~~"UDAASI KA PEHRA"~~ -Panna 3:Shayri-E-Dard

k.shael

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«Reply #30 on: March 02, 2009, 08:07:49 AM »

Quote from: jasbirsingh on March 02, 2009, 07:00:30 AM

wah, excellent piece of poetry shally, bahut badiya

jasbir singh

Shukriya Jas ji,

Shally.


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k.shael

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Re: ~~"UDAASI KA PEHRA"~~

«Reply #31 on: March 02, 2009, 08:08:57 AM »

Quote from: Muhammed on March 02, 2009, 07:14:50 AM

Waah shally dear...shayri e dard mein to Tum ik se badhkar ik kalam likhti ho..aaj kaafi dino baad yo.pe aaya aur first tera hi kalaam padha maine..jee shally bahot hi khoob aur pahele se kafi kaafi best...!!!

Shukriya Muhammed,

Aacha laga bahut dino baad aapko apne thread me dekhkar,

Shally.


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paani

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Re: ~~"UDAASI KA PEHRA"~~

«Reply #32 on: March 03, 2009, 04:58:08 AM »

bahut khub


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k.shael

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Re: ~~"UDAASI KA PEHRA"~~

«Reply #33 on: March 03, 2009, 05:16:16 AM »

Quote from: paani on March 03, 2009, 04:58:08 AM

bahut khub

Shukriya Paani Dear,

Shally.


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Prateek Mardia

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Re: ~~"UDAASI KA PEHRA"~~

«Reply #34 on: March 03, 2009, 05:21:56 PM »

Quote from: k.shael on February 25, 2009, 09:20:58 AM

Dard se mera rishta bahut gehra lagta hai,
Meri har khushi pe udaasi ka pehra lagta hai,

Dil ne to baha diye khoon ke aansoo,
Par aakhon me aab bhi ek sailaab thehra sa lagta hai,

Har kisi ki fitrat ko pehchaana nazroon ne,
Ek khud ka hi ajnabi sa chehra lagta hai,

Doobne ke darr se na utre log jahaan,
Hame uss majhdhaar me hi sehra lagta hai…

Shally.

Good one shally ji.bahut accha likha hai aapne.


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smardia

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Re: ~~"UDAASI KA PEHRA"~~

«Reply #35 on: March 03, 2009, 06:54:35 PM »

wah wah bahoot dard bhari daastan likhi hai aapne Shallyji... Applause

Waise dard se rista mera tujh se bhi hai purana
Jab Jeevan path per chal diya tou fir kya ghabrana
Jo mile sweekaar hai mujhe, khushi kya udaasi kya
Paani jahan gehra ho, vahan gota mujhe hai lagaana
Tum teer ko tarsa karo,mere liye majhdhaar kya

Quote from: k.shael on February 25, 2009, 09:20:58 AM


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