dil ki baat (nam)

by poonamA on February 06, 2013, 09:39:48 AM
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dil ke baat mere ab tak na hai tune jani
dur hokar saja di hai mujhe jaise kala pani
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«Reply #1 on: February 06, 2013, 09:45:36 AM »
acha likha hai magar saza galat hai
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«Reply #2 on: February 06, 2013, 09:48:39 AM »
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Quote from: saahill on February 06, 2013, 09:45:36 AM
acha likha hai magar saza galat hai
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«Reply #3 on: February 06, 2013, 09:57:23 AM »
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«Reply #4 on: February 06, 2013, 10:43:56 AM »
nice ji
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«Reply #5 on: February 06, 2013, 10:49:15 AM »
Quote from: poonamA on February 06, 2013, 09:39:48 AM
dil ke baat mere ab tak na hai tune jani
dur hokar saja(SAZAA) di hai mujhe jaise kala pani

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«Reply #6 on: February 06, 2013, 05:24:45 PM »
bahut khoob...
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«Reply #7 on: February 07, 2013, 07:20:49 AM »
very nice
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«Reply #8 on: February 07, 2013, 01:58:05 PM »
sainijee, rajanjee thx
Quote from: sksaini4 on February 06, 2013, 09:57:23 AM
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«Reply #9 on: February 07, 2013, 01:58:52 PM »
qalbjee thx for correction
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«Reply #10 on: February 07, 2013, 02:00:02 PM »
aqsh & nand thx
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