~~"Dev Ki Love Story by Shally."~~

by k.shael on September 15, 2009, 06:10:49 AM
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«Reply #15 on: September 18, 2009, 05:19:31 AM »
BATAYE NA SHALLY JI AAGE KYA HUA.....
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #16 on: September 18, 2009, 07:27:48 AM »
Phir kiyaaaaaaaaa huaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa shally jiiii.
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k.shael
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«Reply #17 on: September 18, 2009, 10:49:28 AM »
Thanx for ur replies frnds..

Aage..


Ghar bann jaane se sab khush the, aab Dev ki study to complete ho hi chuki thi to usne job doodni shuru ki, shuruaat me niraasha haath lagi par jald hi use aachi job mil gayi..isi beech Dev ke ek frnd ne use bola ki wo apni girl-frnd ko milna chahta hai, par uske pass byic nahi hai, isi liye usne dev ko bola ki wo apni byic lekar uske sath chale, dev ne time manage kiya aur use agle din chalne ke liye haan bol di, Dev ka dost kaafi khush hua, usne thanx bhi kiya, agle din wo dono shaam ko tyaar hue, aur nikal pade uske dost ki Girl-frnd se milne, unn logo ne restaurent me milne ka mann banaya, restaurent pahunch kar unhone dekha ki Dev ke dost ki girl-frnd bhi apni frnd ke saath aayi hui thi, sab ne formally hi hello kiya aur beth gaye, thodi der wo sab u hi baatein karte rahe, phir unhone coffee aur snaks order kiye, tab tak Dev ka dost apni Girl-frnd se baatcheet karne me busy ho gaya aur Dev aur wo ladki jo sath aayi thi dono akele se ho gaye, to dev ne baat karni chahi, par kuch soch ke chup sa ho gaya, phir usne coffee peete time dobara se uss ladki se baat karni shuru ki, usse uski life, family, place ke baare me baat ki, aur apne baare me bataya, wo dono lovers jahaan apni baaton me khoye hue the, wahi ye dono apni nayi pehchaan bana rahe the...

Aage aapke replies ke baad...

frnds aapke replies aayenge to hi mein aage likh paoungi so plz keep repling...
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #18 on: September 19, 2009, 12:01:47 AM »
Hmm very nice,ab jaidi se aur likh sweet heart pliiiiiz. love4 tongue3
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Sammual
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«Reply #19 on: September 19, 2009, 08:25:50 PM »
Nice Aage Bhi Likho..
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poppoetry
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«Reply #20 on: September 21, 2009, 05:27:38 PM »
Hmm....intresting....jaldi likhiye dear shally ji
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k.shael
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«Reply #21 on: September 23, 2009, 08:52:27 AM »
Thanx for ur replies frnds..

Aage..


Restaurent ka bil pay kiya aur ye sab bahar aa gaye, Dev ne byic nikali aur apne dost ko bola chalo aab chalte hai warna late ho jayenge..par Dev ke dost ka to aabhi mann hi nahi tha, usne Dev se kaha ki plz tum iski dost ( Raagini ) ko ghar chod do, ham dono thodi der me ghar aa jayenege..Dev ne kaha yaar ye theek nahi hai, aab unn dono ko bhi jane de aur ham bhi chalte hai, to Dev ka dost bola kya tu mere liye itna bhi nahi kar sakta, tu plz meri G.F. ki dost (Raagini) ko ghar tak drop kar de, ham log thodi hi der me aa jayenege..Dev ne byic start ki aur Raagini piche ki seat par beth gayi, Dev ne use bola ki plz pakad ke bethna mujhe byic tez chalane ki aadat hai, phir bhi Raagini ne side se pakad liya, shayad wo bhi pehli baar kisi anjaan ladke ke sath byic pe baithi thi, raste me Dev ne ek do baar baat shuru bhi ki par Raagini kuch jyada nahi bol paayi, raste me ek jagah Dev ne break lagayi to Raagini Dev ki pheet se lag gayi, dono ko thoda bura feel hua, aur phir Dev ne byic ki speed slow kar di, Aur Raagini ko uske ghar ke bahar main road pe utar diya, byic se utarte hi Raagini ne use thnx kaha, aur chali gayi, Dev use 2 min. jaate hue dekhta raha, Phir Dev apne ghar aa gaya, ghar pe aake usne comp. on kiya aur songs laga diye, aaj pehli baar Dev ki khushi uski aankhon se jhalak rahi thi, aur wo khud me hi khoye ja raha tha..khair thodi der baad uske dost ka call aayi ki wo log bhi apne apne ghar aa gaye hai aur usne Dev ko thanx bola..Dev ne kaha it's ok, aur sath hi ye bhi keh diya ki tu subah gahr aana mujhe tujhse koi kaam hai uske dost ne poocha bhi par phir bhi Dev ne kaha ki tum bass subah gahr aa jana,,uske dost ne kaha theek hai..


Aage..

Aapke replies ke baad..frnds aapke replies bahut kam aa rahe hai..why so, kya aap logo ko story pasandh nahi aa rahi..

plz keep repling

Shally.
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«Reply #22 on: September 23, 2009, 01:34:16 PM »
Hamein to bahut acchi lag rahi hai ye story.....bas aap jaldi jaldi likhiye Shally ji Thumbs UP
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Rishi Agarwal
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«Reply #23 on: September 23, 2009, 01:49:28 PM »
i like it shally ji aage likho plzzzzzzb bahut acchi lag rhi h story plz itna mat tarasayo shally ji plzzzzzz
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #24 on: September 23, 2009, 09:54:56 PM »
Very nice story Shally ji,jaldi se aur likh. Applause Applause Applause Applause Thumbs UP
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #25 on: September 27, 2009, 08:09:03 AM »
WOW INTERESTING .. wHAT NEXT Huh?
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Sammual
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«Reply #26 on: September 27, 2009, 09:50:22 PM »
Very Nice Shally Ji.Jaldi Se Aage Bhi Likho..
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k.shael
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«Reply #27 on: September 29, 2009, 05:04:29 AM »
Thanx friends for showing interest in this story..

Aage..


Jaise ki Dev ne apne dost ko ghar aane ko bola tha, wo subah Dev ke job par jaane se pehle hi ghar aa gaya..Dev ki mumy ne unn dono ko Tea di aur wo dono dost dev ke kamre me beth kar baatein karne lage..Dev ne har baat me kal ke meeting ko hi le aata, wo kabhi apni dost ki G.F. ki baat karta kabhi uss ladki Raagini ki, 1 ghanta wo u hi baat karte rahe, Dev ka dost hairaan tha ki Dev jo kisi ladki ka naam bhi mooh pe nahi laata aaj unn dono ki dil khol kar baatein kiye ja raha hai, usne poochna bhi chaha par phir u hi kuch soch kar chup reh gaya..phir jab wo jaane laga to Dev ne bola ki agar tujhe dobara apni G.F. se milne jaana ho to behichak mere ko bol dena..usne kaha theek hai..Dev ne ek baar use jaate jaate phir se darwaje par rok liya kaha meri baat sun..aur phir pata nahi kyun achanak chup ho gaya..kehne laga bass kuch nahi bye karne ko bol raha tha aur hass pada..aab Dev bhi utha khane ka tifin liya aur job pe chala gaya..job par jakar bhi use Raagini yaad aati rahi, wo kal ki uski surat aur ehsaso ka chah kar bhi bhula nahi paa raha tha..wo baar hasti hui si uski aankhon ke samne aa jati, khair Dev ne kaam me dil lagane ki koshish par ye kya aaj to kuch bhi nahi kar paa raha tha, wo khud se thoda kheejh sa gaya ki ye kya ho raha hai..use kuch samajh nahi aa raha tha..aakhir wo utha shaam ke 5pm par aur ghar aa gaya..ghar aa ke dekha bache pad rahe the didi ke pass..behno ne bulaya Dev aaj itni jaldi kaise to usne bola u hi didi kuch khaas kaam nahi tha office me to chala aaya..socha aap logo ke sath beth jaunga, didi ne bola theek hai haath mooh dho ke, Tea maggi bana le aur aa ja yahi beth pass me..utha hath mooh dhoya aur kitchen me jakar maggi aur Tea banayi aur pass aa ke beth gaya..jab didi ne 1 chamach maggi li to kaha Dev kya hua hai tujhe aaj tu masala dalna hi bhool gaya..namak bhi nahi hai isme..ohh sorry didi mein aabhi theek kar deta ho, kehne lagi koi baat nahi tu beth me karke laati ho, wo maggi theek karke le aayi..aake Chai ka cup uthaya to dekha usme cheene hi nahi hai..hasne lag gayi, kehne lagi mumy aab Dev ki shaadi kar do, ye sab kaam bhool gaya hai bhabhi aayegi to atleast hame maggi bina namak ke aur Tea bina cheeni ke to peeni nahi padegi..Dev ne bhi chakh ke dekhi to sach me cheeni nahi thi..phir mumy ko bola dusri chai ke liye..Dev ko thodi sharam si lagi aur wo uth ke apne kamre me chala gaya..songs lagaye aur jaane kab wahi sofe par hi so gaya..masoom sa chehra..aur pyaari si banda aankhein jaise koi bacha sapno ki duniya me u hi kho gaya aise lag raha tha, jab bache tutian par se gaya to behno ne dekha ke Dev aise soya pada hai to pyaar se ser ke niche pillow rakh diya aur sir pe hath pher ke matha choom liya, sach me kya shiddat sa pyaar tha wo..phir 8pm par jab papa aaye to Dev ko uthaya dekha use fever tha..sab hairaan ki aaj ise kya ho gaya hai..uthaya dawayi mangakar di, chai di, par Dev wo to hosh hi nahi kar raha tha khair use wahi leta rehne diya..aur khana banane lag gaye..khana bana ke uthaya to fever kam ho gaya tha..mooh hath dho ke Dev kitchen me aa gaya..mumy ne poocha aaj kuch bahar se khaya tha kya.kya hua hai tujhe aaj..to dev u hi chup sa raha phir kehne laga kuch nahi bass u hi..shayad thak gaya ho, sabne khana khaya aur Dev ko phir se dawayi di aur sab so gaye..Dev jagta raha, t.v. dekhne laga, par aab bhi uske dil dimaag khayalo se Raagini na hatti..t.v. dekhte time bhi uska dhayan sirf usi me tha..phir usne t.v band kiya aur so gaya..


aage aapke replies ke baad..

Shally.

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Rishi Agarwal
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«Reply #28 on: September 29, 2009, 05:55:58 AM »
bahut acchi h story shally plz aage jaldi se likho aap
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Sammual
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«Reply #29 on: September 30, 2009, 07:31:34 PM »
Very Interesting Woww  Applause Applause Applause. Aage Bhi Likho Shally Ji.
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