Betiyan "Khwaish" -Panna 3:Shayri-E-Dard

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«Reply #30 on: March 29, 2012, 10:02:20 AM »

waah khwaish ji....
behtareen peshkash... seedhe dil me utarte hai aapki is rachna ke shabd....
very hearttouching creation....


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Re: Betiyan "Khwaish"

«Reply #31 on: March 29, 2012, 02:15:51 PM »

Quote from: pankajwfs on March 15, 2012, 07:49:53 AM

BAHU BAHUT HI PYARI AUR SUNDAR PESKASH HAI AAPKI KHWAISH JI PAD KE ANKHEIN BHI NAM HO GAI. AP KI HITARAH MERI BHI EK CHOTI SI BITYA HAI ISE PAD KE MUJHE BHI USKA CHERA SAMNE AAGYA. BAHUT ACHE BHAWON KI BYANGI KI HAI AAPNE. BHAGWAN APKO AUR APKI BITYA KO SADA KHUS AUR SALAMAT RAKHE. EK BAAR PHIR SE BAHUT BAHUT MUBARAK BAAD AAPKI IS RACHNA KE LIYE. Clapping Smiley

Meri iss Kavita Se Agar Aapke Aankhon ke Saamne Aapke Beti Ki tasveer Aaa jaaye, To Mujhe Aur Kya Chahiye..Main Chaahta Bhi yehi tha, Ke Har Padhne wala iss Kavita Ko Sirf Padhe Naa, Mehsoos Kare..Aapne Mehsoos Kiya..Aapka Teh Dil Se Shukriya...

Aapke Pyaar Aur Duayon Ke Liye Mere paas Koi Lafz Nahi..Thanks a Million!!!

Waheguru Aapko Aur Aapke pariwaar Ko Huemsha Khush Rakhe


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Re: Betiyan "Khwaish"

«Reply #32 on: May 11, 2012, 09:14:23 AM »

Quote from: Sheba on March 15, 2012, 06:20:03 PM

sanjam ko mera pyaar aur duaein. mujhe uska naam yaad tha bahut pyar naam hai. aur baap ko bedi se bahut mohabbat hoti hai.mere daddy mujhe bahut chahte the and very very caring i lost him 17 years back
aap ki iss poem mein ye ehsaas hua thik isi tarah daady pyaar karte the tearyeyed

Quote from: Sheba on March 15, 2012, 06:20:03 PM

Sheba Ji Pyaar Aisi cheez Hai Jiski Khusboo Sadiyon Tak Zinda Rehti Hai..Aur Phir Baap-Beti Ka Rishta To Meri Nazar Mein Duniya Ka Sabse Khoobsurat RishtoN Mein Ek Hai..Jo Chale Jaate Hai,Vaapas To Nahi Aate Par Unka Pyaar,UnkI Duayen, Humesha Apne Saath Reh Jaate Hai......

Aapko Meri Beti Ka naam Yaad Tha,Yeh Jaankar Behad Khushi Hui Hai..

Aapne Apna Waqt Diya..Aapka Teh Dil Se Shukriya


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Re: Betiyan "Khwaish"

«Reply #33 on: May 11, 2012, 09:26:27 AM »

Quote from: Niha Khan on March 15, 2012, 06:32:33 PM

sach kahun to aapki is peshkash ne dil jeet liya
Wah kya khoobsurti se baap beti ke rishte ko aapne lafzon mein piroya hai bohat khoob
Har lafz aankhon se hokar dil mein sama gaya
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Thankyou Soooooooooooooooooo Much Niha Ji..

Thanks a Lotttttt For Appreciating!!!


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Re: Betiyan "Khwaish"

«Reply #34 on: October 25, 2012, 06:57:23 AM »

Quote from: manzil-e-ishq on March 29, 2012, 10:02:20 AM

waah khwaish ji....
behtareen peshkash... seedhe dil me utarte hai aapki is rachna ke shabd....
very hearttouching creation....

Thankyou Sooooooooooo Much Dear Priya...

Thanks For Your Time...


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Re: Betiyan "Khwaish"

«Reply #35 on: July 11, 2013, 11:11:36 PM »

Quote from: Niha Khan on March 15, 2012, 06:32:33 PM

sach kahun to aapki is peshkash ne dil jeet liya
Wah kya khoobsurti se baap beti ke rishte ko aapne lafzon mein piroya hai bohat khoob
Har lafz aankhon se hokar dil mein sama gaya
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Thanks a Milllion Niha Ji


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Re: Betiyan "Khwaish"

«Reply #36 on: July 15, 2013, 07:15:03 PM »

Sir Sirrrrr.. Lafz Kam Padh Gaye Hain Aapki Is Rachna Ki Shaan Me Likhne Ke Liye.. Khwaish Bhai.. Kya Likha Hai Yaaar.. Har Koi Aisa Nahi Likh Sakta.. Samaaj Me Faili Ek Kadwai Succhaai Ko Bhi aapne Bayan Kiya Hai.. Jo Ki Such Me Samaaj Ke liye ek Sawaal Chod Gaya..!! Lajawab aur Shaandaar Peshkash Hai Bhai..!!

Waqai Betiyaan Bahut Pyaari Hoti Hain.. Mujhe Bhi Such Me Beti Hi Chahiye.. Jo Bus Bolti Rahe.. zidd Karti Rahe.. Papa Yeh Chahiye Wo chahiye.. Yeh Kya Hai..wo Kya hai..? Aise Sawaal karti Rahe Bas..!! Aur Main Uski Shaitaaniyaan Dekh Kar Muskuraata Rahun.. Hahhaha..!!

Salut Hai Sir Is Rachna Ke liye

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Re: Betiyan "Khwaish"

«Reply #37 on: July 20, 2013, 07:15:41 PM »

kya kahe...kin alfazon mein taarif karu iss rachna ki khwaish ji...
seriously...rula diya inn bhavnao k sailaab ne aur mujhe apni vidaai k waqt mein le gya...mere papa ne mujhe muskuraate huye vidaa kiya taaki meri aankhon mein aansu na aaye aur mere vidaa hone k baad sabse zyada wahi roye...bahut mushkil hota hai ye lamha vidaai ka...bahut khob likha khwaish ji....
hats off to you....


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