~~"BASS BHOOL JAO MUJHE"~~by Shally.

by k.shael on July 07, 2009, 04:19:29 AM
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«Reply #15 on: July 07, 2009, 11:01:54 AM »
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Waah...Bohot Khoob Shally.....Na-ummeedi ke toofan se ladte hue kisi insaan ke jazbaat ko pesh kiya hai aapne...Bohot Khoob dear.  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #16 on: July 07, 2009, 11:03:28 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause

Bohot Khoob Khwaish, bohot hi zabardast reply....aur bohot bohot khoob Dost.
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«Reply #17 on: July 07, 2009, 12:27:28 PM »
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Wah Wah bahaut bahaut ghera ehsaas likha hai Shally...Itna dard bayan kiya hai ke kya kahoon... Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #18 on: July 07, 2009, 12:33:59 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Bahut Khooooob Shally!!!

Itna Dard Hai iss Ghazal Mein Ke Kya Kahen...Bahut Maayusi Aur Gehre Ehsaas Hai Iss nazm Mein..

Har Ek Lafz Apni-Apni Dastaan Keh raha Tha...

Bahut Ache Dost!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


Iss Ghazal Ko padhkar Kuch likhna Chaahta Hoon...Umeed Karta Hoon,Aap Ko Aur Sab ko Pasand Aaye....


Dard Mein Rehkar Bhi Yuh Muskurayo Mat!!
Jo Zakhm Dikh hi Jaate Hai,Unhe Chupayo Mat!!

Inn Aankhon Ko Ab Log Pathar Samajhte Hai To Samajne Do,
Hai Itni Si Guzaarish Ke Inhe Ab Aur Rulao mat!!

Naseeb Ka Khel Hi Hai Ke Log Milte-Bichadte Hai,
Yeh Sab Jaante Hai,Kasoor kiska Tha Yeh Sunao Mat!!

Khud Ko Naamuraad, Nacheez Naa Kaho,
Umeed Ke Diye jalte Hai har insaan Ke dil mein,
Unhe Iss Kadar Bujhayo Mat!!

Raah-E-Mohabbat Asaan Nahi Hai "Shally"
Jis Raah Paar Koi Manzil hi Nahi,
Uss Raah Par Apne Kadmon ko Yuh Jamaao Mat!!

Jo Baat Dil Se Nikal kar Zubaan Par Aa kar Rukh jaaye,
Keh Bhi Do!! Baaton Ko Apni Zubaan Tale Dabaao Mat!!

Jo Shaks Tera Ho Kar Bhi Tera Naa Ho Saka,
Usse To Dooriyan hi Bhali hai,
Uss Shaks Ko Paas Apne Kabhi Bulaao mat!!

"Khwaish" Kehta Hai Ke Teri Iss nazm mein Dard bahut Tha Eh dost!!
Par Zindagi Kabhi Yuh Tanha Kisi Ki Bhi Kat Thi nahi,
Jhooti Tasalliyon se Apne Dil ko Yuh Behlaao Mat!!

Wah Wah Wah Wah Khwahish dost...Bahaut bahaut acha reply tha yeh...dil se pada apke reply ko, dhadkano se samjha isse aur saanson ne apna liya...Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #19 on: July 07, 2009, 01:52:43 PM »
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very nice,,, shally ji,,

kyun us manzil ke naa pane ka gum hai tujhe,
jo manzil teri e-dost, kabhi thi hi nahin ,
nazar utha ke dekh to phir se un raaho par,
ek aur manzil hai ,jise tune dekha hi nahin...

.............................. Jiya ...
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«Reply #20 on: July 07, 2009, 02:06:19 PM »
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Bahut khoob Shally dear, Khwaish bhaiya and Jiya
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abdbundeli
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«Reply #21 on: July 07, 2009, 03:58:24 PM »
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Dil me yaad banakar na sajao mujhe,
Ek pathar ki tarah pairo se thukrao mujhe,

Hai gujarish ki na hasao hothon ko,
Ched ke koi dard bhari baat rulao mujhe,

Hoo.n bahut mella sa insaan mein,
Kahiin door jangal me akela chod aao mujhe,

Na rakho mere naam ko khud me shamil,
Namuraad, Nacheez naam dekar bulao mujhe,

Nazar lagne se bachana hi hai to,
Badnaseeb naam ka kala tikka lagao mujhe,

Ta-umar na rona kahiin meri khatir Shally,
Dafna kar, sula kar, kabr me bass bhool jao mujhe..

Shally.
Shally ji!
I'm happy, you're now swimming well on the waves of Poetic/rhythmic river of love! This is an admirable composition!
            - abd bundeli
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k.shael
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«Reply #22 on: July 08, 2009, 04:33:43 AM »
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Bahut khoob Shally Ji
N nice presentation

Shukriya Rajesh Ji, Aapne ghazal ko waqt diya aur saraha..aacha laga

Shally.
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k.shael
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«Reply #23 on: July 08, 2009, 05:23:59 AM »
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Wow Shally ji,marvelous,very beautiful creation,kamaal ke likhti hai aap,
 icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley :love4:excellent.

Shukriya Madhu dear, aap ne itna pasandh kiya ghazal ko..

Shally.
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«Reply #24 on: July 08, 2009, 05:43:20 AM »
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wow good work shally and Khwaish ji
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k.shael
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«Reply #25 on: July 08, 2009, 05:49:51 AM »
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Behad Dard Bhari Hai Ghazal Tumhaara, Kamaal Ka Likha Hai Yaar, Bohat Achche,.
Yunhi LIkhte Rehna, May Allah Bless You,.

Shukriya Azeem Ji, Ghazal ke dard ko samjhne aur sarahne ke liye..

Shally.
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«Reply #26 on: July 08, 2009, 08:14:28 AM »
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Shally, bahut khoob likha hai,accha laga padke

Shukriya Sager ji, Aapko padke aacha laga ye jankar hame khushi hui..

Shally.
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«Reply #27 on: July 08, 2009, 08:17:51 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Bahut Khooooob Shally!!!

Itna Dard Hai iss Ghazal Mein Ke Kya Kahen...Bahut Maayusi Aur Gehre Ehsaas Hai Iss nazm Mein..

Har Ek Lafz Apni-Apni Dastaan Keh raha Tha...

Bahut Ache Dost!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


Iss Ghazal Ko padhkar Kuch likhna Chaahta Hoon...Umeed Karta Hoon,Aap Ko Aur Sab ko Pasand Aaye....


Dard Mein Rehkar Bhi Yuh Muskurayo Mat!!
Jo Zakhm Dikh hi Jaate Hai,Unhe Chupayo Mat!!

Inn Aankhon Ko Ab Log Pathar Samajhte Hai To Samajne Do,
Hai Itni Si Guzaarish Ke Inhe Ab Aur Rulao mat!!

Naseeb Ka Khel Hi Hai Ke Log Milte-Bichadte Hai,
Yeh Sab Jaante Hai,Kasoor kiska Tha Yeh Sunao Mat!!

Khud Ko Naamuraad, Nacheez Naa Kaho,
Umeed Ke Diye jalte Hai har insaan Ke dil mein,
Unhe Iss Kadar Bujhayo Mat!!

Raah-E-Mohabbat Asaan Nahi Hai "Shally"
Jis Raah Paar Koi Manzil hi Nahi,
Uss Raah Par Apne Kadmon ko Yuh Jamaao Mat!!

Jo Baat Dil Se Nikal kar Zubaan Par Aa kar Rukh jaaye,
Keh Bhi Do!! Baaton Ko Apni Zubaan Tale Dabaao Mat!!

Jo Shaks Tera Ho Kar Bhi Tera Naa Ho Saka,
Usse To Dooriyan hi Bhali hai,
Uss Shaks Ko Paas Apne Kabhi Bulaao mat!!

"Khwaish" Kehta Hai Ke Teri Iss nazm mein Dard bahut Tha Eh dost!!
Par Zindagi Kabhi Yuh Tanha Kisi Ki Bhi Kat Thi nahi,
Jhooti Tasalliyon se Apne Dil ko Yuh Behlaao Mat!!



Fantastic.. Khwaish ji.. bahoot bahoot Khoob likha hai .. bahoot Khoob!
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k.shael
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«Reply #28 on: July 09, 2009, 05:46:40 AM »
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kya baat hai shallyji....

bahut hi badiya likha hai aapne.



Shukriya Cara Ji, Apna keemti waqt dene aur iss ghazal ko sarhne ke liye..

Shally.
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«Reply #29 on: July 09, 2009, 06:20:19 AM »
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wah kaya baat hai.. bahoot khoob shally
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