Likhiye 2 lines jo dil ka dard bayaa.n karde"by Shally.

by k.shael on July 17, 2009, 11:09:27 AM

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k.shael

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«Reply #30 on: July 18, 2009, 05:06:12 AM »

Quote from: Pooja on July 17, 2009, 05:58:25 PM

bahoot khoob shally, Salma, Lil bro and Sarvesh ji... bahoot acha likha hai app sab ne.

dard ne dikha diya dunia ka asal chehra
warna jee rahe the, ek nakli si dunia main hum

Bahut bahut shukriya Pooja didi, yahaan aane ke liye, aur wah waqai do line me aapne dard baya.n kar diya..u hi sath deti rahiyega didi..

will waiting to see more from u

Shally.


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Re: ~~Likhiye 2 lines jo dil ka dard bayaa.n karde"~~by Shally.

«Reply #31 on: July 18, 2009, 05:06:59 AM »

Quote from: Rajesh Harish on July 17, 2009, 07:28:45 PM

Bahut khoob Shally, Salma, Chote Bhai, Sarvesh Ji , Mann Ji aur Pooja Ji bahoot achchhi mehfil sajaai app sab ne.

Shukriya Rajesh Ji..

Aur aapne bhi janab bahut khoob likha hai dard ko,,!!...


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Re: ~~Likhiye 2 lines jo dil ka dard bayaa.n karde"~~by Shally.

«Reply #32 on: July 18, 2009, 05:08:59 AM »

Wow just seen the topic.. bahoot acha topic hai Shally..

Sabne bahoot dard bara aur bahoot acha likha hai... Bahoot khoob!

Zeene mea ab bhi dhadakta hai tera Pyaar eh Sanam
Kaash tere pyar k sang chali jaati meri ruh eh sanam !!


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k.shael

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Re: ~~Likhiye 2 lines jo dil ka dard bayaa.n karde"~~by Shally.

«Reply #33 on: July 18, 2009, 05:22:59 AM »

Quote from: Sophi on July 18, 2009, 05:08:59 AM

Shukriya Sophi Dear, Nice to see u here..well u writte so gud in painm i knw..!!but really these lines r touching..!!

Meri rooh ko bhi sakoo.n naseeb na hua,
Ek tere rooth ke jaane ke baad..

Shally.


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Re: ~~Likhiye 2 lines jo dil ka dard bayaa.n karde"~~by Shally.

«Reply #34 on: July 18, 2009, 05:47:33 AM »

Thank you sweetz...

Very beautiful and painful lines

Teri Judai ne mujhe har pal rualaya hai
kabi haske nikle ansoo tho kabi tere gum ne rulaya hai


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k.shael

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Re: ~~Likhiye 2 lines jo dil ka dard bayaa.n karde"~~by Shally.

«Reply #35 on: July 18, 2009, 05:50:46 AM »

Quote from: Sophi on July 18, 2009, 05:47:33 AM

Thank you sweetz...

Very beautiful and painful lines

Teri Judai ne mujhe har pal rualaya hai
kabi haske nikle ansoo tho kabi tere gum ne rulaya hai

thnx dear..a gud one again from ur side..

Bahut ashk baha chuke teri yaad me aab aur nahi,
Koi pathar kahe to kahe hame fikar nahi!!..

Shally.


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deepika_divya

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Re: ~~Likhiye 2 lines jo dil ka dard bayaa.n karde"~~by Shally.

«Reply #36 on: July 18, 2009, 05:54:56 AM »

thank you and Good one sweetz !

Tujhe mara dl Pattar lage , Pattar hi sahi
Par teri Chahat mea yea Har raat pigalta hai


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k.shael

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Re: ~~Likhiye 2 lines jo dil ka dard bayaa.n karde"~~by Shally.

«Reply #37 on: July 18, 2009, 05:57:10 AM »

Wah bahut khoob dear,

Chiraago.n ke sath sath aksar pigalta raha dil mera,
Janne ye saja thi ya tha majak ki tu ho ke bhi na tha mera..

Shally.


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Re: ~~Likhiye 2 lines jo dil ka dard bayaa.n karde"~~by Shally.

«Reply #38 on: July 18, 2009, 05:59:54 AM »

bahut achche doston khoob mehfil saja rakhi hai sophi shally aur azeem bhai

der tak rota raha lekar teri tasveer mein
dekh mujh patthar ko bhi kya khoob pighlaaya gaya


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Re: ~~Likhiye 2 lines jo dil ka dard bayaa.n karde"~~by Shally.

«Reply #39 on: July 18, 2009, 06:01:38 AM »

Tere Jaane par Naaz Dekhna, Kya Kya Aazaab Hoga
Mujhe Maut Bhi Na Aayegi, Aur Dard Be-Hisaab Hoga.....

____________Alam


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k.shael

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Re: ~~Likhiye 2 lines jo dil ka dard bayaa.n karde"~~by Shally.

«Reply #40 on: July 18, 2009, 06:02:19 AM »

Thanx Salil For coming here..aur bahut aacha likha hai..

Shally.


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k.shael

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Re: ~~Likhiye 2 lines jo dil ka dard bayaa.n karde"~~by Shally.

«Reply #41 on: July 18, 2009, 06:03:02 AM »

Quote from: Alam Qazi on July 18, 2009, 06:01:38 AM

Tere Jaane par Naaz Dekhna, Kya Kya Aazaab Hoga
Mujhe Maut Bhi Na Aayegi, Aur Dard Be-Hisaab Hoga.....

____________Alam

Bahut khoob Alam Ji, Thread pe aane aur likhne ke liye shukriya..


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deepika_divya

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Re: ~~Likhiye 2 lines jo dil ka dard bayaa.n karde"~~by Shally.

«Reply #42 on: July 18, 2009, 06:03:25 AM »

Bahoot bahoot khoob Shally

Tu saath nahi par teri yaad mere saath thi
par tu aakar usko bhi mujhse juda kar gaya...


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k.shael

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Re: ~~Likhiye 2 lines jo dil ka dard bayaa.n karde"~~by Shally.

«Reply #43 on: July 18, 2009, 06:04:38 AM »

Abhi dekh ke halat meri hanste hai ye log,
Baad mere jaane ke royenge behatasha ye log..

Shally.


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k.shael

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Re: ~~Likhiye 2 lines jo dil ka dard bayaa.n karde"~~by Shally.

«Reply #44 on: July 18, 2009, 06:05:53 AM »

Quote from: Sophi on July 18, 2009, 06:03:25 AM

Bahoot bahoot khoob Shally

Tu saath nahi par teri yaad mere saath thi
par tu aakar usko bhi mujhse juda kar gaya...

Shukriya & Bahut Khoob dear..

Juda karna hi tha meri sanso ko mujh se juda karta,
Khud ko door karke kyun mujhe jinda laash bana gaya tu..

Shally.


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