Taish- maiN bhi KORAA huN, tum bhi SAADE ho...!! -Panna 2:Ghazals

sidra04

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«Reply #15 on: October 09, 2013, 03:35:00 PM »

hum meN bas tum ho, tum meN hum na hue,
hum diwaane hain, tum sayaane ho...

is sher me se saare hum nikaal ke main me badal lo.. sher aur khoobsurat ho jaaega.... ab to tum meri jan hi lene waale ho..... lol


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ghayal_shayar

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Re: Taish- maiN bhi KORAA huN, tum bhi SAADE ho...!!

«Reply #16 on: October 09, 2013, 03:50:42 PM »

Quote from: sidra04 on October 09, 2013, 03:35:00 PM

Sirda ji bahut bahut shukriya aapki salaah ka, khushi hui dekh kar ki aapne kuch islaah farmaane ki kosish ki, par mere khayaal se mujh meN ya hum meN hiN jaayega sher ke saath, Main shayad vyakarnik taur pe sahi na ho... Waise aapki nazr ka shukraguzaar huN, umeed hai aap aage bhi yuNhi hum logoN ki ilm afzaayi karte raheNge...!!


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ghayal_shayar

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Re: Taish- maiN bhi KORAA huN, tum bhi SAADE ho...!!

«Reply #17 on: October 09, 2013, 03:53:25 PM »

Quote from: sidra04 on October 09, 2013, 03:33:15 PM

hi taish,

Mujhe lagta hai pehle hi sher me shayad koi gadbadee hai..

maiN bhi koraa hooN, tum bhi saade ho,
maiN tera, tum mere sahaare ho...

tum ke saath tera ka combination theek nahi lag raha hai mujhe.. wese ye mera khayaal hai, pata nahi main sahi hoon ke ghalat , pls mind mat krna..

ek dost

Sirda ji bura maan.ne wali koi baat hi nahiN hai... Sach kahun to ye mujhe bhi ghalat laga tha fir kuch ilm waale logoN se poocha to unhone sahi kaha, nahiN to hume kahaaN koi ilm, bas jo dil men aata hai ghaseet dete haiN... Aaapka ek baar fir shukraguzaar huN itni paini nazar se ghazal pe gaur farmaane ka...!! Usual Smile


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sidra04

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Re: Taish- maiN bhi KORAA huN, tum bhi SAADE ho...!!

«Reply #18 on: October 09, 2013, 03:59:47 PM »

Thank you dost...


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ghayal_shayar

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Re: Taish- maiN bhi KORAA huN, tum bhi SAADE ho...!!

«Reply #19 on: October 09, 2013, 04:01:55 PM »

Quote from: sidra04 on October 09, 2013, 03:59:47 PM

Thank you dost...

u r welcome saaheb... par kam se kam apna naam to bata dijiye saaheb... bada ajeeb sa lagta hai sirda kehna, waise muaafi chaahuNga ki pehli baar aapse mukhatib hone ki vajah se aapke naam se naawaaqif huN... sad5


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sidra04

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Re: Taish- maiN bhi KORAA huN, tum bhi SAADE ho...!!

«Reply #20 on: October 09, 2013, 04:05:49 PM »

sidra is my name


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ghayal_shayar

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Re: Taish- maiN bhi KORAA huN, tum bhi SAADE ho...!!

«Reply #21 on: October 09, 2013, 04:06:58 PM »

Quote from: sidra04 on October 09, 2013, 04:05:49 PM

sidra is my name

Chaliye sirda saaheb ab umeed karta hun aage bhi yuNhi aapse mukhatib hote raheNge... Aur jald hi aapko padhne ka mauka bhi milegaa...


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sidra04

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Re: Taish- maiN bhi KORAA huN, tum bhi SAADE ho...!!

«Reply #22 on: October 09, 2013, 04:11:17 PM »

Sirda nahi yaar... koi sir dard thodi ho raha hai mujhe...
its S I D R A .... SIDRA ab samjhe..


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sidra04

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Re: Taish- maiN bhi KORAA huN, tum bhi SAADE ho...!!

«Reply #23 on: October 09, 2013, 04:12:25 PM »

wese maine aaj ek new post ki hai.. aap padhna.. ok
jaisi bhi lage pls pls plss sach sach batana ok.. main intzaar karungii


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ghayal_shayar

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Re: Taish- maiN bhi KORAA huN, tum bhi SAADE ho...!!

«Reply #24 on: October 09, 2013, 04:16:13 PM »

karungi...?? ahcha to main is ghalatfehmi ke liye bhi muafi chaahuNga, kyuki aapko tab se janaab keh raha huN... jarur mohtarma maiN abhi padh leta huN.. waise bhi aaj padhne ka dil jyada hai...!! Usual Smile


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aqsh

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Re: Taish- maiN bhi KORAA huN, tum bhi SAADE ho...!!

«Reply #25 on: October 09, 2013, 11:21:50 PM »

Behad khoooooooooooob taish ji.. bahut dino baad hi sahi par dekho aapki qalam chalne lag gayi na.. chaliye abhi ise stop nahi karna... likhte rahiye... mujhe har baar ki tarah yeh peshkash bhi pasand aayi.. dil se daad qubool kijiyega..

maiN bhi koraa hooN, tum bhi saade ho,
maiN tera, tum mere sahaare ho...

khaar ho, khaaq ho, khala koi tum,
apni maa ke magar dulaare ho...

dil shikastaa tumheN pata nahin hai,
kab mohabbat meN tum bhi haare ho...


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ghayal_shayar

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Re: Taish- maiN bhi KORAA huN, tum bhi SAADE ho...!!

«Reply #26 on: October 11, 2013, 02:46:42 AM »

Quote from: zarraa on October 09, 2013, 01:42:36 AM

Wwwwwaaaahhhhh .... kaafi waqt baad aapke qalaam ke dedaar hue Taish bhai .... lekin ise parh ke gaye waqt ki pooree bharpaayee ho gayee Usual Smile

Behad gehre aur dilchasp ehsaas ... bayaanee mein bhi taazgee ... bahaut hi khoob .... aur in aashaar pe to aur bhi zyaada daad ...

maiN bhi koraa hooN, tum bhi saade ho,
maiN tera, tum mere sahaare ho...

khaar ho, khaaq ho, khala koi tum,
apni maa ke magar dulaare ho...

dil shikastaa tumheN pata nahin hai,
kab mohabbat meN tum bhi haare ho...

waqt bhar dega gham tumhare sabhi,
kaisi khushfehmi tum bhi paale ho

zarra bhai bas aapke jaise bhai hain jinki duaayeN kheeNch laati haiN, bas yuNhi aap saath dete rahiye...!! Usual Smile


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