~~"NAMI BESHUMAR"~~

by k.shael on July 09, 2008, 05:46:55 PM
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DAMAN MERA KABHI KHUSHIYO SE BHARA
THA,AAJ ISME AANSOO KA SAILAB HAI,

AANKHEN ME MERI KABHI THI CHAMAK PYAR
KI AAJ ISME CHHAYI NAMI BESHUMAR HAI,

DIL MERA KABHI KISI KE PYAR SE BEPANAH
BHARA THA,AAJ ISME NAFRAT KA AAYA TUFAAN
HAI,

ZINDAGI MERI KABHI RISHTO SE BHARI THI,
AAJ JAISE HAR RISHTA HOTE HUE BHI VIRAAN
HAI,

SHARIR ME KOI BASTA THA ROOH BAN KAR,
AAJ YE ROOH JAISE KUCH LAMHO KI MEHMAN HAI,

DHADKAN ME LETA THA KABHI SAANS KOI,
AUR AAJ HAR SAANS JAISE BENAAM HAI,

HOTHON PE KABHI THI MUSKANE KHILARI AAJ
YE HOTHN MERE UDAASI KI KAHANI SUNA RAHE
HAI,

KABHI CHAND BHI BEPANAH ROSHNI DETA THA
MERE GHAR PE,AAJ WAHI CHAND MERE GAMM ME
SHAMIL HOKAR AAHE BHARTA HAI,

KABHI HAM THE EK DUSRE KI JAAN KRISHNA
AAJ JAAN TERI DEKH AAKHRI SAANSE LE RAHI
HAI....

BY. K.SHAEL


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Talat
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«Reply #1 on: July 09, 2008, 05:49:11 PM »
Bohot khoob K. Shael  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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Muhammed
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«Reply #2 on: July 09, 2008, 06:01:35 PM »
Shally Bahot Hi Khoob Lafz Hai Tumhare..

Daaman - Aankhe - Dil - Zindagi - Sharir -
Dhadkan - Honth - Chaand - Fir Jaan - Fir Krishana..
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Sammual
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«Reply #3 on: July 09, 2008, 07:51:25 PM »
Bahut Khoob Shally Ji.
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kiiller_1
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«Reply #4 on: July 09, 2008, 08:37:53 PM »
DAMAN MERA KABHI KHUSHIYO SE BHARA
THA,AAJ ISME AANSOO KA SAILAB HAI,

AANKHEN ME MERI KABHI THI CHAMAK PYAR
KI AAJ ISME CHHAYI NAMI BESHUMAR HAI,

DIL MERA KABHI KISI KE PYAR SE BEPANAH
BHARA THA,AAJ ISME NAFRAT KA AAYA TUFAAN
HAI,

ZINDAGI MERI KABHI RISHTO SE BHARI THI,
AAJ JAISE HAR RISHTA HOTE HUE BHI VIRAAN
HAI,

SHARIR ME KOI BASTA THA ROOH BAN KAR,
AAJ YE ROOH JAISE KUCH LAMHO KI MEHMAN HAI,

DHADKAN ME LETA THA KABHI SAANS KOI,
AUR AAJ HAR SAANS JAISE BENAAM HAI,

HOTHON PE KABHI THI MUSKANE KHILARI AAJ
YE HOTHN MERE UDAASI KI KAHANI SUNA RAHE
HAI,

KABHI CHAND BHI BEPANAH ROSHNI DETA THA
MERE GHAR PE,AAJ WAHI CHAND MERE GAMM ME
SHAMIL HOKAR AAHE BHARTA HAI,

KABHI HAM THE EK DUSRE KI JAAN KRISHNA
AAJ JAAN TERI DEKH AAKHRI SAANSE LE RAHI
HAI....


 Applause  Applause  :clap

u r gr8 tarif ke liye alfash nahi milte Clapping Smiley
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unlock ali
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«Reply #5 on: July 10, 2008, 12:30:19 AM »
bahut achha likha hai shael,SHARIR ME KOI BASTA THA ROOH BAN KAR,
AAJ YE ROOH JAISE KUCH LAMHO KI MEHMAN HAI,

DHADKAN ME LETA THA KABHI SAANS KOI,
AUR AAJ HAR SAANS JAISE BENAAM HAI,
bahut dard bhara hai in line me
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Rajbir
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«Reply #6 on: July 10, 2008, 12:43:52 AM »
Shally

Ek baar phir se dard he dard ! sad5

Well expressed emotions ! Thumbs UP

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syednaami
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«Reply #7 on: July 10, 2008, 12:57:39 AM »
Krishna jee,,, aap ne ek baar phir aansu baha diye hamare...
Buhat dard aur tadap ke saath likha hai...
Very agonizing...
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kaushikbhawna008
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«Reply #8 on: July 10, 2008, 10:32:46 AM »
shally bohut hi dard bhari dastan apni shayri mei utari hai
gud work shally
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k.shael
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«Reply #9 on: July 10, 2008, 11:49:10 AM »
THANK U SOOOO MUCH TO ALL
OF U MY DEAR FRIENDS,
THANX FOR APPRICIATE MY WORK
IT'S MY PLEASURE....
BY. K.SHAEL
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honeyrose
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«Reply #10 on: July 10, 2008, 01:34:07 PM »
Very nice shally khoob likha hai ..    Applause
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k.shael
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«Reply #11 on: July 10, 2008, 02:52:56 PM »
THANX HONEY DI,
BY. K.SHAEL
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Aryaan
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«Reply #12 on: July 21, 2008, 06:22:16 AM »
Bohat khoob K.Shael...
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k.shael
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«Reply #13 on: August 18, 2008, 12:48:39 PM »
THANX ARYAAN JI,
AAP HAMARI THREAD PE AAYE
AACHA LAGA,
SHUKRIYA....
BY. K.SHAEL
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diya786
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«Reply #14 on: August 18, 2008, 01:16:43 PM »
DAMAN MERA KABHI KHUSHIYO SE BHARA
THA,AAJ ISME AANSOO KA SAILAB HAI,

AANKHEN ME MERI KABHI THI CHAMAK PYAR
KI AAJ ISME CHHAYI NAMI BESHUMAR HAI,

DIL MERA KABHI KISI KE PYAR SE BEPANAH
BHARA THA,AAJ ISME NAFRAT KA AAYA TUFAAN
HAI,

ZINDAGI MERI KABHI RISHTO SE BHARI THI,
AAJ JAISE HAR RISHTA HOTE HUE BHI VIRAAN
HAI,

SHARIR ME KOI BASTA THA ROOH BAN KAR,
AAJ YE ROOH JAISE KUCH LAMHO KI MEHMAN HAI,

DHADKAN ME LETA THA KABHI SAANS KOI,
AUR AAJ HAR SAANS JAISE BENAAM HAI,

HOTHON PE KABHI THI MUSKANE KHILARI AAJ
YE HOTHN MERE UDAASI KI KAHANI SUNA RAHE
HAI,

KABHI CHAND BHI BEPANAH ROSHNI DETA THA
MERE GHAR PE,AAJ WAHI CHAND MERE GAMM ME
SHAMIL HOKAR AAHE BHARTA HAI,

KABHI HAM THE EK DUSRE KI JAAN KRISHNA
AAJ JAAN TERI DEKH AAKHRI SAANSE LE RAHI
HAI....

BY. K.SHAEL




bahut khoob shally
bahut pasand aaya hamesha ki tarah aapka yeh kalam bhi 
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