa Gaya
Zehan Me Usskay Jo Mera Naam Aa Gaya
Baad Muddat Ke Woh Dosto Ki Tarrah
Hum Se Hans Ke Milla Waqt Ki Baat
Hai Zindagi Hum Say Anjaan To Ho Gayi
Ek Rishtay Ki Pehchaan To Ho Gayi
Koi Chahat Na Thi Bas Murrawatt Thi
Woh Khud Ko Samjha Liya Waqt Ki Baat Hai
Apna Rang-e-Muhabbat Hai Sab Se Juda
Koi Poochhay To Kahu Or Kya
Jiss ko Payaa Nahi Ussko Kho Ker Bhi Main
Kiyon Ussi Ki Rahi Waqt Ki Baat Hai....
Nice sharing Pari sahiba |
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«Reply #10 on: September 20, 2008, 08:11:27 PM » |
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bohat shukriya aap sab ka tareef ke liye:)
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«Reply #11 on: September 20, 2008, 08:12:07 PM » |
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noder bache tum bhi toda try kerte.
arre kanta, itna accha hame likhna nahi aata hum sirf padkar enjoy karte hai bas. |
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«Reply #12 on: September 20, 2008, 08:21:52 PM » |
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to muje guru banao sikhati hu chele
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«Reply #13 on: September 20, 2008, 09:01:15 PM » |
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to muje guru banao sikhati hu chele
Guru ji..sikhado jii shayri karna. but yaar I hate doosron ka shayri ko apna naam dekar post karna |
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«Reply #14 on: September 21, 2008, 06:42:56 PM » |
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muje bhi tere jesa feel hota at least original poet ku credit jana chahiye.
acha chele noder to tera admission ho gaya samjo.
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