Ghazal-2

by Safi Yani on June 24, 2009, 08:30:48 AM
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Ab aur haadson ka mujhe intezaar kyon
Unse taallukaat mere ustawaar(acche)kyon

Asbaab(wajahen,zariye)hain tabaahi ke apne hi ird-gird
Khatraa dikhaai deta hai sarhad ke paar kyon

Duniya ke aainon mein mera aks mukhtalif(alag)
Phir aainon pe mujhko bhala aitabaar kyon

Raahen khuli hain par tere uthte nahin kadam
Kaandhon pe tere aaj bhi maazi(past)ka baar(bojh) kyon

Jo bekhabar hain apne faraaiz(farzo)se aaj tak
Haathon mein unke aaj bhi hai iktadaar(hukumat,satta) kyon

Hosho-hawaas mein the sabhi pehredaar jab
Phir kaid se wo ho gaya aakhir faraar kyon

Rehne ko ghar kisi ko mayassar nahin "Safi"
Banta hai shandaar kisi ka mazaar kyon
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«Reply #1 on: June 24, 2009, 08:41:47 AM »
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Very nice and beautiful gazal Safi yani ji. Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: June 24, 2009, 09:00:08 AM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on June 24, 2009, 08:41:47 AM
Very nice and beautiful gazal Safi yani ji. Applause Applause Applause

Thanks a lot
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«Reply #3 on: June 24, 2009, 10:00:05 AM »
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bahut bahut achha likha h aapne Safi ji...... Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: June 24, 2009, 11:10:46 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Bahaut bahaut acha likha hai Safi jee apne...

Kuch lines mann main agayi apki ghazal padte padte...Pesh kar raha hoon...

Hai itna pak mazhab mera Islam,
Toh uss ke naam par yeh atangwad kyun...

Jo hai itna khubsoorat desh mera yeh Pakistan,
Toh iss par atangwad ka ilzam kyun...

Badnaam karke rakha hai mere desh ko yeh buzdilon ne,
Aakhir yeh atangwadion ko paison ka sahara kyun...

Jab hai unn ke kandhe itne kamzor Rahim,
Toh aise netaon par hi mere desh ka daromadar kyun...
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«Reply #5 on: June 25, 2009, 08:45:56 AM »
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Quote from: poppoetry on June 24, 2009, 10:00:05 AM
bahut bahut achha likha h aapne Safi ji...... Applause Applause Applause
Thanking you for the feedback.
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«Reply #6 on: June 25, 2009, 08:52:09 AM »
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Quote from: -Rahim- on June 24, 2009, 11:10:46 AM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Bahaut bahaut acha likha hai Safi jee apne...

Kuch lines mann main agayi apki ghazal padte padte...Pesh kar raha hoon...

Hai itna pak mazhab mera Islam,
Toh uss ke naam par yeh atangwad kyun...

Jo hai itna khubsoorat desh mera yeh Pakistan,
Toh iss par atangwad ka ilzam kyun...

Badnaam karke rakha hai mere desh ko yeh buzdilon ne,
Aakhir yeh atangwadion ko paison ka sahara kyun...

Jab hai unn ke kandhe itne kamzor Rahim,
Toh aise netaon par hi mere desh ka daromadar kyun...
Thanks.Aapke khayalat padh kar bhi bahut accha laga.
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«Reply #7 on: June 25, 2009, 09:11:50 AM »
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 beautiful gazal,Rahim ji,very nice lines . Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #8 on: June 25, 2009, 09:45:35 AM »
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Quote from: Safi Yani on June 25, 2009, 08:52:09 AM
Thanks.Aapke khayalat padh kar bhi bahut accha laga.
Quote from: madhuwesh on June 25, 2009, 09:11:50 AM
beautiful gazal,Rahim ji,very nice lines . Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Shukriya Madhu jee aur Safi jee...
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«Reply #9 on: June 25, 2009, 12:30:55 PM »
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Quote from: Safi Yani on June 24, 2009, 08:30:48 AM
Ab aur haadson ka mujhe intezaar kyon
Unse taallukaat mere ustawaar(acche)kyon

Asbaab(wajahen,zariye)hain tabaahi ke apne hi ird-gird
Khatraa dikhaai deta hai sarhad ke paar kyon

Duniya ke aainon mein mera aks mukhtalif(alag)
Phir aainon pe mujhko bhala aitabaar kyon

Raahen khuli hain par tere uthte nahin kadam
Kaandhon pe tere aaj bhi maazi(past)ka baar(bojh) kyon

Jo bekhabar hain apne faraaiz(farzo)se aaj tak
Haathon mein unke aaj bhi hai iktadaar(hukumat,satta) kyon

Hosho-hawaas mein the sabhi pehredaar jab
Phir kaid se wo ho gaya aakhir faraar kyon

Rehne ko ghar kisi ko mayassar nahin "Safi"
Banta hai shandaar kisi ka mazaar kyon

Excellent  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bohot Khoob Safi Sahab
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«Reply #10 on: June 25, 2009, 12:31:37 PM »
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Quote from: -Rahim- on June 24, 2009, 11:10:46 AM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Bahaut bahaut acha likha hai Safi jee apne...

Kuch lines mann main agayi apki ghazal padte padte...Pesh kar raha hoon...

Hai itna pak mazhab mera Islam,
Toh uss ke naam par yeh atangwad kyun...

Jo hai itna khubsoorat desh mera yeh Pakistan,
Toh iss par atangwad ka ilzam kyun...

Badnaam karke rakha hai mere desh ko yeh buzdilon ne,
Aakhir yeh atangwadion ko paison ka sahara kyun...

Jab hai unn ke kandhe itne kamzor Rahim,
Toh aise netaon par hi mere desh ka daromadar kyun...

Nice one from you too, Rahim
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«Reply #11 on: June 26, 2009, 05:18:37 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on June 25, 2009, 12:30:55 PM
Excellent  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bohot Khoob Safi Sahab
Thanks.
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«Reply #12 on: June 26, 2009, 09:16:04 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on June 25, 2009, 12:31:37 PM
Nice one from you too, Rahim
Shukriya Talat di!!!
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«Reply #13 on: July 02, 2009, 06:55:14 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause sunny sunny



BAHUT KHOOB BOSS...TOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO GUD.....OUT STANDING  SAFI BHAI..MAZAA

AA GAYAA....PADH KAR...!!
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