~~"TU JAB MUJHE SAJATA HAI"~~by Shally.

by k.shael on June 17, 2009, 08:09:14 AM
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Tu jab bhi karib ho mere, dil ek sakoo.n sa paata hai,
Din ki baat kya karoo.n tu to khawabo me bhi pyaar jatata hai,

Bahut rishte bikhar gaye ret ki tarah muthi me se,
Jaane kyun tera ek rishta mujhe rabb ka tohfa nazar aata hai,

Athkheliyaan si karti hai julfe meri tere kandhe par,
Masoom si gudiya lagti hoo.n mein tu jab bhi mujhe sajata hai,

Uss pal se behad nafrat hoti hai mujhe har baar,
Jab kaam me uljh kar tu mere wajood ko andekha kar jaata hai,

Hoke diwaani jhoomne ko kahe mera bawra jiya,
Tu jab mujhe karib apne mohabbat bhare alfaazo se bulata hai,

Jaroori nahi hai ki har rishte ka naam ho Shally,
Usse tera jism, naam, janam ka nahi rooh ka pavitar naata hai.

Shally.
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«Reply #1 on: June 17, 2009, 08:31:23 AM »
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Yeh 4 Line aapki Tareef Me shally.. Usual Smile

Teri Qalam Se Mohabbat Ki, Khushboo Si aati Hai,
Kaagaz Par Chalti Hai, To Lajawab Likh Jati Hai....

Yeh Kamaal Tera Hai Ya Tere Dil Ka Hai "Shally",
Ke Tu Kuch Sochti Bhi Hai, To Gazal Ban Jati Hai....



Behad Romantic Likha hai Shally.. Bahut Hi pyaara.. Likha Hai...!!Maza aa gaya padh kar... Bahut Bahut Khoooob.. daad Kubool karen.. !! Applause Applause


 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


**~** Mann **~**


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«Reply #2 on: June 17, 2009, 08:43:12 AM »
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   BAHUT KHOOOB SHALLT JI,
AAPKA QALAAM BHI LAJAWAB HAI MANN JI
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«Reply #3 on: June 17, 2009, 09:00:12 AM »
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bahut ache Shally ji.........kitni kashish h in lafjon me......bahut hi khub Shally ji......aapko yha dekhkar bahut khushi hui.....Khuda aapko sahetmand rakhe Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #4 on: June 17, 2009, 09:07:54 AM »
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   BAHUT KHOOOB SHALLT JI,
AAPKA QALAAM BHI LAJAWAB HAI MANN JI


Shukriya Shabana Ji.. Usual Smile Usual Smile


**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #5 on: June 17, 2009, 09:36:40 AM »
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Yeh 4 Line aapki Tareef Me shally.. Usual Smile

Teri Qalam Se Mohabbat Ki, Khushboo Si aati Hai,
Kaagaz Par Chalti Hai, To Lajawab Likh Jati Hai....

Yeh Kamaal Tera Hai Ya Tere Dil Ka Hai "Shally",
Ke Tu Kuch Sochti Bhi Hai, To Gazal Ban Jati Hai....



Behad Romantic Likha hai Shally.. Bahut Hi pyaara.. Likha Hai...!!Maza aa gaya padh kar... Bahut Bahut Khoooob.. daad Kubool karen.. !! Applause Applause


 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


**~** Mann **~**




Shukriya Mann Ji, Aapka comment hamesha se ek prerna deta hai likhne wale ko, ye nahi ki ham umda shayar hai par jiss tarah se aap taarif karte ho lagta hai ki mehnat kabool hui..

aapki 4 lines bahut pyari hai.!!!shukriya

u hi saath dete rahiyega!!!..

Shally.
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«Reply #6 on: June 17, 2009, 10:15:34 AM »
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Wah wah Shally ji,wonderful,very nice creation. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley love4
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«Reply #7 on: June 17, 2009, 11:11:15 AM »
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bahut achche shally dear...khoob likha hai tumne ............sabne itni taareef kar di hai ..kii main kuch kahoon toh suna sa hi lagega magar bahut achcha likha hai
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«Reply #8 on: June 17, 2009, 12:57:34 PM »
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Bohot Khoob Shally..Good work.
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«Reply #9 on: June 17, 2009, 04:37:54 PM »
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Wow Shally this one is really Fantastic..!! Bahoot hi Khoob Likha hai . too Good.
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«Reply #10 on: June 17, 2009, 07:02:31 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Yeh ek behad khubsoorat ghazal hai Shally jee...Bahaut acha likha hai...

Teri Qalam Se Mohabbat Ki, Khushboo Si aati Hai,
Kaagaz Par Chalti Hai, To Lajawab Likh Jati Hai....

Yeh Kamaal Tera Hai Ya Tere Dil Ka Hai "Shally",
Ke Tu Kuch Sochti Bhi Hai, To Gazal Ban Jati Hai....

**~** Mann **~**
Bahaut achi tarha tariff ki hai Mann bhaijan...
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«Reply #11 on: June 18, 2009, 08:24:13 AM »
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   BAHUT KHOOOB SHALLT JI,
AAPKA QALAAM BHI LAJAWAB HAI MANN JI

Shukriya Shab Dear,

Pehli baar aapko apne thread me dekha, aacha laga

Shally.
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«Reply #12 on: June 18, 2009, 11:06:00 AM »
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Welcome back Shally Ji
Bahut khoob likha hai, wah wah
SARVESH RASTOGI
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«Reply #13 on: June 18, 2009, 11:08:16 AM »
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bahut hi umda shally ..fantastic

good work mann
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«Reply #14 on: June 20, 2009, 08:29:06 AM »
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Mashallah Ek Aur Behtareen Ghazal Pesh Ki Hai Shally Tumne, Bohat Achche,

Allah Tumhe Sehat Bakseh,.
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