Bataaye bagair~~~Akram~~~

by mrZakram on January 24, 2010, 04:59:35 PM
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chale jayenge ek din tumhe bataaye bagair,
Ankhen bhar aaye gi tumhari tumhe rulaye bagair,
simat jayenge zameen ke kissi kone me MUZAMMIL Akhir,
kitni thi mohabbat tumse yeh bataaye bagair.....
 tearyeyed MuZaMmIl  tearyeyed
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«Reply #1 on: January 24, 2010, 05:13:35 PM »
Achhi lines hain Akram Ji. Apni baat numaya.n karne ke liye achhe alfaaz ka istemaal kiya aapne. Keep it up and make efforts for more improvement.
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mrZakram
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«Reply #2 on: January 24, 2010, 05:37:38 PM »
insha Allah zaroor koshish karenge&thanxxxxxxxx
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #3 on: January 24, 2010, 11:59:51 PM »
Bahut khoob Zakraam ji beautiful creation. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #4 on: January 25, 2010, 04:44:51 AM »
Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Akram ji..
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thinkhattk
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«Reply #5 on: January 25, 2010, 09:10:38 AM »
lovely creation akram ji....
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Shayaries_King
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«Reply #6 on: January 25, 2010, 09:13:50 AM »
Nice Creation Akram Ji Keep Posting
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mrZakram
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«Reply #7 on: January 25, 2010, 01:55:47 PM »
thanx aap logon ko shayri pasand aaye.(KING,SOPHI,THINTHATTK,MADHUWESH,&RIYAZ.) notworthy
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