Kaisa zinda ho mere bagair, zara likh dena

by roshan20 on January 25, 2008, 03:06:09 PM
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Apne haathon se kaheen mera naam likh dena…
Tum du’a mat maangna sirf du’a likh dena…
Iss qadar zamane ne kar diya badnaam mujko…
Zinda rahoon to jeene ki saza likh dena…
Main rote huve dost ko manaoo kaise…
Roothne wale yeh meri khata likh dena…
Juda ho ke tujh se jee lenge…
Mere makhmali haathon se apni ek ada likh dena…
Tum kehte thay tere bin jee na sakengay…
Akele kaise jee rahe ho zara likh dena…
Kar ke mujhko deewana jaa rahe ho kyon…
Kaise ki thi Dosti ki ibtida likh dena…
Agar teri nazron mein ye sab jurm hai…
To tum apni taraf se koi saza likh dena…(NM)
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«Reply #1 on: January 25, 2008, 03:46:54 PM »
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wah kaya baat hai... bahot khoob roshan20!!! kaya lines hai.. thanks for sharing with us!!!!

Iss qadar zamane ne kar diya badnaam mujko…
Zinda rahoon to jeene ki saza likh dena…
Tum kehte thay tere bin jee na sakengay…
Akele kaise jee rahe ho zara likh dena…
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«Reply #2 on: January 25, 2008, 04:57:06 PM »
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Nice Sharing, its suit more to "Dard e Judai", hence moving it there.
Also, we have changed subject to be more descriptive.
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«Reply #3 on: January 25, 2008, 07:45:36 PM »
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JISNE BHI YEH LIKHA HAI BAHUT KHOOB,HAR EK LINE APNE AAP MEIN EK SHER HAI..THANX A LOT FOR SHARING...
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«Reply #4 on: January 26, 2008, 07:13:57 AM »
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bahut khub
likha hai hume bhi aapne fasane bahut teri hatheli par
padh lo kabhi to,jawab bhi likh dena.
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«Reply #5 on: November 07, 2009, 10:46:30 PM »
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