Yahaan

by Safi Yani on June 12, 2009, 04:13:18 AM
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Fakhr se kahte ho mustakbil(future)jinhe tum mulk ka
Chand(kucch)sikkon ke iwaz(badle)bachche woh bikte hain yahaan

Kya shikayat berukhi ki, talkhiyon(kadwahat)ka kya gilaa
Dil to aksar muskuraahat se bhi dukhte hain yahaan

Rang apne bhar ke kucch auron ki takhleekat(creations) mein
Be-hunar kitne hain jo fankaar bante hain yahaan

Ek fakat(sirf)gulshan ki raanaai(beauty)pe tum jaate ho kyon
Kucch darakhton(trees) ki jaron mein saanp palte hain yahaan
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«Reply #1 on: June 12, 2009, 04:30:17 AM »
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Fakhr se kahte ho mustakbil(future)jinhe tum mulk ka
Chand(kucch)sikkon ke iwaz(badle)bachche woh bikte hain yahaan

Kya shikayat berukhi ki, talkhiyon(kadwahat)ka kya gilaa
Dil to aksar muskuraahat se bhi dukhte hain yahaan

Rang apne bhar ke kucch auron ki takhleekat(creations) mein
Be-hunar kitne hain jo fankaar bante hain yahaan

Ek fakat(sirf)gulshan ki raanaai(beauty)pe tum jaate ho kyon
Kucch darakhton(trees) ki jaron mein saanp palte hain yahaan
safiji bahot hi achha likha hai.
aise hi likha kare. Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: June 12, 2009, 04:35:18 AM »
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safiji bahot hi achha likha hai.
aise hi likha kare. Applause Applause Applause

Thanks for the feedback.I would like you to read my other compositions at your best leisure.
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shab
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«Reply #3 on: June 12, 2009, 04:42:33 AM »
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LAJAWAB SAFI SAHAB
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«Reply #4 on: June 12, 2009, 04:46:38 AM »
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LAJAWAB SAFI SAHAB

Thanks a lot shab
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«Reply #5 on: June 12, 2009, 04:49:19 AM »
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MOST WELCUM SAFI JI
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