samnder se nikli woh sip ki moti,,ghazal,,jeet jainam saini

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samnder se nikli hai woh seep ki moti,
makhmali bistar par woh chain se soti,

guftgu karte huye  gumsum ho jati thi,
naa jaane woh kiski yado,n main khoti,

kis duniya se aayi hai woh haseen pari,
khush naseebi hoti  ager woh meri hoti,

ruswaa huee koh dekhkar akser jeet kaa,
tadap uth ta dil mera jab bhi woh roti,

noor uske chahre se chalakta tha jaise,
ghar ko roshan karti woh deep ki jyoti,

khuwaabo,n main  khoyi naa jaane kiske,
honthon par tabassum kar  karwate leti,
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«Reply #1 on: June 14, 2015, 06:27:17 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: June 14, 2015, 08:02:20 PM »
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«Reply #3 on: June 15, 2015, 12:21:25 AM »
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kyaa baat hai waah waah
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Waah waah.....bahut hee sundar kalaam.....yun hee likhte rahiye
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bohat bohat shukriya touhid bhai jaan
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bohat bohat shukriya surinder sir ji dil se daaaddd kabool
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bohat bohat shukriya saini sir ji
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bohat bohat shukriya aru ji
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bohat bohat shukriya ram sir ji dil se daadd kabool
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बहुत खूब.....
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