Taish- maiN bhi KORAA huN, tum bhi SAADE ho...!!

by ghayal_shayar on October 08, 2013, 11:48:16 PM
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Chaahe kitna bhi mashgalaa karna, Par mere saath tum chala karna,be-naqaab ghoomte ho sadkon per, Chodh do gareebon ka bhala karna,main tumhe roshini kahaan se doon, Meri fitrat nahi jalaa kerna, jab mujhe khud me dubona chaaho.. shuru milne ka silsila karna, Kya Tum mujhe ab bhi pyar karti ho..? pooch ker dil se faisla karna.....



maiN bhi koraa hooN, tum bhi saade ho,
maiN tera, tum mere sahaare ho...

khaar ho, khaaq ho, khala koi tum,
apni maa ke magar dulaare ho...

hum meN bas tum ho, tum meN hum na hue,
hum diwaane hain, tum sayaane ho...

lab ko tum ho mithaas zindagi ki,
chasm kehti hai tum to khaare ho...

dil shikastaa tumheN pata nahin hai,
kab mohabbat meN tum bhi haare ho...

zindagi ne kaha mohabbat se,
is riyaasat me tum to pyaade ho...

waqt bhar dega gham tumhare sabhi,
kaisi khushfehmi tum bhi paale ho...
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«Reply #1 on: October 09, 2013, 01:11:32 AM »
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Chaahe kitna bhi mashgalaa karna, Par mere saath tum chala karna,be-naqaab ghoomte ho sadkon per, Chodh do gareebon ka bhala karna,main tumhe roshini kahaan se doon, Meri fitrat nahi jalaa kerna, jab mujhe khud me dubona chaaho.. shuru milne ka silsila karna, Kya Tum mujhe ab bhi pyar karti ho..? pooch ker dil se faisla karna.....



maiN bhi koraa hooN, tum bhi saade ho,
maiN tera, tum mere sahaare ho...

khaar ho, khaaq ho, khala koi tum,
apni maa ke magar dulaare ho...

hum meN bas tum ho, tum meN hum na hue,
hum diwaane hain, tum sayaane ho...

lab ko tum ho mithaas zindagi ki,
chasm kehti hai tum to khaare ho...

dil shikastaa tumheN pata nahin hai,
kab mohabbat meN tum bhi haare ho...

zindagi ne kaha mohabbat se,
is riyaasat me tum to pyaade ho...

waqt bhar dega gham tumhare sabhi,
kaisi khushfehmi tum bhi paale ho...
bohat khubsoorat kalaam taish ji,..............har sher lajawab hai,.............bohat c daad,............
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«Reply #2 on: October 09, 2013, 01:39:35 AM »
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bahut khoob, Taish ji
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«Reply #3 on: October 09, 2013, 01:42:36 AM »
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Wwwwwaaaahhhhh .... kaafi waqt baad aapke qalaam ke dedaar hue Taish bhai .... lekin ise parh ke gaye waqt ki pooree bharpaayee ho gayee Usual Smile Behad gehre aur dilchasp ehsaas ... bayaanee mein bhi taazgee ... bahaut hi khoob .... aur in aashaar pe to aur bhi zyaada daad ...

maiN bhi koraa hooN, tum bhi saade ho,
maiN tera, tum mere sahaare ho...

khaar ho, khaaq ho, khala koi tum,
apni maa ke magar dulaare ho...

dil shikastaa tumheN pata nahin hai,
kab mohabbat meN tum bhi haare ho...

waqt bhar dega gham tumhare sabhi,
kaisi khushfehmi tum bhi paale ho
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«Reply #4 on: October 09, 2013, 02:13:00 AM »
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hum meN bas tum ho, tum meN hum na hue,
hum diwaane hain, tum sayaane ho...

dil shikastaa tumheN pata nahin hai,
kab mohabbat meN tum bhi haare ho...

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waah taish jee badi hi dilchasp peshkash rahi..

Maza aaya padhkar..laajawab, behad umda..

Dhero daad qubool farmaye..happy9
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«Reply #5 on: October 09, 2013, 02:25:57 AM »
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khaar ho, khaaq ho, khala koi tum,
apni maa ke magar dulaare ho...

hum meN bas tum ho, tum meN hum na hue,
hum diwaane hain, tum sayaane ho...


Waah waah waah Bhushan jee, maza aa gaya ye ash'aar bahut khoob rahe aur iss ka to jawaab nahiN:


lab ko tum ho mithaas zindagi ki,
chasm kehti hai tum to khaare ho...


DheroN daad aur ek Rau, yuN hi aate rahiye kaafi dinoN ke baad aaye aaj aap.
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«Reply #6 on: October 09, 2013, 03:26:09 AM »
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Chaahe kitna bhi mashgalaa karna, Par mere saath tum chala karna,be-naqaab ghoomte ho sadkon per, Chodh do gareebon ka bhala karna,main tumhe roshini kahaan se doon, Meri fitrat nahi jalaa kerna, jab mujhe khud me dubona chaaho.. shuru milne ka silsila karna, Kya Tum mujhe ab bhi pyar karti ho..? pooch ker dil se faisla karna.....



maiN bhi koraa hooN, tum bhi saade ho,
maiN tera, tum mere sahaare ho...

khaar ho, khaaq ho, khala koi tum,
apni maa ke magar dulaare ho...

hum meN bas tum ho, tum meN hum na hue,
hum diwaane hain, tum sayaane ho...

lab ko tum ho mithaas zindagi ki,
chasm kehti hai tum to khaare ho...

dil shikastaa tumheN pata nahin hai,
kab mohabbat meN tum bhi haare ho...

zindagi ne kaha mohabbat se,
is riyaasat me tum to pyaade ho...

waqt bhar dega gham tumhare sabhi,
kaisi khushfehmi tum bhi paale ho...


bahut khoob icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower!
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«Reply #7 on: October 09, 2013, 03:53:27 AM »
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bohat khubsoorat kalaam taish ji,..............har sher lajawab hai,.............bohat c daad,............

laaiba ji tareef ka bahut bahut shukriya bas aage v aap yunhi saath deti raheN...
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«Reply #8 on: October 09, 2013, 03:55:56 AM »
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maiN bhi koraa hooN, tum bhi saade ho,
maiN tera, tum mere sahaare ho...

khaar ho, khaaq ho, khala koi tum,
apni maa ke magar dulaare ho...

hum meN bas tum ho, tum meN hum na hue,
hum diwaane hain, tum sayaane ho...

lab ko tum ho mithaas zindagi ki,
chasm kehti hai tum to khaare ho...

dil shikastaa tumheN pata nahin hai,
kab mohabbat meN tum bhi haare ho...

zindagi ne kaha mohabbat se,
is riyaasat me tum to pyaade ho...

waqt bhar dega gham tumhare sabhi,
kaisi khushfehmi tum bhi paale ho...

Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause ApplauseLaajawaB.!!
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«Reply #9 on: October 09, 2013, 04:10:37 AM »
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Taish Sahaab Aadaab...!

Janab bade dinoN baad koi kalaam pesh ki hai aapne... achchi kalaam kahi hai, pur asar ashaar rahe sabhi...

Is khoob kalaam par humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... bazm ko roshan karte rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez...

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«Reply #10 on: October 09, 2013, 09:12:34 AM »
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very very nice
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«Reply #11 on: October 09, 2013, 09:13:47 AM »
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beautiful beautiful
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«Reply #12 on: October 09, 2013, 12:10:38 PM »
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 Applause badi umda peshkash hai...Bahut bahut mubaarak ho taish sb.!
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«Reply #13 on: October 09, 2013, 03:09:25 PM »
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bahut khoob, Taish ji

Hasan saaheb aapki daad sar aaNkhon pe janaba, bahut bahut shukriya izzat afzaayi ka, yuNhi aage bhi saath dete raheN janaab...!!
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«Reply #14 on: October 09, 2013, 03:33:15 PM »
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hi taish,

Mujhe lagta hai pehle hi sher me shayad koi gadbadee hai..

maiN bhi koraa hooN, tum bhi saade ho,
maiN tera, tum mere sahaare ho...

tum ke saath tera ka combination theek nahi lag raha hai mujhe.. wese ye mera khayaal hai, pata nahi main sahi hoon ke ghalat , pls mind mat krna..

ek dost
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