~~"Doonghi Dil Wali Saanjh E"~~ by Shally.

by k.shael on October 19, 2009, 12:56:04 PM
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Hai khabar menu ki tu kise hor di sougaat e,
Par mein tenu apna rabb manya eh mere dil di baat e,

Pyaar karda e koi taan kar len diyo yaaro,
Eh na pucho pyaar karan waliya nu ki teri kihdi jaat e,

Tere din ne nasiba wale tere mukhde wangu,
Sada kol taan marya hoya dil te gamma wali raat e,

Pyaar karna te nibhaouna koi sokhi gall ni,
Harde nahi aashik, koi khushi te koi gamm naal aabad e,

Unjh taan tera mera koi rishta nahi hai par,
Rabb jaanda ki meri tere naal doonghi dil waali sanjh e,

Shally.
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Sammual
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«Reply #1 on: October 20, 2009, 04:19:34 AM »
Wow Bahut Hi Wadiya Likheya Hai Shally Ji.Very Nice Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #2 on: October 20, 2009, 07:46:59 AM »
Bahut khoob Shally ji .poora kavita nahi samjhi par jitna samajh mein aayee kamaal ke hai. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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Dalwara
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«Reply #3 on: October 21, 2009, 02:55:21 AM »
A very nice ghazal Shally!

Dalwara
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Roja
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«Reply #4 on: October 21, 2009, 03:05:25 AM »
Hai khabar menu ki tu kise hor di sougaat e,
Par mein tenu apna rabb manya eh mere dil di baat e,

Pyaar karda e koi taan kar len diyo yaaro,
Eh na pucho pyaar karan waliya nu ki teri kihdi jaat e,

Tere din ne nasiba wale tere mukhde wangu,
Sada kol taan marya hoya dil te gamma wali raat e,

Pyaar karna te nibhaouna koi sokhi gall ni,
Harde nahi aashik, koi khushi te koi gamm naal aabad e,

Unjh taan tera mera koi rishta nahi hai par,
Rabb jaanda ki meri tere naal doonghi dil waali sanjh e,

Shally.


Wah wah kya khoob likha hai tumne shally dear... bahut bahut khoob  Applause
Applause
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Sager4u
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«Reply #5 on: October 24, 2009, 05:18:13 AM »
Shally ji maaf karna mujhe panjabi nahi aati hai but jitna samajha accha laga ji
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lovely_nancy
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«Reply #6 on: November 21, 2009, 06:13:12 PM »
awww
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #7 on: November 21, 2009, 07:01:13 PM »
Wah! Bahut khoob Shally Ji
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pankshivam
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«Reply #8 on: November 26, 2009, 08:44:15 PM »
Really Great Job Shallyji Applause Applause Applause
Dil Ko Choo Liya Is Thread ne
This One is my Favorite One
Isi Tarah Likhte Rahiye
~Pank~
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shab
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«Reply #9 on: November 27, 2009, 02:17:11 AM »
k.shael ji bahut ache likhte ho
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lovely_nancy
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«Reply #10 on: January 03, 2010, 05:32:38 PM »
nyc... Applause   Applause   Applause
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lovely_nancy
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«Reply #11 on: January 09, 2010, 02:13:43 AM »
wow............ Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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