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Author Topic: ~~"BHOODE MAA-BAAP KI LACHARII"~~  (Read 1534 times)
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« on: November 20, 2008, 12:12:42 PM »
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AAJ BHOODE MAA-BAAP KI LACHAARI NAJAR AATI
HAI, SOCHTE HAI DIL ME DEKHTE HAI AAB KIS BETE
KE GHAR ME THEHRNE KI BAARI AATI HAI,

SUBAH-SUBAH NIKAL GAYI BAHOO BHI BETE KE
SAATH SHAYAD AAB USE BHOODO KI DEKHBHAAL
KARNE ME SHARAM SI AATI HAI,

JISKE KHUSHI SE DHALWAYE THE KADAM APNE
GHAR ME AAJ USI LAKSHMI ROOPI BAHOO KO
BHOODE SAAS-SASUR KE KADMO KE NISHAAN USKE
CHAMCHMATE FARSH PAR DAAG NAJAR AATE HAI,

JISKI PADAYI KE LIYE DIN RAAT ANDHA-DHOONDH
KAAM KIYA BAAP NE, AAJ USI BAAP KE CHASHME KE
TOOT JAANE PAR BETE KO BAHANE HAZAAR NAZAR
AATE HAI,

JISE BETI BANAKAR DIL AUR GHAR ME JAGAH DI
MAA BAAP NE, AAJ WAHI BHOODE MAA-BAAP USS
BAHOO KO GHAR ME FAALTOO PADE PURANE
FARNITURE KI TARAH USKE GHAR KI SHOBHA
GHATATE NAZAR AATE HAI,

WAAH RE KHUDAYA KYA KARAMATE HAI TERI JISS
BACHE KO SULAANE KE LIYE, RAAT BHAR JAAGE
MAA-BAAP, AAJ UNKI KHAANSI AUR KHARAATE HI
BETE KO CHAIN SE SONE ME DIKKAT KAR JAATE HAI…

BY. K.SHAEL
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« Reply #1 on: November 20, 2008, 12:26:08 PM »
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Shally Ji.. Kamaal ka likha hai aapne.. Applause Applause
Bahut achha topic choose kiya hai.. aur us par bahut prabhaavshaali likha hai..

Yun hi likhti rahiyega... Thumbs UP
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« Reply #2 on: November 20, 2008, 12:27:50 PM »
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Shally Ji.. Kamaal ka likha hai aapne.. Applause Applause
Bahut achha topic choose kiya hai.. aur us par bahut prabhaavshaali likha hai..

Yun hi likhti rahiyega... Thumbs UP

SHUKRIYA MAHIYA JI FOR GIVING
MY THREAD A VALUEABLE COMMENT,
AAP JAISE SHAYRO KE SAMNE YE WORK
TO KUCH BHI NAHI...
BY. K.SHAEL
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« Reply #3 on: November 20, 2008, 12:32:42 PM »
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SHUKRIYA MAHIYA JI FOR GIVING
MY THREAD A VALUEABLE COMMENT,
AAP JAISE SHAYRO KE SAMNE YE WORK
TO KUCH BHI NAHI...
BY. K.SHAEL

Arey yaar... main koi shayar nahin hoon..
Adni si Tuk-bandi artist hoon.. Usual Smile

Itna sir naa chadhaaya karo mujhe,
Aur please sirf "MahiYa" ya "Shikha" sun.na aur padhna jyada achha lagta hai, "Ji" padh kar mujhe apni Naani JI aur Daadi JI ki yaad aa jaati hai.. Usual Smile

Aap bahut achha likhti hai, Aise hi likhti rahiye humesha.. Thumbs UP
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« Reply #4 on: November 20, 2008, 12:56:53 PM »
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Arey yaar... main koi shayar nahin hoon..
Adni si Tuk-bandi artist hoon.. Usual Smile

Itna sir naa chadhaaya karo mujhe,
Aur please sirf "MahiYa" ya "Shikha" sun.na aur padhna jyada achha lagta hai, "Ji" padh kar mujhe apni Naani JI aur Daadi JI ki yaad aa jaati hai.. Usual Smile

Aap bahut achha likhti hai, Aise hi likhti rahiye humesha.. Thumbs UP

MAHIYA JI,
AGAR AAP SHAYAR NAHI HAI AISA KAHENGI TO HAM
SABKA KYA HOGA, HAME TO KOI POOCHEGA BHI NAHI,
WAISE HAM BHI TUK-BHADHI KI KARTE HAI,
AUR HAM AAPKO MAHIYA JI ISLIYE KEHTE HAI KYUNKI
PUNJAABI DIL SE IJJAT AUR MAAN DETE HAI...
BY. K.SHAEL
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« Reply #5 on: November 20, 2008, 01:18:12 PM »
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Nice work shally  Applause
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« Reply #6 on: November 20, 2008, 01:51:51 PM »
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 Applause Applause
bahut khoob bahut hi aacha likha
hai shally aap ne, bahut hi sunder








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« Reply #7 on: November 20, 2008, 02:17:54 PM »
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AAJ BHOODE MAA-BAAP KI LACHAARI NAJAR AATI
HAI, SOCHTE HAI DIL ME DEKHTE HAI AAB KIS BETE
KE GHAR ME THEHRNE KI BAARI AATI HAI,

SUBAH-SUBAH NIKAL GAYI BAHOO BHI BETE KE
SAATH SHAYAD AAB USE BHOODO KI DEKHBHAAL
KARNE ME SHARAM SI AATI HAI,

JISKE KHUSHI SE DHALWAYE THE KADAM APNE
GHAR ME AAJ USI LAKSHMI ROOPI BAHOO KO
BHOODE SAAS-SASUR KE KADMO KE NISHAAN USKE
CHAMCHMATE FARSH PAR DAAG NAJAR AATE HAI,

JISKI PADAYI KE LIYE DIN RAAT ANDHA-DHOONDH
KAAM KIYA BAAP NE, AAJ USI BAAP KE CHASHME KE
TOOT JAANE PAR BETE KO BAHANE HAZAAR NAZAR
AATE HAI,

JISE BETI BANAKAR DIL AUR GHAR ME JAGAH DI
MAA BAAP NE, AAJ WAHI BHOODE MAA-BAAP USS
BAHOO KO GHAR ME FAALTOO PADE PURANE
FARNITURE KI TARAH USKE GHAR KI SHOBHA
GHATATE NAZAR AATE HAI,

WAAH RE KHUDAYA KYA KARAMATE HAI TERI JISS
BACHE KO SULAANE KE LIYE, RAAT BHAR JAAGE
MAA-BAAP, AAJ UNKI KHAANSI AUR KHARAATE HI
BETE KO CHAIN SE SONE ME DIKKAT KAR JAATE HAI…

BY. K.SHAEL


Bohot hi khoob Shael Applause Applause

Aapne jo likha hai, aaj jaane kitne gharon ki sachchai hai, jahan boodhe maa baap ki haalat purane furniture se bhi badtar hai....Bachchon ke liye wohi maa baap unki so-called society main ek dhabbe ban gaye hain, jin maa baap ne apne khoon se unki zindagi ko seencha tha....

Heartiest congratulations to you for writing on this topic, Keep it up.
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« Reply #8 on: November 20, 2008, 03:45:42 PM »
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Nice work shally  Applause

SHUKRIYA SAJID JI,
BY. K.SHAEL
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« Reply #9 on: November 20, 2008, 03:46:35 PM »
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Applause Applause
bahut khoob bahut hi aacha likha
hai shally aap ne, bahut hi sunder








Baadal



SHUKRIYA BAADAL JI,
BY. K.SHAEL
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« Reply #10 on: November 20, 2008, 03:47:45 PM »
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Bohot hi khoob Shael Applause Applause

Aapne jo likha hai, aaj jaane kitne gharon ki sachchai hai, jahan boodhe maa baap ki haalat purane furniture se bhi badtar hai....Bachchon ke liye wohi maa baap unki so-called society main ek dhabbe ban gaye hain, jin maa baap ne apne khoon se unki zindagi ko seencha tha....

Heartiest congratulations to you for writing on this topic, Keep it up.

SHUKRIYA CELMIRA JI,
AAPKO APNE THREAD PAR DEKHNE KI AADAT SI HO GAYI HAI,
AGAR AAP NA AAO TO JAISE THREAD SOONA SA LAGTA HAI,

SACH KAHA HAI AAPNE KI AAJ BAHUT SE GHARO KI YE SACHAYI
HAI KI BHODDE MAA-BAAP BECHARE DHAKKE KHAATE HAI,UNHE
MAAN-SAMAAN NAHI DIYA JAATA,
HOPE CHILDS LOVE THEIR OLD PARENTS,

BY. K.SHAEL
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« Reply #11 on: November 20, 2008, 04:18:21 PM »
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pahli baar shayad maine tumhe kisi samajik vishay par padha hai...aur manna padega.....ki yahan bhi tumhaari kalam ne samaj ki ek behad ghinouni kuriti ki aur sabka dhyan khincha hai.....is rachna ke liye ....hazaaron ashirwaad
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« Reply #12 on: November 20, 2008, 04:36:19 PM »
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pahli baar shayad maine tumhe kisi samajik vishay par padha hai...aur manna padega.....ki yahan bhi tumhaari kalam ne samaj ki ek behad ghinouni kuriti ki aur sabka dhyan khincha hai.....is rachna ke liye ....hazaaron ashirwaad

SHUKRIYA BEKARAR JI,
AAPKA COMMENT PAD KAR DIL KO BEHAD KHUSHI HUI
AAJ LAGTA HAI KI MERI LIKHNE KI SAADHNA RANG
LAAYI HAI...
UMEED HAI AAPKA AASHIRWAAD U HI HAMESHA MERE
SAATH RAHEGA...
BY. K.SHAEL
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« Reply #13 on: November 21, 2008, 05:15:42 PM »
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SHUKRIYA CELMIRA JI,
AAPKO APNE THREAD PAR DEKHNE KI AADAT SI HO GAYI HAI,
AGAR AAP NA AAO TO JAISE THREAD SOONA SA LAGTA HAI,

SACH KAHA HAI AAPNE KI AAJ BAHUT SE GHARO KI YE SACHAYI
HAI KI BHODDE MAA-BAAP BECHARE DHAKKE KHAATE HAI,UNHE
MAAN-SAMAAN NAHI DIYA JAATA,
HOPE CHILDS LOVE THEIR OLD PARENTS,

BY. K.SHAEL

Is izzat afzaai ka kaise jawab doon Shally.....bas Yunhi likhti raho dear....aur hum padhte rahenge Usual Smile
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« Reply #14 on: November 21, 2008, 05:36:53 PM »
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Shally

Bahut he sarahniya likha hai tumne Applause Applause Applause

Humein apne buzurg Maa Baap ki sache dil se sewa karni chahiye...yeh mera maanana hai! Kyunki kal humne bhi is daur se guzarna hai!

Magar is kahani ka ek doosra roop bhi hota hai...Aaj subah he maine IBN7 par Zindagi Live program dekha internet par...

Aap sab bhi dekhiye...neeche link de raha hoon !

http://ibnlive.in.com/videos/78291/zindagi-live-saluting-selfmade-bravehearts.html?from=search
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