~~"Kyun Na Laut Chale Dil"~~ by Shally.

by k.shael on October 16, 2009, 01:34:55 PM
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Kyun na laut chale dil, purani tanhaiyon me!!,
Waise bhi rakha kya hai,mohabbat aur ladayiyo.n me??

Bete nahi  ban paate sahara, Aaj Maa-Baap Ka!!
Rishte fikke kar diye khoon ke, kal ki aayi lugayiyo.n ne..

Koi zinda hai mohabbat,to koi khuda ka naam le ke,
Aur kisi ko jeete jee maar diya, kambhakt judayiyo.n ne!!

Waqt ki kami, Paise ki chinta, sabko iss dour me,
Aaj insaan himmat se nahi, magar chalta hai dawayiyo.n se!!

Dekha hai bahut baar, iss dharti pe hota gamasaan,
Par apni maa ki raksha, bahut khoob ki desh ke sipahiyo.n ne!!

Kyun na lout chale dil, purani tanhaiyon me!!,
Waise bhi rakha kya hai,mohabbat aur ladayiyo.n me??


Shally.
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«Reply #1 on: October 16, 2009, 02:07:35 PM »
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Kyun na laut chale dil, purani tanhaiyon me!!,
Waise bhi rakha kya hai,mohabbat aur ladayiyo.n me??

Bete nahi  ban paate sahara, Aaj Maa-Baap Ka!!
Rishte fikke kar diye khoon ke, kal ki aayi lugayiyo.n ne..

Koi zinda hai mohabbat,to koi khuda ka naam le ke,
Aur kisi ko jeete jee maar diya, kambhakt judayiyo.n ne!!

Waqt ki kami, Paise ki chinta, sabko iss dour me,
Aaj insaan himmat se nahi, magar chalta hai dawayiyo.n se!!

Dekha hai bahut baar, iss dharti pe hota gamasaan,
Par apni maa ki raksha, bahut khoob ki desh ke sipahiyo.n ne!!

Kyun na lout chale dil, purani tanhaiyon me!!,
Waise bhi rakha kya hai,mohabbat aur ladayiyo.n me??


Shally.



Bahut Khoob Shally Ji. Very Nice Applause Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #2 on: October 16, 2009, 02:41:56 PM »
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Bahut bahut khoob Shally ji,very touching and marvelous creation.excellent. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: October 16, 2009, 02:50:37 PM »
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Mashallah Mashallah,Har Line Shally Ji,.
Sachchaai Bayan Kar Rahi Hai, Lajawaab Tohfa Hai Ye Ghazal Yoindia Ke Liye,.

Great Creation,.

MA,.

Aage Bhi Yahi Umeed Hai Aaose,.
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«Reply #4 on: October 16, 2009, 06:14:16 PM »
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Kyun na laut chale dil, purani tanhaiyon me!!,
Waise bhi rakha kya hai,mohabbat aur ladayiyo.n me??

Bete nahi  ban paate sahara, Aaj Maa-Baap Ka!!
Rishte fikke kar diye khoon ke, kal ki aayi lugayiyo.n ne..

Koi zinda hai mohabbat,to koi khuda ka naam le ke,
Aur kisi ko jeete jee maar diya, kambhakt judayiyo.n ne!!

Waqt ki kami, Paise ki chinta, sabko iss dour me,
Aaj insaan himmat se nahi, magar chalta hai dawayiyo.n se!!

Dekha hai bahut baar, iss dharti pe hota gamasaan,
Par apni maa ki raksha, bahut khoob ki desh ke sipahiyo.n ne!!

Kyun na lout chale dil, purani tanhaiyon me!!,
Waise bhi rakha kya hai,mohabbat aur ladayiyo.n me??


Shally.


Superb N Fabulous Bahoot Khub Shally Ji......
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«Reply #5 on: October 16, 2009, 06:56:12 PM »
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Ati sunder likha hai aapne Shally-ji.....Gehri chot karti hui panktiyen hai aapki...Wah !!!
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Applause Applause Applause

Ek naari ho kar bhi aapne...
Lugayiyo.n ko doshi theraya.. icon_salut
kabile tariff hai... icon_salut
Par yahi katu satay hai, kadvee sachayeee hai is yug ki....

Par Tahaiyon mai jakar kya hoga ?
Shayad swayam ka sukun....
Aawashyakta hai samast aadhunik nari samaaj ko samjhane ki...
Alpkalin sahuliyat k liye jeevan bhar ke asli sukh se vanchit kyu hoti hain...
Kya pane k liye kya kho rahi hain wo...
Likhiye koi aisa nagma jo kranti paida kar de...


Kyun na laut chale dil, purani tanhaiyon me!!,
Waise bhi rakha kya hai,mohabbat aur ladayiyo.n me??

Bete nahi  ban paate sahara, Aaj Maa-Baap Ka!!
Rishte fikke kar diye khoon ke, kal ki aayi lugayiyo.n ne..

Koi zinda hai mohabbat,to koi khuda ka naam le ke,
Aur kisi ko jeete jee maar diya, kambhakt judayiyo.n ne!!

Waqt ki kami, Paise ki chinta, sabko iss dour me,
Aaj insaan himmat se nahi, magar chalta hai dawayiyo.n se!!

Dekha hai bahut baar, iss dharti pe hota gamasaan,
Par apni maa ki raksha, bahut khoob ki desh ke sipahiyo.n ne!!

Kyun na lout chale dil, purani tanhaiyon me!!,
Waise bhi rakha kya hai,mohabbat aur ladayiyo.n me??


Shally.

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«Reply #6 on: October 17, 2009, 09:52:30 PM »
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Bahoot Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Shally , Very Well expressed  !

Bahoot Khoob Smardia ji
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«Reply #7 on: October 18, 2009, 03:11:01 AM »
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Nice and excellent Superb N Fabulous Bahoot Khub Shally Ji...... Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: October 19, 2009, 12:27:04 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Khooob Shally!!!

Humesha Ki Bahut Khoobsurat!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #9 on: October 19, 2009, 08:32:36 AM »
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Kyun na laut chale dil, purani tanhaiyon me!!,
Waise bhi rakha kya hai,mohabbat aur ladayiyo.n me??

Bete nahi  ban paate sahara, Aaj Maa-Baap Ka!!
Rishte fikke kar diye khoon ke, kal ki aayi lugayiyo.n ne..

Koi zinda hai mohabbat,to koi khuda ka naam le ke,
Aur kisi ko jeete jee maar diya, kambhakt judayiyo.n ne!!

Waqt ki kami, Paise ki chinta, sabko iss dour me,
Aaj insaan himmat se nahi, magar chalta hai dawayiyo.n se!!

Dekha hai bahut baar, iss dharti pe hota gamasaan,
Par apni maa ki raksha, bahut khoob ki desh ke sipahiyo.n ne!!

Kyun na lout chale dil, purani tanhaiyon me!!,
Waise bhi rakha kya hai,mohabbat aur ladayiyo.n me??


Shally.


Wah wah Shally dear bahut bahut khoob likha hai. Daad kabul karna zarur  Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: November 02, 2009, 04:13:29 PM »
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Kyun na laut chale dil, purani tanhaiyon me!!,
Waise bhi rakha kya hai,mohabbat aur ladayiyo.n me??

Bete nahi  ban paate sahara, Aaj Maa-Baap Ka!!
Rishte fikke kar diye khoon ke, kal ki aayi lugayiyo.n ne..

Koi zinda hai mohabbat,to koi khuda ka naam le ke,
Aur kisi ko jeete jee maar diya, kambhakt judayiyo.n ne!!

Waqt ki kami, Paise ki chinta, sabko iss dour me,
Aaj insaan himmat se nahi, magar chalta hai dawayiyo.n se!!

Dekha hai bahut baar, iss dharti pe hota gamasaan,
Par apni maa ki raksha, bahut khoob ki desh ke sipahiyo.n ne!!

Kyun na lout chale dil, purani tanhaiyon me!!,
Waise bhi rakha kya hai,mohabbat aur ladayiyo.n me??


Shally.

Bahut khoob Shally Ji
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