~~"BASS BHOOL JAO MUJHE"~~by Shally.

by k.shael on July 07, 2009, 04:19:29 AM
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«Reply #30 on: July 14, 2009, 10:45:32 AM »
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Wah Wah Shally Dear.. Kya Baat hai.. Dard Ko Bakhoobi Bayan Kiya hai.. aapki Gazal Ko Padh kar Aisa Laga Ki Jaise Koi Bebas Ya Khud se Niraash Koi Insaan hai.. jo Sab se Door Chale Jaana chahta hai..!!

Insaan Ke Is Dard Ko Mehsoos kar Behad Hi Umda Alfaaz Pesh kiye hain aaapne.. Aur Lafzon Ka Chayan Bhi Lajawab hai.. Bahut Bahut Khoooooooob.... Applause Applause


Daad Kubool Karen...  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


**~** Mann **~**

Shukriya Mann Ji, Aapne to poori ghazal ko aache se samjh liya..

Shally.
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«Reply #31 on: July 14, 2009, 10:46:44 AM »
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Nawab Ji,

Bravo ! Excellent ! Applause Applause Applause

Lagta hai tumhara ek ghazlon ka show jaldi he organize karna padega Usual Smile

Keep it up Thumbs UP

Shukriya Nawab Ji, Aap thread par aaye hame bahut aacha laga.. notworthy

aur show jab organize karoge to uski ek ticket mujhe bhi dena plz.. Giggle

Shally.
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«Reply #32 on: July 14, 2009, 10:48:35 AM »
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really a awesome creation shally .....
some times we really feel tht .its not worth living and we r just a looser.u really expressed the feel ......keep it up dear


mere ashqon ko behne kii izazat nahin
is liye main dil hi dil main rota tha
mere saaye ko bhi tujhse milne kii izazat nahin
isliye main har raat tujhe yaad kar k sota tha

Shukriya Salil, U got the right meaning of my ghazal..& bahut khoob hai aapki ye lines bhi..

Shally.
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«Reply #33 on: July 14, 2009, 10:51:48 AM »
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Hello Shally Ji
Ghazal wakai achchhi hai, aapne apni shayari aur majboot kalam ka kamaal dikhaya hai.  Is bare me bahut kuchh Mann Saheb uper kah aaye hain.  Very good work, weldone.

Lekin itni nirasha bhi kisliye.  Sach kahen to ummeedon se bhari creations aap aur bhi achchhi likhti hain.  Aap positive attitude ki ghazals likhiye.  Ek filmi geet yaad aa raha hai--

Phool ban jaunga shart ye hai magar
apni zulfon me mujhko saja lijiye
Khwab ban jaungi shart ye hai magar
apni aankhon me mujhko basa lijiye

SARVESH RASTOGI

Shukriya Sarvesh Ji, Aapne apna keemti waqt hame diya..sarvesh sach kahoo.n to kaafi dino se khud ko dard bhare lafzo se door hi rakha tha, par kehte hai na jo cheez dil se lekar rooh tak utari ho use aap chod nahi sakte..isi liye kaafi dino baad ye ghazal post ki to u laga mano roo ko sakoon mila..

well mein jaroor koshish karoongi khumaar me likhte rehne ki..
song ki lines bahut hi pyaari lagi hame..

Shally.
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«Reply #34 on: July 14, 2009, 10:53:28 AM »
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Wow shally bahut hi acha likhi ho..yun likhte rah na...

Shukriya Poonam Didi, Kaafi dino baad aap mere kisi thread par aayi aacha laga..u hi sath deti rahiyega..

Shally.
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«Reply #35 on: July 14, 2009, 10:54:41 AM »
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Bahot hi khoob likha hai aapne Shael ji,
dard se sarabor aur behad achi kavita likha hai aapne
bahot khoob

Shukriya Kaash Ji, Sarahne ke liye, janab dard jab dil me bahut hai to lafzo me to utar hi aayega..

Shally.
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«Reply #36 on: July 14, 2009, 10:55:47 AM »
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waah Waah Bahoot bahoot khoob Shally bahoot hi gehra ehsaas pesh liya hai... Bahoot Khoob!

Shukriya Sophi dear, Sahi kaha aapne bahut gehra ehsaas hai dil ka bhui aur zindagi ka bhi..

Shally.
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«Reply #37 on: July 14, 2009, 11:00:20 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Bahut Khooooob Shally!!!

Itna Dard Hai iss Ghazal Mein Ke Kya Kahen...Bahut Maayusi Aur Gehre Ehsaas Hai Iss nazm Mein..

Har Ek Lafz Apni-Apni Dastaan Keh raha Tha...

Bahut Ache Dost!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


Iss Ghazal Ko padhkar Kuch likhna Chaahta Hoon...Umeed Karta Hoon,Aap Ko Aur Sab ko Pasand Aaye....


Dard Mein Rehkar Bhi Yuh Muskurayo Mat!!
Jo Zakhm Dikh hi Jaate Hai,Unhe Chupayo Mat!!

Inn Aankhon Ko Ab Log Pathar Samajhte Hai To Samajne Do,
Hai Itni Si Guzaarish Ke Inhe Ab Aur Rulao mat!!

Naseeb Ka Khel Hi Hai Ke Log Milte-Bichadte Hai,
Yeh Sab Jaante Hai,Kasoor kiska Tha Yeh Sunao Mat!!

Khud Ko Naamuraad, Nacheez Naa Kaho,
Umeed Ke Diye jalte Hai har insaan Ke dil mein,
Unhe Iss Kadar Bujhayo Mat!!

Raah-E-Mohabbat Asaan Nahi Hai "Shally"
Jis Raah Paar Koi Manzil hi Nahi,
Uss Raah Par Apne Kadmon ko Yuh Jamaao Mat!!

Jo Baat Dil Se Nikal kar Zubaan Par Aa kar Rukh jaaye,
Keh Bhi Do!! Baaton Ko Apni Zubaan Tale Dabaao Mat!!

Jo Shaks Tera Ho Kar Bhi Tera Naa Ho Saka,
Usse To Dooriyan hi Bhali hai,
Uss Shaks Ko Paas Apne Kabhi Bulaao mat!!

"Khwaish" Kehta Hai Ke Teri Iss nazm mein Dard bahut Tha Eh dost!!
Par Zindagi Kabhi Yuh Tanha Kisi Ki Bhi Kat Thi nahi,
Jhooti Tasalliyon se Apne Dil ko Yuh Behlaao Mat!!


Shukriya Khwaish Ji, thread ko padne aur sarahne ke liye..!!!

Aur wah wah wah kya khoob lines add ki hai aapne, meri ghazal ko takkar deti ye lines mere lafzo ko bhi feeka kar gayi bahut hi umda likha aapne..sach me bahut koshish ki par inn lines ka jawab nahi likh paa rahi hoo.n maafi ki haqdaar hoo.n!!!!..

Shally.
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