"SANDOOK JO KHOLA PURANA"

by k.shael on June 13, 2008, 05:52:30 PM
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AAJ JO KAI DINO BAAD KHOLA SANDOOK
PURANA, KAI PURANI YAADE JAISE TAZA HO
GAYI, JAISE HAR EK CHEEZ DIL KO JHAK
-JHOR GAYI,

AAJ JO KAI DINO BAAD KHOLA SANDOOK PURANA,

HAATH MEIN AAYI EK TASVEER USKI KUCH
AUR CHEEZE MILI USKI, HAATH THAM GAYE
MERE, PAR AANSOO THAM NAHI PAYE....

AAJ JO KAI DINO BAAD KHOLA SANDOOK PURANA,

PAKAD KE USKI TASVEER KO KAI BAAR NIHARA
JAISE YAAD AA GAYA HO HAR PAL USKE SAATH
GUJARA, MASOOM SA CHEHRA USKA DEKH RAHA
THA TOOK-TOOK, MACHAL GAYA AAJ PHIR DIL
HAMARA....

AAJ JO KAI DINO BAAD KHOLA SANDOOK PURANA,

AATE DEKH KISI KO APNE PASS BADI MUSHQIL
SE APNE DIL KO SAMBHALA, KHO SI GAYI THI
USKI YAADOO MEIN KISI KE SAAYE NE AAWAJ
DEKAR WAPIS PUKARA,

AAJ JO KAI DINO BAAD KHOLA SANDOOK PURANA,

AAKAR WAPIS KHAYALO SE BAHAR KHUD KO ZARA
SAMBHALA, NAMI POONCHI AANKHON KI, PAR DIL
KO AABHI TAK HO RAHA THA DARD PURANA,

AAJ JO KAI DINO BAAD KHOLA SANDOOK PURANA,

KAMI NAHI HAI ZINDAGI MEIN PAR JANE KYUN
AAJ DIL NE USKI KAMI KA EHSAAS KARA DALA,
BHUL SE CHUKE THE USE AAJ PHIR CHURIYON
KI KHANAK JANE KYUN USS KA NAAM PUKARA

AAJ JO KAI DINO BAAD KHOLA SANDOOK PURANA,

SAMET DI SARI CHEEZE PHIR SE PHIR SANDOOK
KO DAFNA DALA,
ROK LIYE HAATH APNE AAJ KHUD KO EK BAAR PHIR
SE MAAR DALA....

BY. K.SHAEL
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«Reply #1 on: June 13, 2008, 06:24:08 PM »
Shally,

Main yeh kalam padh kar daawe ke saath keh sakta hoon ki yahan par har kisi ko apni zindagi ka koyi na koyi aisa lamha zaroor yaad aaya hoga !

"AAJ JO KAI DINO BAAD KHOLA SANDOOK PURANA" Applause

Mujhe apni zindagi ke kuch beete pal yaad aa gaye yeh padh kar  tearyeyed
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Sonia01
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«Reply #2 on: June 13, 2008, 06:44:31 PM »
bahut accha likha hai aapne Shael jee  Applause
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«Reply #3 on: June 13, 2008, 08:01:15 PM »
Bahoot khoob shally!! bahoot achi tarah se bhawnao ko apne shabdo main piroya hai!! Good creation!!
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«Reply #4 on: June 13, 2008, 08:12:40 PM »
Very nice shally acha likha hai aapne... Applause
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«Reply #5 on: June 14, 2008, 01:52:22 AM »


"AATE DEKH KISI KO APNE PASS BADI MUSHQIL
SE APNE DIL KO SAMBHALA, KHO SI GAYI THI
USKI YAADOO MEIN KISI KE SAAYE NE AAWAJ
DEKAR WAPIS PUKARA,


KAMI NAHI HAI ZINDAGI MEIN PAR JANE KYUN
AAJ DIL NE USKI KAMI KA EHSAAS KARA DALA"


wah wah...bahut khoob k.shaelji...bahut hi khoobsurti se aapne yeh kavita likhi hai..bahut ache. Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: June 14, 2008, 12:18:58 PM »
shally bohut hi emotional hai ye poetry sach mei aapki is kavita ne hamein beete lamhon se ek baar fir ru-b-ru kara dia

good creation shally
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«Reply #7 on: June 14, 2008, 02:55:07 PM »
THANX SOOOO MUCH,
MY DEAR FRIENDS....
MERI WAJAH SE AAP SAB KO
PURANE KISSE YAAD AA GAYE,
SORRY AGAR AAP MEIN SE KOI BHI
HURT HUA HO TO....

BY. K.SHAEL
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Roja
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«Reply #8 on: August 27, 2008, 12:21:38 PM »
oh Shael,Wonderful creation. Dard hai her ek line main.
Bahut accha likha hai aapne Shael. Good work and very touchy  Applause  Applause
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k.shael
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«Reply #9 on: August 27, 2008, 02:15:40 PM »
THANX SO MUCH ROZA DIDI,
BY. K.SHAEL
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Talat
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«Reply #10 on: August 27, 2008, 03:59:59 PM »
Good creation Shael.... Applause
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k.shael
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«Reply #11 on: August 27, 2008, 04:09:33 PM »
THANX CELMIRA JI,
BY. K.SHAEL
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angel4u
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«Reply #12 on: August 30, 2008, 01:12:04 PM »
Really heart touching lines.
wonderful
keep it up.
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k.shael
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«Reply #13 on: August 30, 2008, 01:21:40 PM »
THANX ANGEL,
NICE TO SEE U IN MY THREAD,
BY. K.SHAEL
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«Reply #14 on: August 30, 2008, 06:13:42 PM »
 Applause Applause Applause Applause
nice creation shally...
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