~~"Dev Ki Love Story by Shally."~~

by k.shael on September 15, 2009, 06:10:49 AM
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«Reply #45 on: December 31, 2009, 07:38:36 AM »
Shukriya dosto sarahne ke liye..

Aab Aage..


Dev aur Raagini dono hi pyaar ke haseen raste pe apna pehla kadam rakh chuke the, aur bahut khush bhi the, khush ho bhi kyu na..aakhir dono ke ek bahut hi behtreen partner jo mil gaye the, roop-rang ke malik, aur aache nek insan the dono..

dekhte hi dekhte unka ye pyaar aur bhi pakka hota gaya, aab to jaise din hawa me jhoole ke jaise lagte pata hi nahi lagta kab din chadta aur kab beet jata..bass baatein aur baatein, har waqt phone..aab to ye aalam tha ki khana bhi ek dusre ko bata ke khate the,..uff itna pyaar..hahaha,

dekhte hi dekhte kab 8 mahine beet gaye pata hi nahi chala..isi beech Raagini ka birthday aaya..Dev ne sabkuch plan kiya hua tha..usne saaf bol diya tha Raagini ko ki iss din wo uske saath hi rahegi..raat ke 12am pe call aayi, Dev ka phone tha, Raagini ne phone pick. kiya to aawaj aayi, Happy Birthday to u my Sweet Darling, i love u a lott, i'm urs, only urs, & u r mine...

5-10 min. baat hui aur phir dono so gaye..subah uthte hi dev me ek nayi energy thi, wo dil se Raagini ke liye kuch karna chahta tha, uth ke nahaya dhoya aur breakfast karke kaam pe aa gaya, planning pehle hi kar li thi ki mein 2-3 ghante baad office se nikal ke Raagini ko college se pick kar loonga..Dev jaise hi college ke bahar pahuncha Raagini ko lene, usne dekha ki Raagini ke sath uski 2 friends bhi thi..jo sath me kuch ladko se baat karti hui aa rahi thi, unhi me se ek ladke ne aake, Raagini ko birthday wish kiya aur ek rose flower de diya..Raagini ne flower le liya..aur thanku bol ke baat karne lagi, tabhi uska dhayan gaya ki Dev byic le ke khada hai, aur dusri taraf Dev ye sab dekh raha tha, pata nahi kyu par aaj pehli baar use ek ajeeb se jalan mehsoos  hui, aisa laga jaise koi usse uski jaan ko khichne ki koshih ki, wo ek dam se gusse se bhar gaya, par kyunki Raagini ka birthday tha to gussa kar nahi paaya..uski khushi me kaafi farq aa gaya tha, jo rounak subah se chehre pe thi ek hi pal me gayab si ho gayi lagti thi..

khair raagini aayi aur usne Dev se hello ki, aur piche beth gayi, Dev use le ke ek Picture hall me aa gaya, usne movie ki ticket kharid rakhi thi, dono andar aa gaye picture dekhne lage..jahaan ragini dev ke iss surprize se khush thi, wahi Dev pyaar ke kho jaane ki aag me jala ja raha tha, reh-reh ke use uss ladke ka chehra aur wo Phool haste hue dikhte ki dekh tere hote hue bhi hamne teri Raagini ko choo liya..Dev beech me ek banawati sa pyaar dikhata raha Raagini ko, Raagini bhi kuch pareshan ho gayi ki itna bolne wale Dev ko kya hua aaj, Interwal hua to Dev ek dam se kheejh sa gaya, uska dil nahi lag paa raha tha, shayad jo gussa wo chupa raha tha wo andar se use uchaat kar raha tha..wo dono interwal ke waqt bahar aaye to dev ne bola Raagini ham kahin aur chale, Raagini ne poocha ki kya hua hai koi baat hai kya aaj mood theek nahi lag raha tumhara..
to Dev kuch nahi bola aur Raagini ko le ke ek Restaurent me aa gaya, Cake order kiya..aur Raagini ko bola ki cake kate, Raagini bhi aab zidd pe aad gayi, boli ki agar tum bataoge nahi to mein kuch nahi karongi, Dev ne bahut manaya par nahi maani, phir Dev ne bataya ki aaj jab uss ladke ne tumhe flower diya wo mujhe aacha nahi laga..mujhe laga jaise koi mere se meri jaan le raha hai, mein tumse bahut pyaar karta ho, mein ye sab nahi seh sakta..

Raagini ne apne hathon me Dev ka chehra liya aur pyaar se boli Dev me sirf tumhari ho, kisi aur ke kehne ya karne se kuch nahi hota, tum iss baat ko itna dil se kyu laga baithe ho, mujhe batate to sahi, wo to bass u hi ek dost ke naate flower de gaya..aur mujhe pyaar to sirf tumse hai na..

Aage aapke replies ke baad..

plz padiye aur bataiye ye story kaisi hai..

shukriya

Shally.

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arunsingh
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«Reply #46 on: January 02, 2010, 03:59:45 PM »
too Good....Pls Post the Next Repaly as early as posbl.
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #47 on: January 03, 2010, 06:30:52 AM »
Wonderful Story Shally Ji
Ab aage ka intezaar hai
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poppoetry
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«Reply #48 on: January 03, 2010, 10:00:34 AM »
bahut vadhiya.....aage ka intzaar
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arunsingh
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«Reply #49 on: March 08, 2010, 04:37:02 PM »
Intha ho gayi Intzaar Ki..

Sis Atlest fin's the Story..
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k.shael
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«Reply #50 on: March 09, 2010, 05:30:44 AM »
Aab Aage..thanx frnds padne aur saath dene ke liye

Raagini ki aisi baatein sunke dev ko aacha laga, aur use apni galti mehsoos hui, usne Raagini se sorry bola, Raagini pyaar se uske gale se lagg gayi, dono ne mil ke cake kata, aur khoob enjoy kiya, raste me aate aate dev ne ek mall pe byic roki, aur kaha ki yaar kuch saman lena hai, tum saath ho to tumhari bhi choice pata lag jayegi..Raagini boli late ho jayenge par dev ke aage uski ek na chali dono gaye mall me, Dev ne kuch saman kharida aur..men's section me chala gaya..Raagini khadi idhar udhar har cheez dekh rahi thi ki tabhi uska dhayan ek pujami suit pe pada..use kaafi aacha laga, par wo le nahi sakti thi, price tag dekh ke hi use andaja ho gyaa ki ye uski pahunch se bahar hai, Raagini suit dekh hi rahi thi ki achanak dev ne kandhe pe haath rakhke pucha kya dekh rahi ho, achanak dev ko dekh ke Raagini boli kuch nahi u hi, par Dev ko bhi samjhte der na lagi ki Raaginiko suit psand hai, wo dono niche ground floor pe aa gaye, Dev ne raagini ko bola tum chalo byic ke pass mein bill pay karke aaya, Dev wapis upar gaya aur wo suit pack karwa ke niche le aaya aur uska bhi bill banwa liya, dono Raagini ke ghar ke bahar road tak aa gaye, jahaan hamesha dev Raagini ko chodta hai, Raagini ne Dev ko pyaar se bye bola aur thnx bhi ki mera birthday bahut pyara raha aaj, Raagini mudi hi thi ki dev ne kalayi pakad ke kheench liya aur suit pakdate hue bola ye meri sweetheart ke liye, tumne mujhe bataya nahi par mujhe pata hai what u like, mein har wo cheez tumhare kadmo me rakh doonga jiski tumhe chah ho, i love u, Raagini itni khush thi ki aankhon se aansoo nikal aaye, kuch bol hi nahi paayi, bass  Dev ka matha chumaa aur bol diya dev i love u 2...

Raagini chali gayi aur dev bhi ghar aa gay, Raagini ke ghar pe uske birthday ki ek choti si party thi, bass ghar ke kuch log, Raagini ne wahi suit jo dev ne le ke diya nikala aur pehan ke tyaar ho gyai, aur sab ke mooh pe yahi baat thi ki Raagini tum to aaj pari lag rah ho, itni pyaari smile ke saath..


Aage aapke replies ke baad..plz frnds reply karna aur mujhe batana jaroor ki kaisi lag rahi hai ye love story...

isme aabhi aur bahut se mod baaki hai, zaldi bataiye taaki mein zaldi likh sakoo

thnx

Shally.
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arunsingh
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«Reply #51 on: March 09, 2010, 11:15:09 AM »
Life ke kuch Palo ka Halka Sa Tuch.. Accha Laga..

Pls Shaly.. Post next Replay..

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k.shael
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«Reply #52 on: March 11, 2010, 05:37:36 AM »
Shukriya dosto,

Aab Aage,


din aise beet rahe the jaise bass sapno ki duniya ke pal-chin, pyaar tha ki bhadta hi ja raha tha aur dooriya kam nahi hor rahi thi, Dev ko kaam ke silsile me kuch dino ke liye city se bahar jana tha, usne ph. pe Raagini ko pehle hi bata diya tha, par jab jaane ka din aaya to Raagini ka ro-ro ke bura haal, Dev ne bahut smjhaya sweetheart thode din ki baat hai jaldi aa jaunga, par pyaar itna bhad chuka tha ki Raagini ko door rehna bilkul b pasandh na aya, phir bhi Dev ne pyaar se manaya aur bola chalo tum hi mujhe station chod aao, Raagini gayi apni friend ke saath chodne, aakhein bhari hui thi, aur dev masti majak se use manane me laga tha, horn hua aur train chal padi, Raagini ne dev ka hath pakda aur boli dev plz mat jao na, tum niche utar jao dekho train chal padi dev utar jao na, dev mein akele nahi reh paoungi, dev pyaar se raagini ko dekhe jaa raha tha, aur dekhte hi dekhte Dev aakhon se ojhal ho gaya, train ja chuki thi, aur Raagini aab bhi track ko dekhe ja rahi thi, ki shayd dev na gaya ho, par dev ki majboori thi kaam tha so jana to tha, Raagini uski saheli ghar pe aa gaye, kaafi udaas thi raagini, rote rote apne kamre me so gayi, jaggi to sham ke 6pm the, uthi to phir dhayan aaya ki dev chala gaya phir se udaas, par udaasi door karne ke liye dev tha na, kareeb 1 ghante baad hi dev ka ph. aaya ki wo pahunch gaya hai, pyari pyari baatein kar ke usne Raagini ko mana liya, aab khush thi wo, muskurahat lout aayi thi, par dil me kahi ek kasak thi ki dev yahan nahi hai, kaam ke beech se bhi dev time nikal ke Raagini se baat karta rehta, use love ke msgs. bhejta rehta taaki Raagini ka dil laga raha...inn sab baaton se bilkul clear tha ki wo Raagini se bahut pyaar karta tha,,par chahta tha ki wo iss doori ko sahe, taaki kal ko koi pareshani na ho...aur aab to 2-3 dino ki baat thi dev wapis aane wala tha...

Aage aapke replies ke baad..

Shally.
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arunsingh
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«Reply #53 on: March 19, 2010, 11:31:22 AM »
Spln'did.....

awesome..Nice..harttouching..Romantic..
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Tanha(Saurabh)
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«Reply #54 on: May 06, 2010, 02:03:02 PM »
nice part of story... too gud shally ji....
humne to lagta hai sab miss kar diya hai. shuru se padhna padegi sare parts.
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arunsingh
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«Reply #55 on: July 06, 2010, 01:31:30 PM »
SHaily Ji,,

Its 54 Days over ..
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Sky Blue
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«Reply #56 on: July 20, 2010, 03:58:45 AM »
shally ji....
STORY aage toe bariyay......
v r waiting 4 dat
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asif biswas
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«Reply #57 on: September 03, 2010, 02:46:41 PM »
mujhay aapki kahani acchi lag rahi hai shally ji but main jaanta hoo kya hoga is kahani mein shayad uski premika mar jaayegi aur yahi kahani ka agla mod ho sakta hai kyunki isse dev ko lagega ki jo duriya wo bana raha hai apni girlfriend ke bich kahi wo asal mein hi door na ho jaaye and pls pls send other parts of this story .
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arunsingh
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«Reply #58 on: October 06, 2010, 08:00:31 PM »
Shaily,,

I think U dont wanted to finsh this story...

Seriously Its....Huh?Huh???
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #59 on: December 17, 2010, 06:17:26 AM »
Shally Ji
It's more then 9 months now
Kahani aage ba.dti hi nahi
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