Betiyan "Khwaish"

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«Reply #15 on: March 15, 2012, 08:26:12 AM »
Quote from: Nysha on March 14, 2012, 01:32:28 PM

Lajawaab peshkash Khwaish ji.. Bahoot Bahoot behtareen aur bahoot hi Umda Likha hai .. Bahoot Bahoot Khoob !!!

Mujhe Bhi beityan bahoot Pyaari lagti hai.. MUjhe Bhi beti Hi Chaiye ...Usual Smile 

Once Again beautiful Creation Khwaish ji !!!


Thankyou Soooooooooooooooooooo Much Sophi..

Betiyan Hoti Hi Sabse pyaari Hai....Wish u all da best In Life

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«Reply #16 on: March 15, 2012, 09:43:01 AM »
Quote from: Iftakhar Ahmad on March 14, 2012, 01:43:10 PM
Waah Khwaish Jee, Behad Khoob, Lajawab.
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«Reply #17 on: March 15, 2012, 09:46:58 AM »
Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on March 14, 2012, 03:32:04 PM
Bahut khoob,Khwaish ji.Bahut pyaare jazbat ki akkaasi ki hai.Waqai betiaan kitni mohini hoti hain aur unke chhootne ka khayaal kitna takleefdeh hota hai.Lekin yeh to nizaam e qudrat hai.Yahi betiyaan jub dusre ghar ko apni seerat se haseen banati hain to inke chhootne ka gham fakhr ke ehsaas mein badal jaata hai aur hum Khuda ke qanoon pe shukr bajaa laate hain.Khuda aapki beti ko bhi aapke liye qaabil e fakhr banaaye.Aamin.


Ji Saheb..Vakaai Bilkul Sach Kaha Aapne..
Yehi Betiyan Jab Auron Ke Ghar Ko Sambhaalti Hai,Apna Ek Alag Mukaam Banati Hai To Baa-Maap Ke Liye Isse Badhkar Fakr Aur Khushi Ki Baat Koi Nahee Hogi..
Aapke Pyaar Aur Aapki inn Duayon Ke liye Main Thae Dil Se Aap Ka Shukar-Guzaar Hoon, Aapka Bahut Bahut Bahut Shukriya Saheb!!! icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
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«Reply #18 on: March 15, 2012, 06:20:03 PM »
Quote from: khwaish on March 14, 2012, 12:20:53 PM
Kudiyan Chidiyan Hundiyan Ne
Par Parr Nahi Honde Kudiyan De..
Saure Vi Honde Ne, Peke Vi Honde Ne
Par Ghar Nahi Honde Kudiyan De.......


Iss  Sher Ki gehrai Kabhi Naapi Nahi Jaa Sakti..Kuch Din pehle ki
Baat Thi..Main Meri Bitiyan ke School Fuction (Annual day) Celebrations Par gaya
tha, usme meri Bitiyan Ne Dance mein Hissa Liya Tha..Usse Door se Stage par Dance karte dekhkar
Pata Nahi Kyon,Meri Aankhein Bhar Aayi..Aur main Yeh Sochta Reh Gaya Ke Ek Din iss Beti Ko
Kisi Aur  Pariwaar ke Haathon Mein Thaam Kar Main Tanha Akela Sa Reh Jaaunga..yeh Feelings Ek Baap Ki Apni Beti Ke Liye
Hoti Hai..Aur yeh Kavita Har Uss Baap-Beti Ko Dedicate karna Chaata Hoon Kyonki
Vakaai Yeh Sach Hai Betiyan To Papa Ki pariyan Hoti Hai..!!!!!!


 Teri Awaaz Se
Mera Ghar-Aangan Mehak Jaata hai
Tujhe Seene Se Laga Loon,
To  Waqt Tehar Sa Jaata Hai

Din Bhar Ki Thakaan,
Meri Pareshaaniyon Ki Dukaan...!!!!!!!
Tujhe Dekhte Hi Meri Zindagi Ka
Har Hissa Sawar Jaata Hai

Bitiyan Tujhe Kya Naam Doon..
"Meri Khushi".."Meri Hassi".."Meri Zindagi!!"
Tujhe Apne Haathon Me Uthau To,
Mujh jaisa Ek Pathar Bhi Nikhar jaata hai

Pata Nahi Kyon Iss Duniya Mein Betiyon Ko
Khud Se Juda Karna Padhta Hai...!!!
Sirf Iss Soch se Mera Dil,
Toot Kar Bikhar Jaata Hai...

Kaash Betiyan Bhi Beton
 Ki Tarah Saath-Saath Rehte...!!!!!!
Tujhse juda Hone Ki Soch se Hi,
Meri Aankhon Se Ashq ka Qatra Utar Jaata hai

"Khwaish" Betiyan To Woh Heere Ki Tarah Hai
 Jahan Par Bhi jaaye Apni chamak Bikherenge..!!
Apne Pariwaar ke Liye Sab Kuch Qurbaan Karne Wali "Beti"
Iss Duniya Mein Tera Alag Hi Mukaam Reh Jaata hai

I Love You My Daughter...."Sanjam"


               ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~

sanjam ko mera pyaar aur duaein. mujhe uska naam yaad tha bahut pyar naam hai. aur baap ko bedi se bahut mohabbat hoti hai.mere daddy mujhe bahut chahte the and very very caring i lost him 17 years back
aap ki iss poem mein ye ehsaas hua thik isi tarah daady pyaar karte the tearyeyed
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«Reply #19 on: March 15, 2012, 06:32:33 PM »
sach kahun to aapki is peshkash ne dil jeet liya
Wah kya khoobsurti se baap beti ke rishte ko aapne  lafzon mein piroya hai bohat khoob
Har lafz aankhon se hokar dil mein sama gaya
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«Reply #20 on: March 16, 2012, 01:26:00 PM »
Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on March 14, 2012, 03:42:17 PM
pehli baat to khwaishji kehna chahti hoon ki aap ki bitiya bahut taqdeerwali hai,ishwar buri nazar se bachye sanjam ko,ki aap jaise pita usko mile.sabhi itna sochen to fir inhen kabhi juda karna hi na pade.bahut sunder tareeqe se motiyon ko piroya hai.mala ekdam sachhe motiyon ki hai.
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Suresh ji, Aapke Iss Comments Ko padhne Ke baad, Mere Paas Kuch Kehne Ko Baaki Raha Hi Nahi..bas Aapka sab ka Pyaar Aur Aashirwaad Rahe Sanjam Par, bas Yehi Aap sab se Guzaarish Hai..Thanks a Million For Your sooooooooooooooooooooooo Kind Words..Aapka Yeh Pyaar dekhkar Yakeen maniye,Bahut Zyaad Khushi Hui Hai..Thanksssss a Lottttttt icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
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«Reply #21 on: March 20, 2012, 08:20:15 AM »
Quote from: Shihab on March 14, 2012, 07:19:31 PM
wah kya kehne, badi hi khoobsurat peshkash hai
Khwaish bhai, bahut achcha laga parhkar, bahut bahut aur bahut khub...khuda aapko aur aapki Beti ko CHUST, MAST, AUR SWAST Rakhey...

Shad o Aabaad Rahiye...

Shihab


Majid Bhai..Aapki Inn Dauwon Ke Liye Sache Dil SE
Bahut Bahut Shukriya..Aapne Waqt Diya..Thanks a Lotttt icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
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«Reply #22 on: March 25, 2012, 10:15:36 AM »
Quote from: sarfira on March 14, 2012, 07:51:54 PM
meri shadee nhi hui par mai apni bhateeji ko apni beti manta hoon--
aur aapne jaisa kaha nilkul wahi sochta aur feel bhi krta hoon--
shayd agle kuch saalon me uski shadee ho jaegi--
lekin usse duur hone ka soch hi bht rula jata hai--

aapki kavita ne to bas dil ki bat keh di--
ekdum sachi baat aur sache ehsaas kahe hain aapne Khwaish ji--

daad dene ko shabd hi nhi hain

khus rahie
muskurate rahie


Jab Koi Dil Se Kuch kehta Hai, To Woh Baatein Daad
Se Bahut badhkar Hoti Hai..Aapne Apne Dil Ki Baat Kahi, Aur Kya Chahiye S.f Ji..Bhateeji Ko Apni Beti Maana..Aise Chache Bhi Kaha Milte Hai Aajkal...
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«Reply #23 on: March 25, 2012, 12:33:54 PM »
Quote from: khwaish on March 25, 2012, 10:15:36 AM

Jab Koi Dil Se Kuch kehta Hai, To Woh Baatein Daad
Se Bahut badhkar Hoti Hai..Aapne Apne Dil Ki Baat Kahi, Aur Kya Chahiye S.f Ji..Bhateeji Ko Apni Beti Maana..Aise Chache Bhi Kaha Milte Hai Aajkal...
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jb koi insaan 11 ka ho ar ek bachchi jnam lekar uske god me khelte hue badi hui ho to aisi feel aa hi jati h Khwaish g
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«Reply #24 on: March 25, 2012, 12:57:59 PM »
Quote from: sarfira on March 25, 2012, 12:33:54 PM
jb koi insaan 11 ka ho ar ek bachchi jnam lekar uske god me khelte hue badi hui ho to aisi feel aa hi jati h Khwaish g


Ji Bilkul S.f Ji..Bilkul Sach!!!! icon_flower icon_flower
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«Reply #25 on: March 25, 2012, 01:03:08 PM »
Quote from: dolly on March 15, 2012, 02:14:06 AM
bahu hi khubsoorat...khwaish ji...v true fact...lines in punjabi also gud one...God bless ur daughter...


Thankssss a lotttttttt Dolly ji..

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«Reply #26 on: March 25, 2012, 02:31:43 PM »
Quote from: qalb on March 15, 2012, 06:07:36 AM
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«Reply #27 on: March 25, 2012, 03:00:09 PM »
Quote from: khwaish on March 25, 2012, 12:57:59 PM

Ji Bilkul S.f Ji..Bilkul Sach!!!! icon_flower icon_flower
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«Reply #28 on: March 26, 2012, 10:33:38 AM »
Quote from: kamal aggarwal on March 15, 2012, 06:12:52 AM
khwaish ji aapki is peshash ka katra -katra mein mehsus kar rah hoon mere pass bhi ek beti hai is liye apki feelings ko feel karte hain hum.is jamaane me beti hona kismat ki baat hai.thanks for haring this with us Applause Applause Applause


god bless SANJAM


Thankyou Soooooooooooooooooo Much For those Blessings..


Ji Bilkul Sach..Beti Hona Bhi Kismato Ki Baat Hai..Love & blessings For Your Daughter Too icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
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«Reply #29 on: March 28, 2012, 01:03:11 PM »
Quote from: SkykiTears on March 15, 2012, 06:30:03 AM
Sach pe Khwaish Ji Aap ne bht hi badya likha hai..Yeh Wahi baap Likh Sakte Hai Joe Apni Betiyon Koe Khud Se Bhi Zayada Muhabbat karta Hoe.. Aur Is Duniya May Aeise Baap bht Kam Betiyon koe Milti Hai..Allah Aap Ki beti Ki Naseeb Pe Khushiyan hi Khushiyan De Ameen... Aur Allah Aap Jeise Baap Is Duniya Pe Har Betiyon koe De Ameen.. You Are Really Lucky Sanjam K Tumhe Itna Pyaar Dete Wala Pita Mila Hai.. Usual Smile


 Thankyou ! Thankyou ! Thankyou ! Thankyou !

Yeh Comment Mere Liye Kisi Bhi Daad Se badhkar Hai..

Thankssssssssssssss a Million For Those Words...

Thankyou Soooooooooooooooooooo Much For da Blessings.....

Thankyou Sooooooooooooooo Much Sky ki Tears Ji..
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