~~"BASS BHOOL JAO MUJHE"~~by Shally.

by k.shael on July 07, 2009, 09:49:29 AM
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Dil me yaad banakar na sajao mujhe,
Ek pathar ki tarah pairo se thukrao mujhe,

Hai gujarish ki na hasao hothon ko,
Ched ke koi dard bhari baat rulao mujhe,

Hoo.n bahut mella sa insaan mein,
Kahiin door jangal me akela chod aao mujhe,

Na rakho mere naam ko khud me shamil,
Namuraad, Nacheez naam dekar bulao mujhe,

Nazar lagne se bachana hi hai to,
Badnaseeb naam ka kala tikka lagao mujhe,

Ta-umar na rona kahiin meri khatir Shally,
Dafna kar, sula kar, kabr me bass bhool jao mujhe..

Shally.
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«Reply #1 on: July 07, 2009, 09:56:22 AM »
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Bahut khoob Shally Ji
N nice presentation
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«Reply #2 on: July 07, 2009, 09:57:03 AM »
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Wow Shally ji,marvelous,very beautiful creation,kamaal ke likhti hai aap,
 icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley :love4:excellent.
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«Reply #3 on: July 07, 2009, 09:59:07 AM »
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Behad Dard Bhari Hai Ghazal Tumhaara, Kamaal Ka Likha Hai Yaar, Bohat Achche,.
Yunhi LIkhte Rehna, May Allah Bless You,.
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«Reply #4 on: July 07, 2009, 10:01:33 AM »
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Shally, bahut khoob likha hai,accha laga padke
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«Reply #5 on: July 07, 2009, 10:15:31 AM »
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kya baat hai shallyji....

bahut hi badiya likha hai aapne.

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«Reply #6 on: July 07, 2009, 10:25:05 AM »
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Nice response Cara Ji
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«Reply #7 on: July 07, 2009, 12:20:43 PM »
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Wah Wah Shally Dear.. Kya Baat hai.. Dard Ko Bakhoobi Bayan Kiya hai.. aapki Gazal Ko Padh kar Aisa Laga Ki Jaise Koi Bebas Ya Khud se Niraash Koi Insaan hai.. jo Sab se Door Chale Jaana chahta hai..!!

Insaan Ke Is Dard Ko Mehsoos kar Behad Hi Umda Alfaaz Pesh kiye hain aaapne.. Aur Lafzon Ka Chayan Bhi Lajawab hai.. Bahut Bahut Khoooooooob.... Applause Applause


Daad Kubool Karen...  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


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«Reply #8 on: July 07, 2009, 01:24:20 PM »
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Nawab Ji,

Bravo ! Excellent ! Applause Applause Applause

Lagta hai tumhara ek ghazlon ka show jaldi he organize karna padega Usual Smile

Keep it up Thumbs UP
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«Reply #9 on: July 07, 2009, 02:18:49 PM »
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really a awesome creation shally .....
some times we really feel tht .its not worth living and we r just a looser.u really expressed the feel ......keep it up dear


mere ashqon ko behne kii izazat nahin
is liye main dil hi dil main rota tha
mere saaye ko bhi tujhse milne kii izazat nahin
isliye main har raat tujhe yaad kar k sota tha
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«Reply #10 on: July 07, 2009, 02:37:01 PM »
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Hello Shally Ji
Ghazal wakai achchhi hai, aapne apni shayari aur majboot kalam ka kamaal dikhaya hai.  Is bare me bahut kuchh Mann Saheb uper kah aaye hain.  Very good work, weldone.

Lekin itni nirasha bhi kisliye.  Sach kahen to ummeedon se bhari creations aap aur bhi achchhi likhti hain.  Aap positive attitude ki ghazals likhiye.  Ek filmi geet yaad aa raha hai--

Phool ban jaunga shart ye hai magar
apni zulfon me mujhko saja lijiye
Khwab ban jaungi shart ye hai magar
apni aankhon me mujhko basa lijiye

SARVESH RASTOGI
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«Reply #11 on: July 07, 2009, 02:53:36 PM »
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wah bahoth qoob shally ji .. umda peshkash .. likhte raho yunhi .. !!

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Wow shally bahut hi acha likhi ho..yun likhte rah na...
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«Reply #13 on: July 07, 2009, 03:34:38 PM »
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waah Waah Bahoot bahoot khoob Shally bahoot hi gehra ehsaas pesh liya hai... Bahoot Khoob!
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«Reply #14 on: July 07, 2009, 04:30:34 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Bahut Khooooob Shally!!!

Itna Dard Hai iss Ghazal Mein Ke Kya Kahen...Bahut Maayusi Aur Gehre Ehsaas Hai Iss nazm Mein..

Har Ek Lafz Apni-Apni Dastaan Keh raha Tha...

Bahut Ache Dost!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


Iss Ghazal Ko padhkar Kuch likhna Chaahta Hoon...Umeed Karta Hoon,Aap Ko Aur Sab ko Pasand Aaye....


Dard Mein Rehkar Bhi Yuh Muskurayo Mat!!
Jo Zakhm Dikh hi Jaate Hai,Unhe Chupayo Mat!!

Inn Aankhon Ko Ab Log Pathar Samajhte Hai To Samajne Do,
Hai Itni Si Guzaarish Ke Inhe Ab Aur Rulao mat!!

Naseeb Ka Khel Hi Hai Ke Log Milte-Bichadte Hai,
Yeh Sab Jaante Hai,Kasoor kiska Tha Yeh Sunao Mat!!

Khud Ko Naamuraad, Nacheez Naa Kaho,
Umeed Ke Diye jalte Hai har insaan Ke dil mein,
Unhe Iss Kadar Bujhayo Mat!!

Raah-E-Mohabbat Asaan Nahi Hai "Shally"
Jis Raah Paar Koi Manzil hi Nahi,
Uss Raah Par Apne Kadmon ko Yuh Jamaao Mat!!

Jo Baat Dil Se Nikal kar Zubaan Par Aa kar Rukh jaaye,
Keh Bhi Do!! Baaton Ko Apni Zubaan Tale Dabaao Mat!!

Jo Shaks Tera Ho Kar Bhi Tera Naa Ho Saka,
Usse To Dooriyan hi Bhali hai,
Uss Shaks Ko Paas Apne Kabhi Bulaao mat!!

"Khwaish" Kehta Hai Ke Teri Iss nazm mein Dard bahut Tha Eh dost!!
Par Zindagi Kabhi Yuh Tanha Kisi Ki Bhi Kat Thi nahi,
Jhooti Tasalliyon se Apne Dil ko Yuh Behlaao Mat!!
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