~~"GAMM HI RAQEEB HAI"~~

by k.shael on September 11, 2008, 12:48:00 PM
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KISI SE KARE KYA SHIKAYAT HAM, YE TO APNA-2
NASIB HAI, KISI KO MILI KHUSHIYA DONO JAHAN
KI, TO KISI KE GAM HI RAQEEB HAI,

HOTI JO MOHABBAT KI LAKIR MERE HAATH ME
TO SHAYAD WO BEWAFA NA HOTA, WO AAJ HAI
JO BADLA YE BHI MERA NASIB HAI,

KAASH KI HOTA HAQ HAME KHUSHIYA CHUNNE
KA, TO KASAM SE KHUDA SE KARKE DUA CHUN
LETE USI KO JO MERE DIL KE KARIB HAI,

CHAHE BESHAK DE DI KHUDA NE SARI NIYAMATE
MUJHE, PAR AAJ BHI DIL ME EK KASAK HAI, HAI
DULAT SARI MAGAR HAM DIL SE GARIB HAI,

AKSAR AJNABI SE MOHABBAT HO JATI HAI, PAR
HAMESHA YE JUDAI BEECH AA JATI HAI, YE MILNA
BICHDNA DO DILWALO KA BADA AJEEB HAI,

PYAR TO SAB KARTE HAI MAGAR, APNE PYAR
KO PAA LENA SABKE BASS ME NAHI, SACH TO
YE HAI JO PAA LE APNE PYAR KO,

WO USS KHUDA KE BHI KARIB HAI…
           WO USS KHUDA KE BHI KARIB HAI…
BY. K.SHAEL
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rajsingh
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«Reply #1 on: September 11, 2008, 12:57:11 PM »
Aapne jo last line's likhi hain bilkul sahi likhi hain k pyar to sab kar lete hain lekin pyar pa lena sabke bass main nhi hota or jis ko apna pyar mil jaye us k liye khuda ki is se badi niyamat koi nhi hoti, wo kahte hain n pyar us se n karo jis ko aap chahte ho us ko karo jo aap ko chahta ho. aapne in do line's main sare pyar karne walon k dil ka haal likh diya hai.

keep it up  hello2 hello2 hello2
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k.shael
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«Reply #2 on: September 11, 2008, 12:59:46 PM »
THANX SO MUCH,
RAJ JI...
BY. K.SHAEL
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honeyrose
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«Reply #3 on: September 11, 2008, 02:32:38 PM »
Kamaal ka likha hai aapne shally ... Applause Applause Thumbs UP

AKSAR AJNABI SE MOHABBAT HO JATI HAI, PAR
HAMESHA YE JUDAI BEECH AA JATI HAI, YE MILNA
BICHDNA DO DILWALO KA BADA AJEEB HAI,

PYAR TO SAB KARTE HAI MAGAR, APNE PYAR
KO PAA LENA SABKE BASS ME NAHI, SACH TO
YE HAI JO PAA LE APNE PYAR KO,

WO USS KHUDA KE BHI KARIB HAI…
              tearyeyed
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k.shael
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«Reply #4 on: September 11, 2008, 02:33:57 PM »
 notworthy
BAHUT BAHUT SHUKRIYA HONEY DI,
BY. K.SHAEL
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Kanta
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«Reply #5 on: September 12, 2008, 05:18:16 AM »
derd mein likha he pasand aya ye ksheal, ye first line mein -2 kyu lagaya he sis?
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sameer.the.dj
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«Reply #6 on: September 13, 2008, 12:26:12 PM »
good one dear
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k.shael
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«Reply #7 on: September 13, 2008, 12:40:22 PM »
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THANX KANTA SIS,
-2 KA MATLAB HAI APNA-APNA
& THANX TO U ALSO SAMIR...
BY. K.SHAEL
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Kanta
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«Reply #8 on: September 13, 2008, 08:08:28 PM »
oh samji kshael to word kyu nahi likha esa poetry mein hota kiya
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k.shael
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«Reply #9 on: October 31, 2008, 02:24:21 PM »
THANX KANTA DEAR...
BY. K.SHAEL
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Pooja
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«Reply #10 on: October 31, 2008, 10:44:33 PM »
bahoot khoob shally!!
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k.shael
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«Reply #11 on: November 01, 2008, 12:17:53 PM »
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SHUKRIYA POOJA DIDI,
BY. K.SHAEL
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