-----/// Thode aur dard bhar gaye ///----- Hriday

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raah-e-zindagi   ke    aise  moud  par  aake  thahar gaye
saare   rishte   kaanch  ki   tarhaa   tootke   bikhar  gaye

bhool  ke  apnaa   pataa   gali  gali  bhatakte  rahe hum
le  chali  hawaa   jidhar   humein, hum  bas  udhar gaye

woh  jo  kal tak  saraankhon  par bithaate  the  humein
hum  unki  hi  nazron  se kuch  is   tarhaa  se utar gaye

raat  ke  andhere  mein  hazaar  waade  kiye  the  jisne
subah hote  hi woh apne saare waadon se mukar gaye

woh  kuch  khaas  log  jinhe dost kahaa karte the hum
zarurat  padne  pe  woh  saare  dost jaane kidhar gaye

kharaab mausam ke kaaran  woh  saath  they shaayad
mausam ke theek hote  hi  woh saare apne  ghar gaye

inaam  aisaa diyaa  hamaari wafaa kaa unhone humein
dard ke samundar mein woh thode aur dard bhar gaye






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«Reply #1 on: June 19, 2015, 03:55:56 AM »
very lovely janab
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«Reply #2 on: June 19, 2015, 05:08:43 AM »
Awesome.
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«Reply #3 on: June 19, 2015, 05:27:29 AM »
waah waah baut khoob
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«Reply #4 on: June 19, 2015, 10:21:39 PM »
kyaa baat hai Janaab dheron daad.
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«Reply #5 on: June 20, 2015, 04:21:00 AM »
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bahut khub hridayji.....
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«Reply #6 on: June 20, 2015, 05:23:36 AM »
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bohat bohat umda peshkash hriday ji kabil e tarif hai apki kalaam dheroooooooo daaaaaaad or rau kabool kijiye
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«Reply #7 on: June 20, 2015, 11:12:27 AM »
वाह....वाह.....

बहुत उम्दा.....

ढेरों दाद और दिली मुबारकबाद.....
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«Reply #8 on: June 20, 2015, 12:59:02 PM »
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bahut bahut khoob Usual Smile
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«Reply #9 on: June 22, 2015, 12:29:46 PM »
बहुत ही सुंदर पेशकश ढेरो दाद कबूल करे  Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: June 22, 2015, 05:33:06 PM »
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«Reply #11 on: November 24, 2015, 06:21:22 AM »
bahut bahut shukriyaaa Asif ji....!!!


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«Reply #12 on: November 25, 2015, 07:28:53 PM »
Thank you soooo much Pooja ji....!!!

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«Reply #13 on: January 11, 2016, 09:17:08 PM »
bahut bahut shukriyaaa Saini ji....!!!

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«Reply #14 on: April 24, 2016, 10:16:22 AM »
bahut bahut shukriyaaa Surindar ji...!!!

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