Kaash tum....

by ishu_singh10 on August 29, 2010, 03:23:39 PM
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Kash tm DEKH sakti,
tute hue dil ko,
behte hue aansu ko,
is adhure mausam ko.


Kash tm PADH sakti,
mere haatho k lakiro ko,
khwabo ki tabero ko,
dil k afsano ko.


Kash tm SAMAJH sakti,
mere lafzo ki gehrai ko,
hotho ki sachchai ko,
mehfil ki tanhai ko.


Kash tm Jod skti, is dil ko,
is rishte ko,
is wade ko.


Lekin ye soch kar khamosh ho jata hu,

kash tm jaan sakti is MOHABBAT ko...
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«Reply #1 on: August 29, 2010, 05:53:50 PM »
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Ishu Jee aadab,

Bahut umdaa lafz batore hai aapne jazbaat bayaan karne ke liye....  Daad janab...

And haan one suggestion you you wroted all invisible things for visualisation, but this line is visual " bahete ansu" in real also so change your ansu word in invisible thins ...

Wel good work ....
keep posting..
Keep writting......           

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«Reply #2 on: August 30, 2010, 02:32:53 AM »
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Hi Parwaaz,

Thanks for your suggestion.bt in that line word "aansu" is not mean to TEARS. Its means TIME.. Its aannsu.
Kaash tm dekh sakti,is behte hue time/samay/aansu ko..

Actually i have taken dis word frm german directory.

Thanx!
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«Reply #3 on: August 30, 2010, 05:28:27 AM »
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mastam poem ji..simple and meaningfull........

kaash tum jaan sakte
iss zamane ki ruswai ko
iss mausam e tanhai ko
iss dil ki rubaai ko

kash tum samjh sakte
tum bin sehmi raaton ko
meri ankahi baton ko
mere dar mere jazbaaton ko

kaash tum dekh sakte
mere andekhe sapne ko
mere sath chalte kisi saaye ko
mere kampkapate hothon ko

kaash tum mera sath de sakte
meri uljhane suljhane me
meri baat manwane me
ye zindagi hasen banane me

par ye ho na saka aur

tumne mujhe kho diya
iss jaanne aur samjhne me.......
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #4 on: August 31, 2010, 01:34:35 AM »
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Kash tm DEKH sakti,
tute hue dil ko,
behte hue aansu ko,
is adhure mausam ko.


Kash tm PADH sakti,
mere haatho k lakiro ko,
khwabo ki tabero ko,
dil k afsano ko.


Kash tm SAMAJH sakti,
mere lafzo ki gehrai ko,
hotho ki sachchai ko,
mehfil ki tanhai ko.


Kash tm Jod skti, is dil ko,
is rishte ko,
is wade ko.


Lekin ye soch kar khamosh ho jata hu,

kash tm jaan sakti is MOHABBAT ko...

Nice one
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ishu_singh10
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«Reply #5 on: August 31, 2010, 02:11:29 AM »
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Wah kasak ji..true wordings.
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