dil se makaar niklaa,,,ghazal,,,jeet jainam saini

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hans kar jo bhee mila hai dil se  makkaar niklaa,
bharosa  kiya jiss par woh  shaks  gadaar niklaa,

kahne ko mohhobat main zindagee bohat haseen hai,
qareeb se  jaana  ishq to  aashiq  bimaar niklaa,

raah e manjil  main umeed  na  kisi  humsafer ki,
yuh to mera  rakeeb hee  dil kaa  dildaar niklaa,

roo padaa woh  shaks mari  aankho,n koh padh kar,
jisne samjhaa dard  wahee dost  jaanisaar niklaa,

zulam par zulam karta raha mujh par woh be raham,
ehsaas hua to apnee  nazar main gunahgaar niklaa,

sab dur chale jaate  hai,n  qareeb hokar yahaa,n,
alam e tanhai main apna gam hee waffadaar niklaa,

nafrat kaise karte usko jo dil main ghar kar gaya,
mere behte huye har aansu main uska pyaar niklaa,
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«Reply #1 on: June 24, 2015, 07:45:48 PM »
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waah waah waah kyaa baat hai, dheron daad Rau ke saath. (Due)
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«Reply #2 on: June 24, 2015, 11:43:06 PM »
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Awesome and Rau due.
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«Reply #3 on: June 25, 2015, 02:48:54 AM »
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waah waah waah kyaa baat hai, dheron daad Rau ke saath.
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Jeet Jee main ne aapke total mein Rau Jamaa kar diyaa hai qabool keejiye.
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«Reply #4 on: June 25, 2015, 06:45:17 AM »
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बहुत ही सुंदर पेशकश दिल को छू गई गजल आपकी एक राऊ के साथ कबूल करे =आर के रस्तोगी
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«Reply #5 on: June 25, 2015, 09:16:53 AM »
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«Reply #6 on: June 25, 2015, 12:38:50 PM »
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बहुत ही खूब.....
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«Reply #7 on: June 25, 2015, 01:28:12 PM »
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«Reply #8 on: June 25, 2015, 04:46:29 PM »
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bohat bohat shukriya surinder sir ji dil se daaaaadddd or rau kabool
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«Reply #9 on: June 25, 2015, 04:47:08 PM »
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bohat bohat shukriya pooja ji
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«Reply #10 on: June 25, 2015, 04:47:54 PM »
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tah dil se shukriya surinder sir ji
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bohat bohat shukriya ram sir ji daaaaaaadddd or rau dil se kabool
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shukriya nandbahu sir ji
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